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Lover in the Dark: Chapter 7
Chapter 7
“Bette, turn around…”
Three simple words yet there was a deeper meaning behind and the brunette very well knew what’s going to happen next the moment she faced Tina. One side of her brain was saying that if tonight was going to be her first time with a woman that she wasn’t ready yet but the other side of her head was telling her that the feel of the blonde’s soft lips against her skin was so good that it was creating a different kind of excitement she had never felt before.
With her pulse beating past, slowly she stood up, straddled the lounger and faced Tina.
Their eyes locked and despite the dimly lit surrounding, with the small amount of space in between them both women were mesmerized by each other’s beauty.
Tina had a few drinks but the electricity coursing through her body right now as she looked at the brunette’s face was something she was sure was not brought by the alcohol. Without breaking the eye contact she emptied her glass of wine and took Bette’s and placed it to the table on the side.
“Come closer, Bette…”
Her heart fluttered upon hearing those words. The caramel skinned beauty followed the blonde’s request
“This is so much better” said the blonde with a sexy smirk
Bette swallowed as she could clearly see desire in those hazel colored eyes
“I’m dying to taste your lips but I want to know what‘s on your mind first”
The brunette furrowed her brows “I’m sorry what?”
Tina couldn’t hide her amusement over the brunette’s confused look and she thought Bette looked so damned cute
“I’ve said intimate things a while ago so pretty much you know how I feel and what I think when I’m with you”
“Yes…”
“Good… now I want to know what you think about me and I want you to be honest”
Bette scoffed “You’re kidding right?”
“No I’m not”
“Do you think I can tell you what’s on my mind with me sitting so close to you right now?”
“Yes”
“This is so ridiculous!”
Tina could see the anger showing in those deep brown eyes which only fueled her lust for her even more “Why? Are you so bothered sitting so close to me like this that you can’t tell me what you think of me?” the blonde said then inched her way towards the brunette
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vinzie says
first silent reader post.
keep the great job!
cellphone48 says
Gm! This was amazing! So, someone is watching Tina’s condo.. The danger begins! How do they know she came out of Tina’s condo? I pray Tim is a good man! Enjoy your vacation and thanks for taking the time to post. We thank that friend to tell you too. Be safe and Blessed until next Saturday. PPS
phacey says
Btw peeps loved the new fix with the newest chapter now having a drop down menu for the previous chapters. Much easier on the eyes so why dont we give Jacky a well deserved congratulations! Awesome job Jacky!!!
bettefortina says
What a wonderful update! Thanks for posting during your vacation .
Bibi28 says
Thank you for updating your story. I hope you enjoy your vacation.
I love the slow build up between Bette and Tina.
goyabeans4me says
You know I’m hooked….and patiently waiting!!! ;)
buggs666 says
great update loved it
kenji says
Glad you decided to post. I love this story. Have a great vacation.
radleks says
Phacey, thanks for the post while you are on vacation! I loved the update. Seems Tina is in love with Bette and wants their first time to have meaning ( hence the fear of disappointment). Bette is certainly attracted to Tina and I think she is on the way of falling in love but then you throw in Tim for competition. You are sneaky! :-). I loved how Bette became confident in the bedroom. Now you just need to let her loose next time!
majicspider60 says
Thanks for the update and enjoy your vacation. So Tim is going to be Tina’s competition for Bette? Poor guy is going to be a two time loser then. I think Bette is going to offer Tina a side of her life that makes her more powerful. PPS
jalex says
Good things should not prevent you from doing what you like, we are all happy :-)
If you see the face of joy, smile from ear to ear when I saw that you had posted the chapter, you would not hesitate. Take care of that friend.
I really like how the story goes. For me this is very exciting first stage of the relationship, see how each goes the own way to love.
Tim is already in the game, more jealous of Tina? And that pair of eyes? Interesting, intriguing.
What are you up to Randall?
Enjoy your holiday and … more relaxation, more creation ;-)
iyah says
Nothing beats the feeling of seeing an update of a story we’ve been patiently waiting for (although you’re not supposed to). I know you’re enjoying your vacation but thank you so much for taking a break from your precious time to post another chapter of this story. That was so sweet.. I know you can’t leave us hanging for 2 weeks. I know you can’t bear to imagine the look of disappointment on our face if you can’t post even for just a week. So, thank you so much for another exciting chapter Phacey. Looking forward to reading the next one. Have a good time!
lipitora says
so good that a new chapter. and big hugs to you, because of the holiday you’ve been posting.
really liked it! (but, you know: this is always the case, I love it)
I have no problem with the slow burning them.
the bedroom scene was a real revolution. seemed to prevail: that alpha personality in everyday life, she would like to give up control. Tina feelings more deepened, and Bette has not denied the attraction towards Tina. Would Bette, will see the scar Tina’s soul?
So, anyone watching Bette. there are a few possible person. :)
I hope Bette and Tim just be friends, would be too much if the same would happen to him twice. by the way, he is not yet ready for a new relationship. somehow I do not see them as a couple.
you have a good time.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter
azmama says
Loved the update. Mystery abounds!Truth be told, I was looking for a new posting from you. Enjoy your vacay. It was thoughtful of you to post when on vacation.
onthebrink says
Glad your friend persuaded you to post an update. Things are really starting to get interesting now. Not as much of a cliff hanger as last week, but still……Enjoy your vacation and hope to see another post next weekend. Thank you!
els73 says
Thankyou love your story… wow they kissed, the beginning of tibette. Jippie. Pps
wkm says
Loved it, thanks for the update
brinny says
It was very sweet of you to post an update during your vacation so that your readers would not miss out on the story. Great chapter with Tina beginning to trust Bette and Bette’s growing attention to Tina. We want more!
topcat says
OK who is watching tina amd im sorry tim but bette should stick to her first thoughts about you you are rude and a creep another great chapter pps
supershock says
Hmm. Whats Timmy up to? Will Bette keep fighting her feelings? Great chapter. Really enjoying this take on the story. Thanks
ut says
Well Tim is a good man or not, Tina is not happy to see he talking to Bette lol. Damn love B & T first kiss and can’t wait to see more, please post as soon you back from vacation. Enjoy your vacation!
avanred says
My comment got deleted so ill try this again– This chapter was so hot and all they ever did was kiss, did a little bit of touching and said sexy things but what really surprised me was the shift of character the moment they entered the bedroom. Bette’s sexual dominance over Tina was so hot and i cant wait to see her reaction when she sees her beautiful lover with a man. I agree with one of your readers– a jealous Tina is really hot. Post when you can and enjoy your vacation my friend.
didi1956 says
I hope Tim is not a problem.Thank you and have a good time.
tibettenation1 says
Thanks Phacey! Its good you making them that their time on making love because with a chemistry like Bette and Tina just their touches and kisses and loving stares are all the loving making we tibetters need. Tim needs to go just like they got rid of that name on the show useless there and here lol…omg!..im so anxiously waiting for next chapter im going to go crazy, I cant function at work because I keep checking for an update lol….I will follow your stories til the end
chasingdreams says
Another long time silent reader here, well not in your other site. In the last chapter you surprised us with Tina’s twin sister and now the shift of power between Bette and Tina is equally surprising to me. I just loved it when they act so differently when it’s only the two of them. Tim is making his move on Bette will Tina unleash hell if she finds out? i can hardly wait to see your next post. Please don’t keep us waiting too long and i hope the vacation will give you great scenes for my favorite couple.