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It is a game, a dangerous game
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Criminal
Chapter 3. It is a game, a dangerous game
Jodi’s condition fluctuated. Some days were bad, others particularly good. And this night was a good night for her. She sat in the garden, watching the bluish flares from the pool and listened quietly to Jorge making small talks with the guys. There had been days since she was lucid like right then, and she could sense that her husband was not very pleased, having been ignoring her all night, probably because of her behavior earlier this week.
Tina sat beside her, also was observing the group of drug dealers making jokes and having a relaxing moment. Bette was as her usual self, sitting there, contemplating, frowning a bit, but overall seemed just calm. The blonde was dying to know what was in her mind. But she could feel a line of sight on her, constantly tonight. As she glanced toward it, she found Jorge looking at her with his mildly shining eyes. Upon their eye contact, he smiled gently and rocked his wine glass slightly toward her.
Jodi stood up, insisting on going back. But she refused to let Tina take her, instead, she asked for Vincent.
“Vincent is good here.” Jorge sternly rejected her, giving her a glare. “Andres will walk you back.” He disliked the man, who already butchered several deals, and he was pretty sure that Andres had been involved with Jodi before. He was just looking for an excuse to take him out.
Enraged, Jodi shot up from her seat and walked toward Andres, as if challenging her husband. “Come on, Andres.” She intentionally guided him toward the backyard.
Poor Andres, having no clue what just happened, was doomed to a painful death in the not too far future.
People looked among themselves and kept their silence for a while, knowing that Jorge and Jodi’s marriage was coming to an end.
“So, Kristen,” Suddenly Tito spoke, trying to start a new conversation. He had been very keen to Tina after her arrival despite his crass manner. “tell us more about you. Why does such a pretty lady like you want to be a nurse?”
She instinctively looked over to Bette, who also looked up at her, genuinely interested in the topic, then she looked to Henry, his face pale and nervous whenever she was present, finally, she looked back to Jorge, he was attentive, unusually attentive, and encouraging. So she chuckled a bit. “I…don’t know. I mean, for me it’s sort of uh… calling I guess.”
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Ha! Finally put together another post! Hope I’m fast enough for you guys.
Shout outs to the lovely ladies commenting on my stories, SassyGran, bibi, scribe, TN1, els73, cellphone, pikiangelica, doc, lipitora, wkm, simonem, ut, mscully and everyone else reading! Thank you guys! Luv y’all!
Uhhhh I know this post is sad and it’s probably going to be a bit sadder as it progress, but you know I’ll be doing everything to fix this. Have faith in me!
Ok I really need to go to bed now. My GBF is nagging me about my unhealthy lifestyle lol.
Don’t forget to leave some comments and love for me~ Goodnight ladies!
Peace :)
I think bette mouth shut and then we would have an NC-17 history, but I hope it bette undercover cop, expect more kisses and caresses, and thanks for sharing your imagination with your fans.
Good to see I’m not the only one up so late lol.
Wow that was fucking amazing! I love your style of writing and the complete brilliance you bring to a story and I’m not just saying that because you are a friend but because its the truth, you are amazing RT. This was heartbreaking for sure, finding out that Bette had been strung out on drugs is too much for any tibetter to bare but I’m happy you put this in the story because it gives the reader an insight on just how broken she was back in high school and afterwards. So sad for Bette and her life…and for Tina who continues to battle with her emotions and heart, so sad that both women are in horrible predicaments, I’m very exciting to see how this story plays out. Well well well done my friend, keep it coming!
I’m burning the late night oil after changing out of a sweat drenched shirt. And now can’t sleep so I finally got to your story! Very intriguing and intense RT! Bette’s background is particularly sad and Tina fighting her emotions…*sigh*. ..You definitely have a good one brewing here my friend! Very well written! Of course your stories always are!
you know I cried for the Chinese version, I sense that you will make me cry more in the next few chapters.you know the Chinese saying,healthy is the foundament for revolution，so have a good rest!
Well RT you ask me to have faith in you and at the same time promise me more sadness!
I did find this chapter very sad and even though I know you are going to make me even sadder, I will have faith but, please make Bette’s life better asap!
Bravo RT! Sad that Bette has gone through so much hardship – being shunned because of her father led her right down a similar path, and the drugs! – very tragic. Tina is getting in deep almost too fast. Will Bette save her from the darkness? As always, your writing is superb! Thank you for updating so quickly.
It was a great chapter, very well written. despite the fact that my heart is broken!
Bette almost died because of drugs, it was very sad.
and Tina again shattered her heart. but I’m glad that in the end Bette didn’t do anything hurt herself.
I hope Tina give up the struggle against her feelings, I understand that she is a cop and wants to act correctly, but still ….
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
will be even sadder? (help me) :D
What can i say more than the other comments i read.
It is breaking my Tibette heart, this story is so sad and it will be sadder, but i have faith in you to make this better.
Still wondering what Bette’s role is in this drug cartel.
And poor Tina, stuck between good and bad.
I hope you had a good sleep and are able to update soon.
Lots of love for you!
This is sad for them, hope they can find some way to be with each other
So sad but hopefully love will win out.
This time already broke my heart and you me
says it will get even sad, in this case, need
go to the pharmacy to buy my medicine
heart, because that way I will not endure.
Bette not deserve to suffer again already was not
Bette have suffered enough in pasado.
I faith that Bette is not a criminal
after all.
And here to us that kiss was the famous “Footprint Porter”
10 Stars.
Whoa! A new one to obsess about! Hope, Bette is not really part of this corrupt group and just an undercover agent like Tina.
Just read the three chapters in one sitting and if it was already finished I think I’d just keep reading all through the day! I’m loving it, your creativity is just amazing. I’ll look forward to other posts!