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It is a game, a dangerous game
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Some of the men chuckled hearing this. But most of their laughter was friendly.
Jorge nodded with his own smile. “Oh maybe for you it’s a calling. But for us, it’s a blessing.”
The guys laughed again. Some even whistled.
Tina blushed a light color of red. “You are making fun of me now.”
“No, I’m serious, Kristen,” Jorge put down his glass and stared at her. “you certainly have gained several admirers since working here. I heard Eric already made a move.” He glanced around, Tito, Pablo, Diego all avoided his eye contact. “In fact, I find myself one of them.”
There were some quiet gasps after Jorge’s confession. Though throughout the years, Jorge had only been with Jodi, his people understood that when he said he admired someone, everyone else must forfeit.
“If you don’t mind, Kristen, please let us court you,” He confidently raised his glass again, “may the best man win.”
Just as his lips tipped into a confident smile for he knew nobody had the guts to take him up on this courting game, a calm voice interrupted his victory. “Or the best woman.”
Tina closed her eyes hearing that voice. Bette’s voice had always felt like wind to her, always so clam and emotionless that seemed harmless, like the invisible wind, but in that invisibility, there hid a force, powerful enough to rally waves after waves, stir an ocean upside down and rupture all the tranquility. The waves hit her right into her heart, like tidings, it hit over and over again, the joy, the excitement, the fear, and the heartache took turns disrupting her rhythmic heartbeat. It all mingled together she couldn’t tell if her heart was pounding overload in euphoria or it was bleeding out in a tearing agony.
Jorge temporarily paused, and then he picked up his eyes to look at the woman sitting far away by the fountain. “Vincent.” He shook his head with an inaudible chuckle. This fearless woman… always there to challenge him, but always so good at whatever she did. He was jealous of her confidence and many abilities to impress women, including his wife which was somewhat tragic for him, but he was also very proud of her, in a gentlemanly sort of way.
“Boss.” Bette tilted her chin a bit, and looked back at him. She had no idea where that came from. Feeling nervous already when people started to pay attention to the blonde, she needed to step up right then, for some reason unbeknownst to herself, she felt the need to shield the woman from all the madness going on in this dangerous land.
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Ha! Finally put together another post! Hope I’m fast enough for you guys.
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Uhhhh I know this post is sad and it’s probably going to be a bit sadder as it progress, but you know I’ll be doing everything to fix this. Have faith in me!
Ok I really need to go to bed now. My GBF is nagging me about my unhealthy lifestyle lol.
Don’t forget to leave some comments and love for me~ Goodnight ladies!
Peace :)
I think bette mouth shut and then we would have an NC-17 history, but I hope it bette undercover cop, expect more kisses and caresses, and thanks for sharing your imagination with your fans.
Good to see I’m not the only one up so late lol.
Wow that was fucking amazing! I love your style of writing and the complete brilliance you bring to a story and I’m not just saying that because you are a friend but because its the truth, you are amazing RT. This was heartbreaking for sure, finding out that Bette had been strung out on drugs is too much for any tibetter to bare but I’m happy you put this in the story because it gives the reader an insight on just how broken she was back in high school and afterwards. So sad for Bette and her life…and for Tina who continues to battle with her emotions and heart, so sad that both women are in horrible predicaments, I’m very exciting to see how this story plays out. Well well well done my friend, keep it coming!
I’m burning the late night oil after changing out of a sweat drenched shirt. And now can’t sleep so I finally got to your story! Very intriguing and intense RT! Bette’s background is particularly sad and Tina fighting her emotions…*sigh*. ..You definitely have a good one brewing here my friend! Very well written! Of course your stories always are!
you know I cried for the Chinese version, I sense that you will make me cry more in the next few chapters.you know the Chinese saying,healthy is the foundament for revolution，so have a good rest!
Well RT you ask me to have faith in you and at the same time promise me more sadness!
I did find this chapter very sad and even though I know you are going to make me even sadder, I will have faith but, please make Bette’s life better asap!
Bravo RT! Sad that Bette has gone through so much hardship – being shunned because of her father led her right down a similar path, and the drugs! – very tragic. Tina is getting in deep almost too fast. Will Bette save her from the darkness? As always, your writing is superb! Thank you for updating so quickly.
It was a great chapter, very well written. despite the fact that my heart is broken!
Bette almost died because of drugs, it was very sad.
and Tina again shattered her heart. but I’m glad that in the end Bette didn’t do anything hurt herself.
I hope Tina give up the struggle against her feelings, I understand that she is a cop and wants to act correctly, but still ….
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
will be even sadder? (help me) :D
What can i say more than the other comments i read.
It is breaking my Tibette heart, this story is so sad and it will be sadder, but i have faith in you to make this better.
Still wondering what Bette’s role is in this drug cartel.
And poor Tina, stuck between good and bad.
I hope you had a good sleep and are able to update soon.
Lots of love for you!
This is sad for them, hope they can find some way to be with each other
So sad but hopefully love will win out.
This time already broke my heart and you me
says it will get even sad, in this case, need
go to the pharmacy to buy my medicine
heart, because that way I will not endure.
Bette not deserve to suffer again already was not
Bette have suffered enough in pasado.
I faith that Bette is not a criminal
after all.
And here to us that kiss was the famous “Footprint Porter”
10 Stars.
Whoa! A new one to obsess about! Hope, Bette is not really part of this corrupt group and just an undercover agent like Tina.
Just read the three chapters in one sitting and if it was already finished I think I’d just keep reading all through the day! I’m loving it, your creativity is just amazing. I’ll look forward to other posts!