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The Chain-Ch. 8
The brunette crawled back into bed, taking her coffee and sipping it slowly. She gave a reassuring smile to the blonde, which Tina wasn’t sure she deserved. She drank the water quickly, hoping it would work it’s magic.
“Bette, I’m so sorry. I…I don’t know what happened. I had this…this plan for last night…and I just…I fucked it up. I can’t…I’m just…” Tina stammered, desperate for the brunette to tell her nothing had changed.
“T, you weren’t that bad, really. I just couldn’t get you to tell me where you lived so we came back here. You were actually pretty funny. Don’t worry about it.”
‘Bette wanted to drop me off at my house? Fuck. I did ruin this,” thought Tina, her shoulders drooping a little. Another thought came to her mind. “What do you mean I couldn’t tell you? I’m not sure if I want to hear this, but I think I need you to give me a recap of last night. Fuckin’ Spread Eagles.”
Bette cracked another smile. “Well…after your third shot and oh, about your fourth vodka club soda, you tried to dance with me but we didn’t quite make it to the dance floor. Ummm….you told me you wanted to make out with me, which isn’t a bad thing,” Bette said with a wink, hoping to alleviate the blonde’s embarrassed look.
Tina blushed, her stomach tightening. Bette grinned, seeing that some things didn’t change. The painkillers were setting in and the second glass of water had done wonders to help the way she was feeling.
“And you snored…a bit loudly I might add,” Bette teased, unable to resist.
Any relief Tina had felt flew out the window. Horrified, her hand went to her mouth, her eyes wide in panic. She coughed into her hand, setting her empty glass on the table and attempted to recover, looking away from the smirking brunette. “I…I do NOT snore,” she tried.
Bette threw her head back and laughed, “Oh, but you so do Ms. Kennard or should I say Miss Piggy?” Bette then mimicked the sound, exaggerating it greatly as she snorted deeply.
Tina’s eyes grew wide in amusement, biting her lip as she suppressed a smile. The blonde then pounced on top of the brunette, tickling her relentlessly. Bette continued to laugh heartily, both from teasing the blonde and the beautiful woman’s fingers moving against her sides.
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(19 votes, average: 4.89 out of 5)
That damn Alice, Bette needs to change her locks. PPS
I enjoy your writing and the manner in which you reveal the story. I have to agree w/Van. Forget about the shower but teeth brushing is an absolute must. Stale alcohol breath? Yuch!!! At least Tina didn’t vomit. ;-)
That’s a comment addressed to my fellow-readers: do you seriously need all the details of the morning toilet procedures? Why not to mention Tina’s full bladder? It could definitely spoil the pleasure of making out : )) Real Fantasies, just tell them that Tina had a sip od her coffee and it made her breath quite ok. Love your story! And what about my version about the chain of interruptions? :)
WOW… what a story… i just finished reading every chapter and loved it… shane will always be shane… and alice… well all of the fan fic writers love her for her timing… and you got her right… always where she shouldn’t be… so what to do now… does tina dive under the bed to hide… does shane drag her out of the house, knowing that tina was there… does bette run out there and tell them she was sick last night or she got lucky and didn’t want to share who she got lucky with… we all want answers… PLEASE… great story… waiting for more…
Enjoying YOUR story.Loved that Alice altho fecking annoying came crashing in.So typical of her and funny.Looking forward to how Bette and Tina deal with the interuption.PPS
Loving it.
Great update. Enjoying your story. Alice again always in the way its like pouring a barrel of ice water on those flames. Hope Bette can stop her from making it to the bedroom. Maybe tonight after work for them. Thanks.
Wonderful update, loved it. Thanks for updating but PPS
Thanks for the frequent updates. You had me going when I heard the magic words, “Bette, turn around”.
Bette doesn’t really owe Alice an explanation, but should she give her one, and not strangle her, as any reasonable person would be sorely tempted to do, she needs to 1) find out how Alice got in and 2) make sure that whatever way Alice used is immediately blocked. Forever and ever. ;P Thanks for the post! :)
And re: the morning breath thing, valid point, yes, but coffee breath is absolutely nothing to write home about.
Fuck Alice, ruin the moment ahahahha. This is so good and please post more, thanks!
Grrrrr Alice and her great timing…PPS thanks for the update :)
Frickin’ ALICE!!!
Lmbo awkward…….Alice always has the worse timing and that mouth of hers …..I think their true feelings need to come out sometime….can’t wait for you nc 17 …I know it will be great your writing is great ans this is like your first story on the site great updates and thanks for keeping them coming
Looking forward to the next chapter.PPS
Hmmm. I get its fiction & you are writing and its going great. It’s just me & my ‘hang ups’. How about a shower, brushing teeth etc? They always get home from work or wake up (this case from a drunken nite)& get to it. I’d be self conscious & not only that it’d turn me off. Hopefully I haven’t offended. Update soon. Thx
I nearly LOL at my desk at work. Darn that Alice…always showing up during the most inopportune time. There’s always the next chapter.
Great update thank you
I don’t comment on every chapter but I am still here… Perfectly imagining this image in my head. And it was heavenly until Alice’s voice screeching from down the hall prevent a grunt of disappointment. I’m not necessarily in it for the NC-17 although that will be nice I am sure. Its the way you portray the insecurities an whether gay or straight everyone has them. They want to be what that other person needs and truly desires. And as humans were not aware we can be everything someone wants let alone needs. Keep up the good work.
Why Alice, why. Worst timing. Another cold shower for Bette again. thank you for this chapter. Looking forward for you’re next
Omg so sexy..n then good ole Alice
It figures Alice would ruin the moment, but I agree with Van, a shower does wonders.