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The Chain-Ch. 8
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Tina peeled her bloodshot eyes open and groaned. The early morning sunlight streaming in through the windows was practically blinding in her hung over state. Her eyes slowly came into focus, finding two painkillers and a glass of water on the bedside table.
She reached out her arm, feeling for the giver of the thoughtful gift but found the other side of the bed to be empty. Tina frowned deeply, her brow furrowing, as the previous night’s activities came back to her.
She groaned again, mortified that she had gotten so intoxicated she passed out. The blonde felt nauseated, not from the alcohol still invading her pores but from what had happened, or rather what hadn’t happened last night.
Tina knew she had fucked up. Her nervousness about Bette being disappointed by her and then losing interest came off as casual disregard for the brunette’s feelings.
She couldn’t figure out how she had ended up in this bed, in these clothes, but she knew she had some explaining to do. Maybe even a little groveling.
Her head was throbbing. Sitting up slowly, she took the painkillers and washed them down with the cold water. She stumbled into Bette’s bathroom, searching for the mouthwash she had used the last time. Taking a swig, she swished it around and spit it out. It burned in her throat but she welcomed it, as she rinsed her mouth with water from the faucet. Making her way back to the bed, she rubbed her temples, closing her eyes to the sunlight and her humiliation.
“Morning,” came the sexiest voice Tina had ever heard. Slowly turning her head, she laid eyes on the stunning brunette who was holding two steaming cups of coffee in one hand, another large glass of water in the other.
Tina managed a smile and a weak hi as she struggled to pull herself up fully, and appear both less hung over and more appealing than she felt.
“How long have you been up?” asked the blonde, noticing the brunette looked impossibly fresh.
“Awhile,” came the simple reply. Bette set down the coffee and handed the water to the blonde. “Thought you might want this,” she offered kindly, her voice soft so as not to elevate Tina’s headache.
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That damn Alice, Bette needs to change her locks. PPS
I enjoy your writing and the manner in which you reveal the story. I have to agree w/Van. Forget about the shower but teeth brushing is an absolute must. Stale alcohol breath? Yuch!!! At least Tina didn’t vomit. ;-)
That’s a comment addressed to my fellow-readers: do you seriously need all the details of the morning toilet procedures? Why not to mention Tina’s full bladder? It could definitely spoil the pleasure of making out : )) Real Fantasies, just tell them that Tina had a sip od her coffee and it made her breath quite ok. Love your story! And what about my version about the chain of interruptions? :)
WOW… what a story… i just finished reading every chapter and loved it… shane will always be shane… and alice… well all of the fan fic writers love her for her timing… and you got her right… always where she shouldn’t be… so what to do now… does tina dive under the bed to hide… does shane drag her out of the house, knowing that tina was there… does bette run out there and tell them she was sick last night or she got lucky and didn’t want to share who she got lucky with… we all want answers… PLEASE… great story… waiting for more…
Enjoying YOUR story.Loved that Alice altho fecking annoying came crashing in.So typical of her and funny.Looking forward to how Bette and Tina deal with the interuption.PPS
Loving it.
Great update. Enjoying your story. Alice again always in the way its like pouring a barrel of ice water on those flames. Hope Bette can stop her from making it to the bedroom. Maybe tonight after work for them. Thanks.
Wonderful update, loved it. Thanks for updating but PPS
Thanks for the frequent updates. You had me going when I heard the magic words, “Bette, turn around”.
Bette doesn’t really owe Alice an explanation, but should she give her one, and not strangle her, as any reasonable person would be sorely tempted to do, she needs to 1) find out how Alice got in and 2) make sure that whatever way Alice used is immediately blocked. Forever and ever. ;P Thanks for the post! :)
And re: the morning breath thing, valid point, yes, but coffee breath is absolutely nothing to write home about.
Fuck Alice, ruin the moment ahahahha. This is so good and please post more, thanks!
Grrrrr Alice and her great timing…PPS thanks for the update :)
Frickin’ ALICE!!!
Lmbo awkward…….Alice always has the worse timing and that mouth of hers …..I think their true feelings need to come out sometime….can’t wait for you nc 17 …I know it will be great your writing is great ans this is like your first story on the site great updates and thanks for keeping them coming
Looking forward to the next chapter.PPS
Hmmm. I get its fiction & you are writing and its going great. It’s just me & my ‘hang ups’. How about a shower, brushing teeth etc? They always get home from work or wake up (this case from a drunken nite)& get to it. I’d be self conscious & not only that it’d turn me off. Hopefully I haven’t offended. Update soon. Thx
I nearly LOL at my desk at work. Darn that Alice…always showing up during the most inopportune time. There’s always the next chapter.
Great update thank you
I don’t comment on every chapter but I am still here… Perfectly imagining this image in my head. And it was heavenly until Alice’s voice screeching from down the hall prevent a grunt of disappointment. I’m not necessarily in it for the NC-17 although that will be nice I am sure. Its the way you portray the insecurities an whether gay or straight everyone has them. They want to be what that other person needs and truly desires. And as humans were not aware we can be everything someone wants let alone needs. Keep up the good work.
Why Alice, why. Worst timing. Another cold shower for Bette again. thank you for this chapter. Looking forward for you’re next
Omg so sexy..n then good ole Alice
It figures Alice would ruin the moment, but I agree with Van, a shower does wonders.