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Lover in the Dark; Chapter 8
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Chapter 8
As she was waiting for the private elevator to reach the top floor she looked again at her reflection on the mirrored wall making sure that her deep red lipstick didn’t smudge. She was never conscious about how she looked but she wanted to appear more attractive today. Well she wanted to look extra good today only in the eyes of one particular person and that person she would soon see in just a matter of seconds.
The blonde opted for a pair of Gucci grey power suit. Underneath was a white polka dot shirt, black Manolo Blahniks shoes and her hair was curled and loose. Every inch of her screamed power yet the ensemble made her look softer and more feminine. It was almost 1 in the afternoon and she was sure that Bette was already done with her lunch and probably sitting on her desk talking to James or doing something on the computer.
A smile slowly forming on her lips as the excitement started to build again and she thought she couldn’t wait to see the beautiful brunette.
She heard the high pitched ding of the elevator bell and the door opened to the 45th floor, she stepped out and her hazel eyes automatically searched for the caramel skinned beauty but surprisingly she was nowhere in sight. Tina saw James walking up to her
“Good afternoon Ms. Kennard!” he greeted smiling then took her bag
“Good afternoon James” said the blonde as she handed her bag over to James. Instead of going inside her office she stayed a little longer at her assistant’s desk while her eyes still looking for Bette.
“How’s everything this morning?”
“Everything’s good boss, the document that I put on your desk is the quarterly report from the finance department”
“Good, where’s Bette?”
“We had lunch at the canteen a while ago but I left her alone to go for smoke, she’s probably now on her way back here”
As if on cue, the elevator door opened, both Tina and James turned to its direction
“Oh here she is”
Tina was taken aback by what she saw that she almost didn’t hear what James had said because her attention was now focused on the two people stepping out of the elevator. She didn’t know if her eyes were playing tricks on her but she could see as clear as a day Bette and Tim were looking and smiling at each other.
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Just got back from my vacation and yes had a great time. Want to say thanks again to all who left their comments and would like to do individual shout out this time.
Vinzie—Nice to know you and thanks for breaking your silence, glad that you enjoyed the story and hope that you’ll like this new chapter too!
cellphone48—Hey cell! Nope no one was watching Tina’s apartment well not yet but having a boyfriend like Randall Wheeler that could be possible. Well someone was watching Bette when she got out of her car and while walking towards the law firm and I can tell you as early as now that Tim is kind hearted but he’s a broken man. You too, be blessed and be safe always and hope this new chappie can make your weekend better (-;
bettefortina—My pleasure and thanks so much for your continuous support!
Bibi28—Glad to know that you love the slow build up and thanks so much for leaving a comment, means a lot.
goyabeans4me—Oh yes you are but you need more patience (-;
buggs666—Nice to see you leaving a comment here buggsie, I gotta say I miss reading your beautiful poems.
Kenji— Knowing that you love this story inspire me to post, so thank you!
radleks – Hey my pleasure! I love how you think, I can say maybe Tina’s falling in love or maybe not I’ll let you decide haha! Regarding Tim being a competition this chapter will answer that, please enjoy!
magicspider60—This chapter will confirm if Tim is going to be Tina’s competition for Bette. Your next statement made me think nonetheless your comment is very much appreciated thanks!
Jalex—Thank you so much for leaving a comment! Yup did enjoy the vacation and so glad that you like this humble story. Yeah there was someone looking not at Tina but at Bette. Whoever it was you’ll know in the succeeding chapters (-;
Iyah—Before becoming a writer I was an avid reader once and I know how frustrating it is to wait for another post from my favorite writer but it was always worth the wait and I hope this one too. Thanks for your continuous support, really appreciate it girl!
Lipitora – You love the slow burn huh? Me too I think it’s even sexier than seeing Bette and Tina looking so sweaty and stinky (well not all the time) LoL! That bedroom scene is for me a break through in their relationship and the result may not be to everyone’s liking. Their feelings for each other are becoming deeper yet they didn’t want to admit it. Hopefully Bette can see that scar in Tina’s soul. As for Bette and Tim, well this chapter will probably answer some of your questions. Please enjoy!
azmama—You think so? Well let’s see… yup did enjoy the vacation very much. Thanks for always reading and commenting truly appreciate it azmama (-;
onthebrink—Yup the friend has good persuasion skills. Sorry for the cliffies you know I just want you all to want more, hope with this chapter I’ll be forgiven (-:
els73—You are most welcome and yeah they kissed, did you feel the electricity? (-;
wkm—my pleasure hope you’ll like this one too!
