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Countdown #13 – Touch Tones S07
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Exterior – The Million Dollar Cowboy Bar – Tina
With my cellphone pressed up to my ear, I move my lips silently along with Kit’s, as she reads Angelica her favorite bedtime story. Putting the book away Kit asks, ”How’re you and my Baby Sis getting along in Texas?”
I struggle to find the answer.
How can I describe my evening with a drug-addled bigot, and not press every one of Kit’s 12 Step buttons? Sue Ellen, and this glimpse into Shane’s past, has convinced me all over again that even though Bette’s mother wasn’t there for much of her childhood, my mother was in the beginning, mostly there for me, and we must do better for our daughter. We have to.
When we lived in that old house with the high cliffs behind it, I remember her reading, ”Wind in the Willows” to me at night. There was an orchard I played in to the east, a creek I explored to the south, and to the west a gentle curve of cliffs topped by very tall trees that threw shadows over the whole house at sunset.
There were wolves back there, too, and one in particular who watched over me, but by then, it was too late. My sister had already found me.
The front door of the bar swings open, and Bette waves to me. ”Odd as it may be, our family pictures are a hit. The dial is way down on her. I think it’s safe, you can come back inside.”
I hold the phone up to her ear, ”Say goodnight to the baby.”
”Goodnight sweet baby, I miss you!”
”Shane, if you can believe it, was once chubby!” Alice greets our return. ”Sue Ellen is telling me baby Shane stories.
”I was just asking, if she remembered that old pink blanket of hers?” Sue Ellen leans into Shane, ”I couldn’t pry it away from you. It’s like you thought it was your own mother.”
”See. Lots better,” Bette whispers sarcastically in my ear.
”I remember, Blankie.”
Then, Alice just can’t leave well enough alone. ”Sue Ellen, where’d you grow up?”
And Bette says, ”Fuck,” under her breath. ”Memory Lane with Sue Ellen.”
The Million Dollar Cowboy Bar – Bette
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Bette, one tough woman! Writing Tina’s name in stitches, i would love to see that!
To sad Janet didn’t get the kick in the ass she so deserved. I hope that she will be somebodies bitch in jail.
Loved the pictures!
Thanks for the update!
I’m thinking of a new story for my L Word inspired, Touch Tones, Season 7 storyline and Tina’s masturbation scene came to mind, “Date With Myself” ( https://lesfan.com/?p=85432 ) is a sexy story of Tina finding herself bored and lonely during the time she was away from Bette.
Following it is a very, very wonderful story, too, about Bette imagining her revenge on Jenny for writing such a revealing book about her and Tina. It’s a dark, but comical place Bette goes to as she climbs a tree and contemplates how to silence Jenny. That story is titled, “The Thirteenth Floor”, and is here on LesFan – https://lesfan.com/?p=85458.
Thank you so much for the updates, I cant wait for more . pps
TINA knew her sister was living in DALLAS but never thought or just did not want to see her that ALICE who has this perverted sense of not letting go of BETTE would find said sister and present her to them.Can you say smackdown,stabbing and plate throwing oh yeah the famous chokehold that ended real quick.Everyone has a horror story and thinking your mother is dead when she’s not,being molested by a sibling or losing your leg (how?)makes the pain in your head and heart pound but for BETTE/TINA its the pain in the loins that need and gets their immediate attention and with glowing results.pps thanks
Loving this quirky story. Thanks
Via Twitter to me from Lillian277=
Missed your talented writing besides the LWord ladies…lips of asbestos; such brilliant descriptive form…you’re back!! Brilliant writing on the boisterously disorderly frontier town brawl between Janet, Bette, & Tina. Everything’s perfect!
ssGogo – via email to me –
Hilarious! You have outdone yourself this time. This 3-part arc had me laughing throughout, but part 3 was absolutely, positively hysterical. Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Loved, loved, loved it!
Via email to me – CVU –
What a raucous scene?! I don’t know if I gonna laugh or what?
The scene is too unbelievable?! Of all places that Tina can meet her sister again.
It had to be on that bar? What are the odds? And not to mention the bloody encounter
between Bette and Janet, that almost end up in tragedy!
Way to go Blackbird!
Wow ! a lot of emotion in this chapter.
The entire constellation ..
Via email to me from Shaggy – Yep girl…this is really flowing…I remember somewhere that Tina HAD been w/ another woman—her sister.But she never told Bette,right?
That Cowboy STEAK restuarant/bar was perfecto…even the dang BLOODY steak gave me visuals!!!BUT the confrontation was “ghetto classic”lol!
Bette chokin Janet v& Tina kickin her BEHIND the knees made me think of my PuertoRican friend Liz, puttin grease on her face to fight a girl in NYC back in da day!!! Whoa da day! I’m really feeling it..the love scene esp nice&capturing,spicy. Sue Ellen keeps reminding me of DALLAS(old tv show)…until she took that boot off…ALICE’s reaction was a HOOT girl!!! You possess an expansive vision of experience & you know HOW to put it on paper—or in cyberspace. Some of your lines are just soooo GOT CHA&unexpected!THAT’S what makes em even MORE witty..you’re quick,very fluid…SoUNDS like you’ve travelled a lot
Wth is wrong with Tina’s sister? Stabbing someone is not a real sane thing do?!
What is problem anyway?! When she did that thing to Tina, did she gone insane for while?
MY GOD! TO DO THAT TO YOUR OWN SISTER. MUCH WORSE, TO YOUR YOUNGER SISTER!
Absolutely Great BB – so pleased to have your talented writing back :)
Look forward to reading more of your inventive wonderful stories soon :)