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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 35)
As Ashley and I remained stagnant, my friendship with Carrie was strengthening immensely. Ironically, she was the first person since Ashley who I felt comfortable around; she was someone I could trust, and someone I liked to spend time with. Was it anything more than a friendship with her, though? Absolutely not. There was no romantic attraction there whatsoever. But because I felt like Ashley would have a difficult time believing that, I downplayed the time I spent with Carrie. In reality, she was over my place generally everyday. We ate dinner together pretty often, as Chris wasn’t home to eat with her, and we talked a lot about our love lives and the problems we were both facing. It was good to have someone to talk to who, unlike Michelle, wouldn’t tell Ashley everything I said 10 minutes later. She also provided more of an outside perspective than anyone, and I was extremely grateful for that.
Things with Chris didn’t seem to be changing much for Carrie. We’d discussed a lot of strategies for restoring their relationship, but it didn’t seem like any of them were working. He never wanted to talk about anything, and she was too passive to push the issue. It was an eternal cycle of unhappiness for Carrie, and I felt terrible about it.
Thursday, the week before Ashley’s arrival, Carrie and I were sitting in my apartment, enjoying a dinner of pad thai noodles, when I heard a knock at the door. I walked over and opened it up, wondering what on earth FedEx could want from me on a Thursday night. The man at my door handed over a clipboard and indicated where I should sign. I did as such, noting that the package had been overnighted, and took it from him, closing the door behind me.
“Who was that?” Carrie asked.
“The FedEx guy. I got a package.”
“From who?”
“I don’t know. Can you hand me a knife?” I requested. She handed one over and I cut open the tape on the box in front of me. When I opened it up, I saw 2 different plastic bags of different sizes. I took the larger bag and stuck my hand inside, feeling some article of clothing and what seemed like a card. Aha! I pulled it out and opened it up. It read: ‘One for me, one for you. Oh, and a little something for Benny. Can’t wait for next week! Love, Ashley.’
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insertcleveranswer says
When I saw the title and it said “My name is Spencer Carlin and I messed up”, I automatically thought ‘oh no, Ashley and Spencer are going to fight again. I was so worried. Is it sad that I’m relieved that Spencer is fighting with just Carrie? Spencer still needs to apologize though. Yes, Spencer and Ashley are definitely in a relationship, even if that’s not what they’re calling it. HELLO ASHLEY! When you don’t want to sleep with other people, that’s called a relationship. Now just stop being so stubborn and make it official. Man, I SO love this story. I can’t wait until you update again so please do so soon.
insertcleveranswer says
Have you noticed I’ve been the first to comment on the last several chapters? I’m not sure that’s something to be proud of. In fact, it probably means I have no life but I can’t help it. I love this story!
insertcleveranswer says
I forgot to say one thing. How sweet was Ashley in sending Spencer a sweatshirt and a toy for Benny!! So sweet! Okay, I promise, I’m done now.
tay0720 says
awww yay ashley for being the biggest sweetheart EVER! well…almost. if she’d just friggin admit they’re in a relationship spencer wouldn’t so effed up. and carrie’s right! spencer does hate her job, she needs to just give it up. do it for her and ashley. happiness is what they both deserve. excellent update!!
AugustLove says
As always…loving it. (Sorry comment short..had to rush)
PHENIX says
I love this story ,Omg the sweatshirt part was soooo sweet, that was like the cutest thing ever!! I would pretty much accept a sock from ashley…joking, well not really i would lmao lol love this chapter can’t wait for the next. keep up the good work :D
dddisfunctional says
guigehu, Agreed with insertcleveranswer
schminda says
ok…first of all – phew! i thought that spence and ash were going to fight…but secondly…what the heck! spencer was sooo mean to carrie. i feel soo bad for her. hopefully they can make up and be happy! and thank goodness for Carrie actually telling spencer that she hates her job…can’t wait for the next one!
PM76 says
Alright, so did an alien inhabit Spencer or something? You know, a really mean, harsh alien? Hah, now that would make for an interesting plot twist…anyways, I love your story and can’t wait for the next chapter.
stainsonmyskirt says
Apologise Spence :( Or just pack up and move to LA leaving Carrie to do whatever it is she does. PMS
insertcleveranswer says
When I saw the title and it said “My name is Spencer Carlin and I messed up”, I automatically thought ‘oh no, Ashley and Spencer are going to fight again. I was so worried. Is it sad that I’m relieved that Spencer is fighting with just Carrie? Spencer still needs to apologize though. Yes, Spencer and Ashley are definitely in a relationship, even if that’s not what they’re calling it. HELLO ASHLEY! When you don’t want to sleep with other people, that’s called a relationship. Now just stop being so stubborn and make it official. Man, I SO love this story. I can’t wait until you update again so please do so soon.
insertcleveranswer says
Have you noticed I’ve been the first to comment on the last several chapters? I’m not sure that’s something to be proud of. In fact, it probably means I have no life but I can’t help it. I love this story!
insertcleveranswer says
I forgot to say one thing. How sweet was Ashley in sending Spencer a sweatshirt and a toy for Benny!! So sweet! Okay, I promise, I’m done now.
tay0720 says
awww yay ashley for being the biggest sweetheart EVER! well…almost. if she’d just friggin admit they’re in a relationship spencer wouldn’t so effed up. and carrie’s right! spencer does hate her job, she needs to just give it up. do it for her and ashley. happiness is what they both deserve. excellent update!!
AugustLove says
As always…loving it. (Sorry comment short..had to rush)
PHENIX says
I love this story ,Omg the sweatshirt part was soooo sweet, that was like the cutest thing ever!! I would pretty much accept a sock from ashley…joking, well not really i would lmao lol love this chapter can’t wait for the next. keep up the good work :D
dddisfunctional says
guigehu, Agreed with insertcleveranswer
schminda says
ok…first of all – phew! i thought that spence and ash were going to fight…but secondly…what the heck! spencer was sooo mean to carrie. i feel soo bad for her. hopefully they can make up and be happy! and thank goodness for Carrie actually telling spencer that she hates her job…can’t wait for the next one!
PM76 says
Alright, so did an alien inhabit Spencer or something? You know, a really mean, harsh alien? Hah, now that would make for an interesting plot twist…anyways, I love your story and can’t wait for the next chapter.
stainsonmyskirt says
Apologise Spence :( Or just pack up and move to LA leaving Carrie to do whatever it is she does. PMS
_barely_breathing_ says
Good chapter! Poor Spencer, problems with Ash still and now fighting with Carrie, damn she needs a break! Update soon!
_barely_breathing_ says
Good chapter! Poor Spencer, problems with Ash still and now fighting with Carrie, damn she needs a break! Update soon!
hdgallant says
Damn spencer go fix things with carrie. And move to LA to be with ashely. Wonderful update. PMS
hdgallant says
Damn spencer go fix things with carrie. And move to LA to be with ashely. Wonderful update. PMS
Broken_Childe says
Sooo Spencer has a once in a lifetime job in NY????? What about the once in a lifetime g/f you have in LA???? You can always get another job but you can’t always find someone you care so deeply about! Wait I’m argueing with a character in a story! Sorry nice update… more soon PLEASE??? :-)
Broken_Childe says
Sooo Spencer has a once in a lifetime job in NY????? What about the once in a lifetime g/f you have in LA???? You can always get another job but you can’t always find someone you care so deeply about! Wait I’m argueing with a character in a story! Sorry nice update… more soon PLEASE??? :-)
tylo says
spence ur being a ass say ur sorry
tylo says
spence ur being a ass say ur sorry