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Countdown #13 – Touch Tones S07
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Across the table, Sue Ellen shifts in her seat, hesitating whether to go on. ”Shane knows this. My coming up wasn’t easy.”
Then, with a deep inhale she begins, ”My daddy was a circuit judge, any of you gals know what that is?”
But we all stay silent, should a wrong answer cause another outburst.
”Someone who covers a goodly piece of Texas territory, and decides whether or not to hang a man. That was my daddy,” Sue Ellen answers.
”A Hanging Judge?” Alice cries out. ”You had a hanging judge for a father? Shane did you ever meet him?”
Shane shakes her head, as Sue Ellen laughs mostly to herself, ”Oh, how he hated that name, too.”
Now, I find myself curious, ”And did he actually hang people?”
”He sure did. Hung lots of people. Rustlers, murders, Mexicans…you name it.”
Behind her hand, Tina whispers to me, ”Do not argue with her about capital punishment, Bette. Just let it be.”
Then, our steaks arrive, and sure enough, Sue Ellen had given in and ordered a cup of the healing chicken noodle soup Alice had recommended.
Dipping in her spoon, Sue Ellen continues. ”But it meant he was gone a lot. You ever hear of laudanum?”
Cutting into our bloody steaks, we all shake our heads. No.
”The housewives back in my day got hooked on it. Hell, I don’t even know if there was an FDA back then, but out west we still had those roaming Medicine Men, and Indian cures that would pull up in wagons. Amplify a valium a thousand times, but with dreams, and that’s opium. That’s laudanum.
Sue Ellen licks her lips, I guess at the memory of the taste of it. ”A cure for being lonely, and my mother was hooked on it.”
”What’d my grandfather do about it?” Shane asks.
”Nothing. Kept on hanging people, I guess.”
”Now, I’m starting to worry about you.” Alice eyes Shane, who’s sipping away on her beer, the night before she’s to give liver tissue samples to save her dying mother’s diseased one.
Shane gives Alice her best, ’Get Lost’ look, and continues chewing all the way down a long french fry.
”Still, I hope you take my point.” Alice warns her.
Tina looks over at me, suddenly very serious. ”I don’t need a Mother’s Little Helper to care for our baby, do you?”
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Bette, one tough woman! Writing Tina’s name in stitches, i would love to see that!
To sad Janet didn’t get the kick in the ass she so deserved. I hope that she will be somebodies bitch in jail.
Loved the pictures!
Thanks for the update!
I’m thinking of a new story for my L Word inspired, Touch Tones, Season 7 storyline and Tina’s masturbation scene came to mind, “Date With Myself” ( https://lesfan.com/?p=85432 ) is a sexy story of Tina finding herself bored and lonely during the time she was away from Bette.
Following it is a very, very wonderful story, too, about Bette imagining her revenge on Jenny for writing such a revealing book about her and Tina. It’s a dark, but comical place Bette goes to as she climbs a tree and contemplates how to silence Jenny. That story is titled, “The Thirteenth Floor”, and is here on LesFan – https://lesfan.com/?p=85458.
Thank you so much for the updates, I cant wait for more . pps
TINA knew her sister was living in DALLAS but never thought or just did not want to see her that ALICE who has this perverted sense of not letting go of BETTE would find said sister and present her to them.Can you say smackdown,stabbing and plate throwing oh yeah the famous chokehold that ended real quick.Everyone has a horror story and thinking your mother is dead when she’s not,being molested by a sibling or losing your leg (how?)makes the pain in your head and heart pound but for BETTE/TINA its the pain in the loins that need and gets their immediate attention and with glowing results.pps thanks
Loving this quirky story. Thanks
Via Twitter to me from Lillian277=
Missed your talented writing besides the LWord ladies…lips of asbestos; such brilliant descriptive form…you’re back!! Brilliant writing on the boisterously disorderly frontier town brawl between Janet, Bette, & Tina. Everything’s perfect!
ssGogo – via email to me –
Hilarious! You have outdone yourself this time. This 3-part arc had me laughing throughout, but part 3 was absolutely, positively hysterical. Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Loved, loved, loved it!
Via email to me – CVU –
What a raucous scene?! I don’t know if I gonna laugh or what?
The scene is too unbelievable?! Of all places that Tina can meet her sister again.
It had to be on that bar? What are the odds? And not to mention the bloody encounter
between Bette and Janet, that almost end up in tragedy!
Way to go Blackbird!
Wow ! a lot of emotion in this chapter.
The entire constellation ..
Via email to me from Shaggy – Yep girl…this is really flowing…I remember somewhere that Tina HAD been w/ another woman—her sister.But she never told Bette,right?
That Cowboy STEAK restuarant/bar was perfecto…even the dang BLOODY steak gave me visuals!!!BUT the confrontation was “ghetto classic”lol!
Bette chokin Janet v& Tina kickin her BEHIND the knees made me think of my PuertoRican friend Liz, puttin grease on her face to fight a girl in NYC back in da day!!! Whoa da day! I’m really feeling it..the love scene esp nice&capturing,spicy. Sue Ellen keeps reminding me of DALLAS(old tv show)…until she took that boot off…ALICE’s reaction was a HOOT girl!!! You possess an expansive vision of experience & you know HOW to put it on paper—or in cyberspace. Some of your lines are just soooo GOT CHA&unexpected!THAT’S what makes em even MORE witty..you’re quick,very fluid…SoUNDS like you’ve travelled a lot
Wth is wrong with Tina’s sister? Stabbing someone is not a real sane thing do?!
What is problem anyway?! When she did that thing to Tina, did she gone insane for while?
MY GOD! TO DO THAT TO YOUR OWN SISTER. MUCH WORSE, TO YOUR YOUNGER SISTER!
Absolutely Great BB – so pleased to have your talented writing back :)
Look forward to reading more of your inventive wonderful stories soon :)