brinny—I love writing and I do it whenever the mood strikes me even while on vacation. Here’s more please enjoy! (-;
topcat—Sorry for the confusion, no one was watching Tina, well not yet but it was Bette who had someone watching her. Who that person was will be revealed in the succeeding chapters, hope you continue to stick around (-;
supershock—You’ll know in this chapter. Will Bette keep on fighting her feelings? Let’s see… please enjoy!
ut—You’re comment about Tina not being happy about seeing Bette with Tim is spot on. Glad that you love their first kiss, thanks for your always reading and leaving a comment!
avanred—Hey my friend thanks for the comment, that’s what I aim for. To bring out the sexiness in Bette and Tina even if with their clothes on and I’m glad that you approved! Enjoyed the vacation and thank you for undying support since the beginning (-:
didi1956—Me too, thanks for reading and commenting, cheers!
tibettenation1—Hey saw your comments on the previous chapters and glad that you were able to catch up! No need to feel anxious anymore, here’s another chapter and hope you’ll like this (-;
chasingdreams—I love how you think but I can’t reveal everything today just one at a time starting with this chapter, thanks for being a loyal reader!
I would like to think that what happened in Tina’s apartment has made a significant impact on Bette and Tina. Now in this chapter I’m expecting that this won’t be to everyone’s liking hence the R RATING, I want to say sorry in advance if this offends you but as always I welcome any kind of feedback just please be gentle (-; BTW I borrowed one scene from my other story Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr Old Virgin, if you read it then you’ll know which part I’m referring to. Well enough of me hope you’ll like this and please let me know what you think, thanks a bunch!
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Wow! How I wish that it was Bette instead of Erica. Tina is such a complicated woman. I love the confidence if Bette. Waiting for Tina’s reaction re: Bette and Shane’s friendship.
Thanks for this Chapter. Enjoyed it :)
I’m mad…i feel like Tina is cheating on Bette. Sounds crazy I know, but I thought she wanted Bette to be her 1st. She went thru all this trouble to stay incognito but she’s gonna sleep with a stranger that could possibly walk into her office as a client or might know Randall. Meanwhile Bette is in a holding pattern & Tina being rude to her. Get it together Tina! Thank you for posting. Those 9 pages went by too quickly.
Welcome back and thanks for the update. Hope you had a great time and have back refreshed to pen more of your tale. Tina is really confused about her feelings for Bette so she’s out picking up women in a bar? I thought she wanted her first time to be with Bette. I like that Bette made her decision about going to Shane’s birthday party. No doubt she will meet other women that find her attractive too. I think she will find out that her attraction for Tina is more of her true feelings. Tina must hurry and end her relationship with Randall because her life is getting complicated. Thanks for the shout out. PPS
Oh oh, this is not happening, like the others already said, Bette should be Tina’s first.
She is very complexed and confused, but her behavior towards Bette is not good.
I like the confident Bette.
Thanks for the shout out.
Uh uh!!! Tsk! Tsk! Shame on Tina, but a girl’s got to live ;)
Exciting chapter, I loved it. Thanks for this new gift Phasey!
More complications. A pity that the two waited for the moment to reconnect and Tim unknowingly spoiled.
Changing roles does not seem so insoluble for Tina as jealousy.
Tina will not be easy to explain to Bette who is not close to Tim after the explanation given in order to stay away from Shane, it would be contradictory.
Bette has to realize what is happening, which is the same thing about her .
Tina thought it all well tied to the contract, but did not have the feelings for Bette and jealousy, she’s wild and has gone to the bar. But I do not think she can forget her dreams of her first time with Bette.
For me, while there is a happy ending for TB , tangled plot is more exciting (unintentionally ‘ve read fanfics where TB does not end up together and give me nightmares) .
I count the minutes to see how Tina and Bette end tonight and what changes the next day at work. For me it is exciting to see how they will find the path to the other.
great can’t wait until the next post
Yea what happened between them in Tina’s apartment was a turning point. Both became more confused of their feelings and both are in denial especially Tina. She likes to be in control and showing her vulnerabilities to Bette made her powerless thats why she fucked a random stranger to gain that power again. Thanks for sharing this very intriguing tale phacey.
Yea what happened in Tinas apartment was a turning point. Both became more confused of their feelings and both are in denial especially Tina. She likes to be in control and showing her vulnerabilities to Bette made her powerless thats why she fucked a random stranger to regain that power again. Thanks for sharing this very intriguing tale phacey and looking forward to more.
Phacey, hope your vacation was good. Glad to see your update. I agree with other posts that Tina felt vulnerable with Bette and wanted to avoid Bette until she felt in control again. Problem is that she won’t be in control as she falls in love with Bette. :-). What will Tina do with Bette and Tim being friends? What happens Wednesday night at Shane’s birthday party? Can’t wait to see!
Awesome tension! Love all your stories but this is my favorite so far. Crank up the heat Phacey!, please!!!!
