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Creature – (Chapter: Zace)
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“We walked over a hundred miles to get where we gone, but the truth is, it was just the beginning of our journey.” – Ana Zapata
Chapter 1
I snapped the book close and stare intently at the brunet in front of me. waiting for him to give me some kind of sign that he was going to open his mouth.
“Look… even though I love you gawking at me, I would appreciate it if you talk or leave.”
Stupid fucker.
I feel a shadow over me and the boy looks up and walks away. “It’s nothing personal. He drools when new girls come into town.” Her features are amazingly flawless. Her dark brown hair reaches to her shoulders but her eyes…. one eye is an amazing piercing blue. Kinda reminds me of mine and the other is the greenest green I have ever seen.
Does that making any sense to you? Cause I totally went blank.
“Yes I have two different color eyes.” she smirks and looks me up and down. “Your eyes are pretty cool as well.”
“Uh… thanks.. sorry for staring but they intrigue me.” I smile back and look her up and down too. Indie chick.
“It’s cool.” She nods. “I am your welcome committee to this new joint.”
Oh really?
“Now. Time to get t he basics done.” She looks around the quad and smiles. “lets start from the far left.” I look over and see a whole bunch of people crowding around a computer. “This is just like every high school, but a little more extreme if you ask me.”
I nod.
“They are the tech guys. Need fake id’s, fake documentation for your friend ‘Pablo’.” She does air quotes. “Those are the guys to go to.”
I like this girl.
We move our eyes to the next table. “They like to think of themselves as cool. But they are just a whole bunch of wannabe’s who enjoy copying the first person who walks by them…. Observe.” I watch carefully and I see this tiny little burnet stares at a curly red head with a mini skirt and a red tank top, walking past her. she grabs her pencil and her note pad and starts jotting stuff down.”
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dude this leaves me wanting to read more!!! what the hell? i want to know whats going on.PMS!!!!1 BTW the twilight movie sucked. the books were better, and in the movie Edward sounded slow. the only thing good about it was Kristen Stewart. there i said my peace, now get to writing
yea you need to keep going with this one. I’m dying to know about spence’s past! so you absolutely must pms or I will Jedi mind trick you.
Great start. The fight was awesome. Please continue, anxious to find out what’s up with Spencer.
what an intro chapter…def keep going i’m so interested. what is it with all these gangs and was there no teacher to magically show up pms
i have to agree with ‘likeaheartneedsabeat’it leaves me wanting more,and the whole time the fight started i was like where the fuck are the teachers and security i hear schools have higher security especialy in violent schools and this was like a gang fight on the wrong side of l.a im suddenly thankfull i have an ass cuzin that wanted to teach me how to fight an dbasicly beat me till i kicked his ass once lol well pms please :)
awesome, this is going to be good. and u know what, i’m glad ur went the scifi route, it suites u and there isn’t a lot of it on this site- pms!
oh this is fucking awesome u better continue this
This is hella good. I agree with jazziejazz. I’m glad I actually went to Jujitsu ’cause if this shit happened and I didn’t know how to fight, I would probably die. Haha. Awesome PMS!