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Creature – (Chapter: Zace)
Zace slowly turned around revealing her blue eye looking black with blue specs in it. her face softened when she saw my fright but some green eyed jock strap wrapped his arms around her neck causing her eye to turn back black as she pulled him over her shoulder slamming him on the ground.
Zace kicked him in the stomach, making me cringe.
What the fuck is going on?!
Zace looks up at me again as my face drains of all color. She slowly walks over revealing her bloody shirt and hair. As she came closer I stepped back. She tried again but I moved away.
I heard a squeal causing both of us to revert our attention to Jules being ganged up by 2 boys and a girl. Jules threw a punch at one of the jocks faces and kicked the other boy in the crotch, but then girl grabbed her hair and pulled her head down and knee’s her in the face. Jules fell with a thud and groaned loud.
DOES ANYONE THINK that this is getting extremely crazy?! This isn’t a high school fight. This is a hardcore street fight, I’m just waiting for someone to pull out a knife.
Zace ran over to her and grabbed the girls arm and bent it backwards before tripping her and kicking her in the stomach.
I start stepping back again until I felt myself being twirled around to be confronted by some girl with black hair and grayish/greenish eyes. She smirked and punched me in the face. I stumbled backwards moaning.
“Zace’s pet needs to learn how to fight.”
Carmen.
I regain my balance and turn my head to the side and smile. “I never said I couldn’t.”
Carmen’s eyes widen as she opens her mouth but before she says anything I growl loudly, lunging and tackling her to the ground. I grab her wrist with one hand and punch her in the face with the other. She pushes me off and we both stand up. She tries to hit me again but I dodge and upper cut her making her stumble back.
My breathing becomes so loud I can’t hear the screams everyone is doing. I stepped forward about to grab her neck…. I’m going to end this.
Zace comes from the side and sucker punches Carmen to the floor. She doesn’t get up and I relax, for a moment before I realize what I just did. I cant breathe.
Oh fuck. What the fuck.
I think I’m having a fucking panic attack?! i haven’t had one since I was 12!
Everything is reminding me of it. of everything that happened when I was younger. And I can’t let it happen again.
I started breathing shallow and loud and I just have to get away from this… place…. From her.
I turn and run down the hall and out of the school. I don’t stop until I hit a dead end in an alley 2 miles away and I just collapse. I curl myself up in a ball and start rocking back and forth trying to get my breathing under control.
I can’t be there anymore. I can’t fight people. It hurts me more than it hurts them.
Whoever this Zace girl is. She will be the end of me. She will destroy everything that I fought so hard to stop.
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dude this leaves me wanting to read more!!! what the hell? i want to know whats going on.PMS!!!!1 BTW the twilight movie sucked. the books were better, and in the movie Edward sounded slow. the only thing good about it was Kristen Stewart. there i said my peace, now get to writing
yea you need to keep going with this one. I’m dying to know about spence’s past! so you absolutely must pms or I will Jedi mind trick you.
Great start. The fight was awesome. Please continue, anxious to find out what’s up with Spencer.
what an intro chapter…def keep going i’m so interested. what is it with all these gangs and was there no teacher to magically show up pms
i have to agree with ‘likeaheartneedsabeat’it leaves me wanting more,and the whole time the fight started i was like where the fuck are the teachers and security i hear schools have higher security especialy in violent schools and this was like a gang fight on the wrong side of l.a im suddenly thankfull i have an ass cuzin that wanted to teach me how to fight an dbasicly beat me till i kicked his ass once lol well pms please :)
awesome, this is going to be good. and u know what, i’m glad ur went the scifi route, it suites u and there isn’t a lot of it on this site- pms!
oh this is fucking awesome u better continue this
This is hella good. I agree with jazziejazz. I’m glad I actually went to Jujitsu ’cause if this shit happened and I didn’t know how to fight, I would probably die. Haha. Awesome PMS!