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Be-Longing
Oh, you think I’m cute, do you?
Well, I think you’re cute too.
They lean in to kiss, but they get interrupted by a girl who comes up to them.
GIRL
Hi there, are you ladies from out of town?
‘Cause I’ve never seen you here before.
Rose and Claire turn to face the girl.
CLAIRE
Well, we just don’t go out much.
GIRL
Anyway I wanted to tell you, you two
make a really cute couple. Me and my friends
Girl points to her group of friends sitting at a table.
GIRL (CONT’D)
We hang out here every Thursday,
so come find us if you come back to the Beaver.
ROSE & CLAIRE
Sure!
GIRL
See ya!
Girl goes back to her friends.
CLAIRE
Need to use the washroom.
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INT. WASHROOM (BAR). NIGHT
Two guys and a girl walk out as Rose enters the gender-neutral washroom. Rose peeks under the stalls until she spots Claire’s shoes. Rose stands in front of the stall and waits, nervous but determined. When Claire opens the door, Rose leans into her and kisses her passionately. Then Rose pulls away and they look at each other in amazement.
ROSE (BREATHLESS)
I’ve been wanting to do that all night,
but we kept getting interrupted.
CLAIRE (BREATHLESS)
I know, come here.
Claire returns the kiss just as passionately, pulling Rose back inside the stall and latching the door.
FULL SHOT WASHROOM STALL – DOLLY IN TO ROSE AND CLAIRE’S FEET
(Phone rings)
ROSE (VOICE OFF)
Oh shit, it’s my Dad!
CLAIRE (VOICE OFF)
Answer it!
ROSE (VOICE OFF)
I can’t with the music playing
so loud. I have to text him.
CUT TO:
FULL SHOT OVER THE STALL
Both Rose and Claire look at the cellphone’s screen.
TEXT – ROSE
Can’t answer. Watching a movie
TEXT – DAD
How much longer?
TEXT – ROSE
1 hour?
TEXT – DAD
Ok. Pick you up in 1 hour.
Rose and Claire look at each other and giggle. They wrap their arms around each other.
CLAIRE
Thanks for an amazing night.
ROSE
In the washroom stall of a gay bar?
CLAIRE
Well we met in a washroom.
Kind of hard habit to break.
Laughing and holding hands, Rose and Claire leave the stall and walk out of the washroom.
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EXT. EVA’S HOUSE. NIGHT
Rose, Claire and Kenny sit on the sidewalk of a residential street, waiting for Nathan. Nathan pulls up and all three get inside the car.
INT. NATHAN’S CAR. NIGHT
NATHAN
So, how was Eva’s?
ROSE, CLAIRE AND KENNY
Good!
NATHAN
What did you do?
ROSE (LOOKING AT KENNY)
Oh, you know, the usual. Listen to music
KENNY (LOOKING AT CLAIRE)
Dance a little
CLAIRE (WINKING AT ROSE)
And then we watched a romantic movie.
Through the rear view mirror Nathan sees Claire and Rose holding hands. He smiles. The car pulls over and Kenny gets out.
KENNY
Thanks for the ride Nathan!
NATHAN
Any time Kenny!
ROSE AND CLAIRE
G’night Kenny! See you at school!
Nathan drives off.
NATHAN (TO ROSE AND CLAIRE)
Make any new friends at Eva’s?
CLAIRE (LOOKING AT ROSE)
Yeah… Actually, her cousin is visiting from Russia.
Rose squeezes Claire’s hand trying not to laugh.
NATHAN
Did you have a good time Blossom?
ROSE (LOOKING AT CLAIRE)
Yeah, it was pretty cool. I think Eva
wants to have us over again soon.
The girls smile widely at each other. The car pulls up to Claire’s house. Rose gets out of the car and offers her hand to help Claire out. As Claire gets out, her fake ID slips out of her purse and falls onto the floor of the back seat of the car.
EXT. CLAIRE’S HOUSE. NIGHT
Rose and Claire stand outside the front door. Nathan tries to turn his head away from them to give them a little privacy.
ROSE
I meant what I said in the car, I’m looking
forward to hanging out at “Eva’s” again.
CLAIRE (SMILING BROADLY)
Me too!
Rose glances toward her father to check he’s not looking, and then gives Claire a quick kiss on the lips.
ROSE
Have a good night.
CLAIRE
You too. Call you tomorrow.
Rose gets back in the car and Nathan drives away.
THE END
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P1nk13 asked me to provide you all the PDF of this story since it’s in screenplay format: https://lesfan.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/Be-Longing.pdf
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Aw such a sweet story!