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Round n Round We Go (Ch.11)
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Previously:
Tina opened her eyes to see into the chocolate colored ones. Under the dim moon light, she saw a small fire in those liquid orbs burning patiently. The moment felt so right. “Close your eyes.” She asked and held Bette’s one hand.
Bette obeyed. Her long black lashes flustered as she tried to suppress her longing.
A cold little object was dropped carefully in her hand. Naturally she opened her eyes to look and her mind comprehended the possibility. The silvery flash of the object reflected into her widened eyes, into the pools of fiery brownness.
Chapter Eleven
Time must have frozen as Bette stared down at the key laying in her palm. She parted her lips and tried to say something, but words failed her. The excitement in her stomach was stirring up so intensely. She drew in a deep breath and trembled a bit slowly breathing out.
“Now show me what it opens?” Tina smiled at her reaction. She was even a little giddy that her giving the key back was a pleasant surprise for the brunette.
Swallowing hard, Bette nodded and slipped her palm to hold the ivory wrist, pulling the blonde from her motor.
James came out of the gallery and started to lock up, but he was called to stop.
“James, you go home. I’ll lock up after… later.” The forced composure in her voice was quite clear, Bette thought. She did not look at James, hiding the hand that held the key behind.
Noticing a suspicious blush on his boss’s face, the young man tried to read the situation. However, his attempt was in vain because she clearly wouldn’t elaborate the purpose of staying late. So he politely said goodnight to the two girls and drove away.
The taller girl walked in first, and punched in the security code since James already set the alarm. Then she reached out to take Tina’s hand, beaming a shy smile, lead them into the already evacuated building, and locked from the inside.
The elevator was shut down, so they walked in relative dark on the spiral stairs from the first floor to the forth, where Bette’s office and personal studio was located. And Bette unlocked her office, using a different key, Tina observed, and then she turned on the light of the room.
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Yes, I fantasized about a perfect room with candle lights and love songs. My love scene writing experience is still limited. I hope you enjoyed it and I welcome suggestions.
Thanks for reading!
woo!got me all hot, great writing.looking for the next.
Thanks! Hope it was better depicted than the original one. I tried my best. Truth be told, I barely review the Chinese version these days and forget some plot.
So I’m working off script right now. Don’t be too surprised if it comes out not exactly what you expect ;p
Yeah,that’s exactly what I am waiting for. Follow your imagination,I want to be surprised.while waiting for your post,I am reading this novel named The Groves,a ghost story.
Isnt that a BenMac story? God I looooove BenMac. That author’s work always gives me chills. I’m actually catching up with her “the eternal rocks beneath…”
I thought ” “the eternal rocks beneath…”haven’t end yet,is that so?
No, it hasn’t yet. But BenMac said that it’ll be finished in a number of chapters.
Ahh that was great..literally!!!!!!lol…well worth the wait let me just say. Oh and this line..” Bette in her underwear and high heels, that was a picture, one hell of a sexy picture, itself.” My first reaction was Whoa!!you are wrong to put this kind of imagination in our heads, a person can loose focus for days thinking about Bette with heels and lingerie. I hate that Tina still havent told Bette the truth I know its must be hard on her but when she does I know there’s going to be some drama, hopefully bette get upset and leaves tina and then tina have to work hard to win her heart and trust back…ok im rambling lol im just excited…update soon
Yeah, thanks! The truth will be revealed in about another two chapters or so. And hell is definitely going to break loose. But of course, I will find a way to fix it for them. After all, I still believe in true love between Tibette!
Hot,thank you.PPS
Thanks for reviewing. You’ve been very supportive!
Tina’s dad is a real jerk to have wanted to do that. Loved the connection the two girls share. Thanks
Well he’s a mean little guy alright. He’ll learn his lesson. Let’s just hope a despicable person like him could eventually change.
Thanks for reviewing!
It was worth the wait. You put so much into your characters n you develop easily what you want us to feel w/ your stories. Their feelings for each other were captivated flawlessly. Our imagination runs wild! Thx for your EROTIC posts. I’m sure all hell s gonna break loose if/when Tina tells Bette about Sam s revenge. Bring it on! Don’t stay away too long……
You’re very kind. I will continue to work on my plotting. Well, who knows, maybe Tina would not be given the chance to tell Bette. Maybe things will take a even worse turn so there must be a greater effort to mend their love.
Thanks for commenting. I’ll try to post soon.
Nothing wrong with your love scènes, it was beautiful written.
Sam is a asshole and i am sure as hell is gonna break lose when Tina tells Bette.
Thanks for the update.
Don’t Let us wait for long.
Thanks for supporting!
Actually, I feel like letting things kept hidden to the most critical point. That way, it will take more effort in repairing their relationship.
Who knows, I let my imagination guide me. ;)
So hot and sexy! Thank you!
Thank you for the comment. I try my best.
RT,
That was freakin’ HOT! Just hope Tina will open up now to B.
Nice chapter indeed. Will be waiting impatiently for your next post :)
Well then I better work on it harder now!
I think given the condition, it will be harder and harder for Tina to reveal the truth now. I wonder what will happen if Bette finds out by accident. That’ll demand greater attempts for me and Tina to save the relationship. (I’d like the challenge actually ;))
Thanks for commenting!
I do not often let a comment to this story, but I read since the beginning, and I really liked it.
it is very well worth the wait, not only erotic but very nice. It was the typical “first night” is what every virgin girl dreams (lesbian virgin girls) :P Bette was very romantic.
first love all earth-shattering experience, I hope the two girls love will survives, Tina’s father desire for revenge, and the fact that Tina keep secret this from Bette. and that in the beginning, Tina approached Bette because of the plan.
you told come to the drama but I hope it will not be too bad. everyone write drama lately :) my little heart desires a milder version of the drama: D
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Well thank you very much for commenting and telling me your feelings. I am truly flattered, blown away by the generosity of my readers.
I don’t know about EVERY lesbian virgin but I definitely created this first night in the way I wished for mine. ;p
Drama is good, my friend! Haha, I think it gives me space to develop more in the characters. And believe me, when they are finally able to fix things, it’s going to be sweet!
So beautiful and hot