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    Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 28)

    The rest of the visit with my Dad went very well, I think. My mom was held up at work again, so she wasn’t able to make it for dinner; Ashley would never have said anything, but I could tell she was relieved.

    “That wasn’t so bad, was it?” I asked her as we drove back to her apartment.

    “Nope, not at all. But then again, your mom never came… that might have been a factor.”

    “Yeah. I’m a little angry though. I mean, I haven’t seen her in a few months; you’d think she could make the effort to get back to see me.”

    “Don’t worry about it… who needs moms when you’ve got me?”

    “Good point,” I laughed. I checked the clock, noting that it was already 8:30. “What are we doing tonight?”

    “I don’t know… do you want to meet some of my other friends?”

    “Sure.”

    “Yeah?”

    “Yup,” I replied. I meant it, too. I wanted to know everything about Ashley’s life in L.A., and that included the people she hung out with. Ashley spent the next few minutes on her cell, calling people to figure out plans. I kind of missed being able to do that; with my friend situation in New York, I didn’t exactly have that many people to coordinate with. Or anyone, really, besides Carrie, who I still didn’t hang out with that much.

    “So… I think a bunch of people are going to hang out at Aiden and Michelle’s tonight,” she concluded.

    “Alright, that sounds good.”

    “Yeah, and if it gets boring, I only live a few floors away,” she grinned.

    “Good point,” I replied. “Do, um… your friends… know who I am?”

    “Most of them, yeah.”

    “Oh.”

    “Definitely not as much as Michelle knows… I mean, they know we were together in high school and that, like, I went to New York to see you. But not everything, you know?”

    “Yeah.”

    “They’re cool though… well, obviously… they’d have to be cool to be friends with me,” she joked.

    “Riiiiight,” I teased. She laughed as we pulled into her parking lot and left the confines of the car to walk inside.

    It took us about a half hour to get changed and ready to go, and I have to say, Ashley looked hot when all was said and done. She was wearing jeans that seemed to perfectly accentuate all the right spots on her body, and a shirt that left very little to the imagination, without being trashy… basically, typical Ashley attire.

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    1. absolutly LOVE!!!! They story line makes so much sense and your writing is totally fabulous. I can’t wait to read more of this and maybe some of your other fic…PLEASE!!!! Have a great New Year!PMS

    2. excellent update for sure!! its going to be so sad when spencer leaves and goes back to new york :-(. OH I KNOW! you should have her move back to L.A. and live with ashley and then you can do a double wedding with spashley and aiden and michelle! how amazing would that be?! PRETTY FREAKIN thats what i’m thinkin! haha

    3. I’m being nothing but completely honest when I say that I actually let out a yelp lol when I noticed that you (finally) posted :)!I really like your story and writing….and of course the lack of Paula ;)Please….no….pretty pretty please ;) PMS!

    4. FFFINALLY! But i really need to read more soon, because I recently found one of my other favorite stories (this definitely is number 1.) is being ended soon! It broke my heart. Seriously. Mend it?

    5. I Love your story. It is one of the few I am constantly checking this site to see if it’s been updated. I love what you have done in this story so far, and this chapter in not an exception. I can’t wait to read what happens after this night…hopefully Spence will continue along the thought lines that everything is feeling perfect being in LA! oh yea….and of course Red Bull goes with alcohol…mmm jager bombs! PMS!!!!

    6. oooooh baby!!! wow…i was in utter bliss when i saw that you had posted again!!! and this was even better than i had expected! thank you for writing this amazing story!!! please post more soon!

    7. I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! I am so happy that you wrote another chapter and I am glad that Ashley and Spencer finally had sex!!!! LOL!!!! I am such a horn dog, LMAO!!!! ANYWAYS, I hope that you had a great new years day and I hope that you will PMS and have a GREAT YEAR!!!!! You are my favorite author on this site.

    8. Holy Cow. Forget what I said in that last comment of mine. This is BY FAR MY FAVORITE POST! I mean it. This was the best. I’m in love with it. This is my favorite story on the whole site. I’m not even kidding. I love this story so much and I die a little inside each time I don’t see an update from you. But that one single post every few days reanimates me and I jump up into the sky and cheer and yell and shout and then sit down quietly and read your story very intently. You have no idea how amazing you are and I feel the need to tell you that there is no one out there like you. This is so great. Please, please, please, please update soon!!!! Please. :-]

    9. absolutly LOVE!!!! They story line makes so much sense and your writing is totally fabulous. I can’t wait to read more of this and maybe some of your other fic…PLEASE!!!! Have a great New Year!PMS

    10. excellent update for sure!! its going to be so sad when spencer leaves and goes back to new york :-(. OH I KNOW! you should have her move back to L.A. and live with ashley and then you can do a double wedding with spashley and aiden and michelle! how amazing would that be?! PRETTY FREAKIN thats what i’m thinkin! haha

    11. I’m being nothing but completely honest when I say that I actually let out a yelp lol when I noticed that you (finally) posted :)!I really like your story and writing….and of course the lack of Paula ;)Please….no….pretty pretty please ;) PMS!

    12. FFFINALLY! But i really need to read more soon, because I recently found one of my other favorite stories (this definitely is number 1.) is being ended soon! It broke my heart. Seriously. Mend it?

    13. I Love your story. It is one of the few I am constantly checking this site to see if it’s been updated. I love what you have done in this story so far, and this chapter in not an exception. I can’t wait to read what happens after this night…hopefully Spence will continue along the thought lines that everything is feeling perfect being in LA! oh yea….and of course Red Bull goes with alcohol…mmm jager bombs! PMS!!!!

    14. oooooh baby!!! wow…i was in utter bliss when i saw that you had posted again!!! and this was even better than i had expected! thank you for writing this amazing story!!! please post more soon!

    15. I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! I am so happy that you wrote another chapter and I am glad that Ashley and Spencer finally had sex!!!! LOL!!!! I am such a horn dog, LMAO!!!! ANYWAYS, I hope that you had a great new years day and I hope that you will PMS and have a GREAT YEAR!!!!! You are my favorite author on this site.

    16. Holy Cow. Forget what I said in that last comment of mine. This is BY FAR MY FAVORITE POST! I mean it. This was the best. I’m in love with it. This is my favorite story on the whole site. I’m not even kidding. I love this story so much and I die a little inside each time I don’t see an update from you. But that one single post every few days reanimates me and I jump up into the sky and cheer and yell and shout and then sit down quietly and read your story very intently. You have no idea how amazing you are and I feel the need to tell you that there is no one out there like you. This is so great. Please, please, please, please update soon!!!! Please. :-]

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