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Laws of attraction Chapter 4
Story written on September 16, 2013 by nikkifargus.
Shane found herself setting the table and preparing everything to be perfect, even she had lighted up some candles and bought wine.
Carmen’s arrival was getting near and Shane started to be a little anxious. “Weird” she thought, suddenly her heart was beating faster than usual. That was nothing like her, being nervous about a girl coming over, nothing like her. But again, Carmen wasn’t like any other girl, at least not for Shane. Carmen was special and she wanted her to know that.
Then there was a knock on the door.
Shane opened the door to a stunning Carmen. She wasn’t wearing those old baggy clothes as always and instead she had tight jeans that showed off her beautiful curves -those Shane had never been able to see- and a white tank top revealing her beautiful full breasts. Shane was mouth agape and though Carmen’s hair was tight as usual, she couldn’t believe her eyes. By now she already knew Carmen was beautiful, but stunning? That was a word she never thought for her.
– Ehm.. Shane? Are you gonna let me in?
– Huh?
– Or are we staying here? I can go for a sweater if you want to stay outside…
– Huh? No, no. Sorry. Come on in. I was…. Uhm… I… you look gorgeous…
– Oh, thank you. This is my work outfit actually. I hadn’t have time to change but I have my clothes here so if you give me a minute I can-
Shane snapped
– What? No! Why? ..Why don’t you stay like this?
– Shane I’ve been working with these clothes since early…
– It doesn’t matter. …Please? – Said Shane with pleadging eyes.
– You’re weird McCutcheon. I wouldn’t say weirdier than me, but definitely weird. Now let me see what you got for dinner… Oh wow, this looks beautiful Shane! And let me say, if I were into girls, this would be like the perfect date.
Shane blushed a little and found herself thinking about dates, Carmen and dates. “Has she ever been on a date? With who?” or “has she ever been kissed? by who?”.
Since they knew eachother, they would talk about almost everything but never something that deep like love. Well actually Shane had never talked about love with anybody, not even herself, and didn’t know why today she was thinking of it.


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