Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.
Round n Round We Go (Ch.12)
Login to add story to favorites
(10 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Chapter Twelve
The next morning, in the exclusive room, sunlight fell through the crack of those heavy curtains, some faint trace of burned candle enveloping the air that filled with spent passion. The digital number on the audio bounced to eight hundred, and there came up Bon Jovi again. The volume turned up gradually and woke the blonde girl. Bette stirred in her sleep but failed to open her eyes. “I must have set that thing accidentally last night,” she thought, the idea to get up and turn it off drifted as fast as it came.
Tina moved a little, feeling the numbness in her left arm that she had tucked under her head, but she stopped as soon as she realized what was holding her by the waist. She listened to the quiet room, to the rhythmic breathing of the girl behind her, she touched the arm that protectively wrapped her side, and felt the proximity of the smooth skin against her back. Beaming a smile, she peeled herself out of the embrace very carefully and sat on the edge of the bed, seeing the whole left side of the huge bed was not even occupied and she had been cradled so closely to the brunette that they barely moved during the night. Momentarily, she caught herself dangling by the edge, struggling to stand up. The soreness in her back and between her legs was just too unexpected. She waited till her brain comprehended the uncomfortable feeling and slowly made her way to the audio, turning it off. Standing naked in the room, she stretched some, letting the sweet pain in the muscles and the afterglow of love making travel through her entire body—not a single cell not hurting. But it was worth it, she chuckled lightly.
The brunette shifted in her slumber and murmured. “Baby? Where’d you go?” She brought her hand up to rub her eyes, but it suspended in the air as if lost its destination, and it went limp, dropping back to the pillow.
“Awww she’s so cute…” Tina put a hand on her chest and sighed silently. She came back to the bed and sat leaning against the headboard, looking the peaceful face of the brunette in her sleep. The cascading sunlight framed a golden line on the mocha colored arms and neck, the blanket slipped a just a little at her leg, the eyelashes flustered as Bette turned her head to the side, avoiding the intrusion of the brightness. The blonde snickered as she saw the dark hair. Bette had been right: the small curls dried up and got all puffy and messy, twirling around her flawless bone frame and some into her face, truly as if she got fried. Tina picked a strand and felt the unusual texture of it. She bent her head down to kiss her sleeping beauty on the forehead, and got caught by two strong arms. She yelped as being pulled down on top of the brunette.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Author:
I figure there’d be one more chapter before hell breaks loose. And sorry, to those of you who wanted the minimum of damage, I let the drama build up.
As usual, I look forward to your reviews, and appreciate your patience.
Peace.
Oh right, I promise to fix things up for them! The way has to be paved nicely.
woo！so much for this chapter, your story is very rational and organized， but please let them be happy for one more chapter, untill the hell break loose, let us savour in the young love a little bit longer.Waiting for your version of dramatic turning.
I did another chapter of tranquility. That’s the calm before the storm you got, haha!
i am reading this fan fiction named out of closet(time travel story),and literally they travelled through a closet,funny.
Hmmm… time traveling. I think that’s bold and interesting. Do you mind telling me who the author is? Coz I seemed to have failed searching by key word. Still don’t know how the search engine works on this site… so typical techno-phobic little me!
Author ID is Bette And Tina Forever,not end yet.
i haven’t heard the songs you listed above, you see, i am more a british pop fan.but i will hear them later,so i can feel the tune that you are trying to set.
Another try to comment.
I love the slow built up, but please promise a happy ending.
This will be a mess.
They love each other and starten on the wrong foot, Tina should have told it right away after she fel in love with Bette. But then there wouldnt be drama.
Still despise Sam, what a creep.
Ah, don’t worry, my friend. There’ll be a nice ending for these two. I love them too much after all!
And Sam, ugh, sometimes I just want to create a car accident and cross him out of the picture. But then I think, there’s gotta be some good left in him.
And I really appreciate your comment. I see there’s a new math question form to fill out before people can post a comment. That’s cute…lol
RT,
Sam is Selfish Bastard. I hope that Tina will be able to protect Bette from Sam’s exploitation.
Grandma was really a fair lady coz she still gave Tina the chance to be with Bette despite Tina’s association with Sam Kennard.
For Tina.. I know that she will regret her decision but I trust you that you will make our Bette more understanding once she finds out the truth.
Bette was really romantic here. She is truly one lovely lady.
Great update. You are consistently consistent in giving us a wonderful update for this story.
Keep it coming.
Thanks.
Scribe
Yes, I agree. Sam is a total jerk. But you’ll find out how he will turn out.
And Tina has really created a hard situation for herself. Yet I don’t think she had much of an option here. It’s risking her relationship or burying the secret forever. But she’s too naive to understand that nothing can stay forever.
Bette has a romantic soul. But once her heart is broken, maybe she won’t be so understanding after all. Only time can heal such sensitivity. I intend to let time do the job, too.
Tina has created a real situation for herself. Let the drama begin!! Thank you for this story – I have enjoyed reading!
Thank you for the comment! I’ll continue to try my best. Hope you’ll enjoy the next chapter.
Really dont like Sam. What a jerk. They are a sweet couple, hope they weather the storm with only minor damage. Thanks
He is a total jackass. And you’ll find out how the storm hit the couple. I believe things can get ugly at one point. But let time do its job and heal their broken hearts.
Thanks for reviewing!
Please don’t let them get married without Tina saying anything it was just be disastrous she can’t be this clueless let her tell her and then move away cause she don’t need to be with her dad
I don’t think it’s that easy at this point for Tina to tell anything. She’s made her mind, even though it’s a wrong decision. And she’ll realize that she’d been wrong this whole time.
And Sam, he is a jackass. But he’ll probably stick around some more. Maybe, eventually, he could see the damage that he had made and really go for a change. Who knows.
Thanks for the review. Please continue reading!
Yea I was waiting for drama but this was better and so lovely, ahh poor Tina what are you to do? But now it dont matter because the hell is about to start, im clearing my mind until so I can read with pure focus lol omg so ready but I gotta feeling hearts are about to be broken with the foreshadowing you readin between the story..I do believe marriage is to early for these teenagers but lets be honest here Tina and Bette have a love like no other that if they got married at the age 5 we will still be seeing true love between those two. And for some reason I like the grandmother, I didnt find her harsh at all, and Sam is just a sad case for a father but Tina is playing her part also
Oh you’re so right! It’s just such a difficult position Tina finds herself in. And it’s all gonna fall out when the truth gets revealed.
One more chapter of loveliness and I’ll start the ugly going.
I love grandma Porter! She’s the keeper of the family. And she will continue to play an important part in keeping the family together through darkness and through hell.
Sam, old little Sam, having all his mind on money and profit. He has no idea how his actions will infect his daughter. Let’s see if he’ll have an epiphany and go for a change.
Thanks for reviewing!
Don’t like Sam, grandma scare me but like her, happy for them and hope everything will be ok