Hello, I couldn’t get home from work fast enough! Was thinking about your post all morning while at work! You sure didn’t disappoint me by posting but you did with Tina’s situation with Erica. I pray that before anything happens between them that Tina comes to her senses. I so want Bette to be her first. I understand its your story! They both have issues but who doesn’t. I’m sure glad Bette changed her mind and told Shane she would come. Thanks have a great week and see your post on Saturday again. Just wish for once you would post during the week. I just might would pee on myself. PPS
I loved this update. It has everything. Angst, jealousy,budding love, vulnerability and carnality. Tina doesn’t have to go through with her actions with Erica. She can always claim erectile dysfunction. ;-)
Girl, you never failed to make someone’s day brighter by just seeing your update. But how could you make someone so excited and at the same time became so frustrated and disappointed? I’m really glad you stop it right there cos I don’t think I can take it if you let something happened between Tina and that girl Erica. But you won’t allow it, will you? Oh wait, Bette did it in “Meet Bette Porter The 30 year old Virgin”.Oh my Goodness! Oh no no no… I’m begging you.. Please don’t do it.. not again.. It has to be Bette first.. *deep sigh* What a good writing can do to me. Thank you so much Phacey for taking the time to post no matter how tired you are from the trip. Waiting for more exciting chapters.
Very well balanced chapter! It had a little of everything and everybody. It will be interesting to see how Bette’s confidence plays out with Tina’s yearning for her. Could be an interesting turn of the tables. Thanks for posting!
wow another great chapter tina is in charge of every aspect of her life I don’t think it would be that hard to let bette be in control now and then in the bedroom at least and now you have me worried about who is following bette could it be her ex anyway pps.
Unfortunately, I also had the “Meet Bette Porter, The 30 Year Old Virgin” scene. but I can only say one word: NO!!
Of course, I understand what you wanted with it. Tina has lost control over herself and her feelings, and this, she is not accustomed. She scared the intense feelings that she felt towards Bette, she does not want to fall in love, because she thinks it’s business (but Tina, loves Bette, just does not know yet)
Erica, it would be a mistake part of Tina, what she regret.
I hope Tina’s time to stop, if not for Bette, for herself. (plus, jealousy is a bad counselor!)
Now at the same time and I like and did not like this chapter ;)
good, I still love this story. ;)
and I can not wait for the next chapter!
I wish, it could be as soon as the weekend :)
Ok I’m hoping this is a joke lol please, please, please tina please let bette be your first do not sleep with this woman, I agree with others I feel as though tina is cheating on bette and I can only image how bette is going to react if she finds out even though she knows her and tina only has a business deal but they are catching feelings so I assume she gonna be devasting…smh I can’t take it I need them to have their moment and I’m dying for tina to meet angelica..its weird angelica not being tinas daughter..please keep updating soon this story needs to go at least a 1000 chapters lol ha
Enjoyed the update but I would like it to have been Tina
This is no good and trouble, Tina and Bette need to be alone and talk to each other and get to know each other and understand about their feeling. Please post more, thanks
One good thing about your writing is that we can never tell which direction you’re going to bring us your readers.When we thought that we figured it all out, suddenly you’ll drop something totally unexpected and leave us all crazy wondering what’s going to happen next. Only shows how brilliant your writing is.You always leave us on the edge of our seats and thats what makes your story so interesting. I remember that scene in Virgin girl and in your other story it was Bette who fucked Erica, does that mean Tina will do too? I hope not but then again we are all at your mercy phacey(-; Keep up the great work my friend and ppvs!.
Welcome back.
Hmm, this chapter had it’s angst, and all the trimmings to keep readers coming back for more.
I am loving confident Bette and the fact that they are both aware that
something changed in their blossoming relationship.
Now it’s time for the more mature one to confront the other with their behavior/s.
Gotta say Tina going to hook up, was so not what I envisioned, I thought Bette
may have spoken to her in the office…the scene was set perfectly-though you detoured into your original direction.
I do so wish that you’d update this story twice a week at the minimum, for it would give me some excitement to look forward to during my work hours.
But if one is what you can guarantee then I will do my utmost to be appreciative for all of your hard work.
Thank you again Phacey- for constantly bringing it…..
What is Tina doing ?Soooo wrong.PPS
Almost six hours to go and its going to be your birthday so wanna be the first to greet you a… HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY PHACEY!!! I pray for a longer, happy and healthy life for you. Thanks for sharing all your wonderful stories to us all these years but i hope you won’t mind me asking is the next chapter ready to go? (-;
HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY BEERDAY MY DEAREST FRIEND!!! May all your wishes come true!
I also congratulate
HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND HAPPY FUTURE!!!
WISH YOU HAVE TIME AND MANY DESIRES TO WRITE ;-)