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Don’t Cry Out.
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Without hesitation, Spencer dumped the pills into her mouth, then leaned over the sink and filled a cupped hand with cool water. She splashed it in after the pills, washing them easily down her throat. Watch out, boys. Here come the cops.
She pulled up from the sink, wiping water from her lips with the back of her hand, and looked at herself in the mirror. She looked tired and worn. Her hand groped the wall for the light, and she switched it off before she could get a better look.
Another wave of pain from the headache washed over her, and the memory rushed back.
Don’t cry out.
She couldn’t believe her brothers had convinced her to do this. Spencer was never one for clubs or parties or most things that required being a very social person. Mostly because she wasn’t the loud, exciting type. She daydreamed and walked aimlessly, rather than relaxing, having a good time, and being a wild teenager in general. That was Aiden’s job; being the life of the party, thudding his buddies on their backs heartily as they chugged watered-down beer from plastic red cups, making the jokes, and tugging Spencer around with their arms linked together, a false sign of their so-called ‘connection’.
Was she really angry at him for breaking up with her? She couldn’t remember the last time they’d had fun, and it wasn’t because things had gotten too serious. In fact, it was the opposite. He’d kept her around to show off to the crowd, his parents in particular, but Spencer knew he’d craved something new, something different, and something edgier than a quiet, small-town girl from Ohio. She’d seen him look at other girls in ways that she, herself, could never remember being looked at. Lusted after. Wanted. She couldn’t help but wish that someone might look at her with that same intensity in their eyes, someday. Boys had looked at her before, sure. But not like that. Never like that.
The party to which they’d taken her was somehow much bigger and livelier than anything she’d ever been to with Aiden. Or, perhaps it only seemed that way; after all, Spencer had usually let her mind wander as she was dragged around parties with Aiden, and never really had a chance to actually enjoy any of them. Particularly because neither she nor Aiden ever really gave her that chance. Now, maybe she could finally loosen up. Maybe she could finally have some fun.
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Hey,Are you going to finish this story? Please finish because I can’t believe Ashley was so cruel. It makes you wonder if she would’ve done that if she met Spencer that way. Because she cut alot of girl’s off after sex…I think. But, please finish this or have some sweet girl kiss Spencer and make her feel better. I al most cried because this is how my first time was;(You made me wanna cry on a friday! How mean! PMS PLS
Hey,Are you going to finish this story? Please finish because I can’t believe Ashley was so cruel. It makes you wonder if she would’ve done that if she met Spencer that way. Because she cut alot of girl’s off after sex…I think. But, please finish this or have some sweet girl kiss Spencer and make her feel better. I al most cried because this is how my first time was;(You made me wanna cry on a friday! How mean! PMS PLS
OMG! You’ve got to continue. You’re going to contiue right? You’d better! =) This was a really good post. One of the better ones, actually.
you have to continue this ash that was mean longer
you have to continue this ash that was mean longer
Okay, so I left a big long comment and it got eaten. I’ll try again…. So, this was fabulous. If you choose to continue, great, but if you don’t, I understand. This fic is perfect as it stands. You capture each character and their actions perfectly. Poor Spencer – not understanding what she wants until she gets it with someone who is really perfect for her, but they’ll never know. And, though it went unspoken in this fic, poor Ashley. We know she’s hurting inside, too. If only she would’ve opened her eyes and seen Spence for what she is. Their love was so close, yet so distant. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I love it.
Hey,Are you going to finish this story? Please finish because I can’t believe Ashley was so cruel. It makes you wonder if she would’ve done that if she met Spencer that way. Because she cut alot of girl’s off after sex…I think. But, please finish this or have some sweet girl kiss Spencer and make her feel better. I al most cried because this is how my first time was;(You made me wanna cry on a friday! How mean! PMS PLS
Hey,Are you going to finish this story? Please finish because I can’t believe Ashley was so cruel. It makes you wonder if she would’ve done that if she met Spencer that way. Because she cut alot of girl’s off after sex…I think. But, please finish this or have some sweet girl kiss Spencer and make her feel better. I al most cried because this is how my first time was;(You made me wanna cry on a friday! How mean! PMS PLS
OMG! You’ve got to continue. You’re going to contiue right? You’d better! =) This was a really good post. One of the better ones, actually.
you have to continue this ash that was mean longer
you have to continue this ash that was mean longer
Okay, so I left a big long comment and it got eaten. I’ll try again…. So, this was fabulous. If you choose to continue, great, but if you don’t, I understand. This fic is perfect as it stands. You capture each character and their actions perfectly. Poor Spencer – not understanding what she wants until she gets it with someone who is really perfect for her, but they’ll never know. And, though it went unspoken in this fic, poor Ashley. We know she’s hurting inside, too. If only she would’ve opened her eyes and seen Spence for what she is. Their love was so close, yet so distant. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I love it.
pleeaasseee tell me this wasnt a one-shot..please…i really hope u continue it…
pleeaasseee tell me this wasnt a one-shot..please…i really hope u continue it…
I really like this version of how they meet! cracking one shot, and could be a brilliant start to a story. gonna carry on? I think people want you to ;-) I know I do.
I really like this version of how they meet! cracking one shot, and could be a brilliant start to a story. gonna carry on? I think people want you to ;-) I know I do.
Fantastic! I would just suggest a bit more dialogue in the next post (Because you ARE going to post AREN’T YOU?! :P)
Fantastic! I would just suggest a bit more dialogue in the next post (Because you ARE going to post AREN’T YOU?! :P)
Your going to write more to this story right? I hope you do. Wow that shocks me that ashley was mean to spencer.
Your going to write more to this story right? I hope you do. Wow that shocks me that ashley was mean to spencer.
Don’t you love it when conveniently talented writers happen to stroll on by, drop one hell of a story, and then knock you out of your socks. It’s a good thing for me that i wasn’t wearing any socks, but you left me with my jaw on the floor anyway. You need no help with your fiction. That was somewhat perfect. I’m in total agreement with goober (and not just cos she’s my friend and she’ll beat the living crap out of me if I don’t agree with her), this fic is perfect as it stands and don’t let anyone push you if you want to leave it that way. As a fellow fic writer I understand the perfection of a one parter. But if you choose, out of your own soul, to continue, I shall be first in line going “oh yeah, baby YEAH!”. In a slightly less dodgy way than it first sounds when you read it out loud. Spencer finally reaching fulfilment. Ashley cold because it was.. dare I say it, awesome and she’s scared. MMm.. more Spashley sex… and some.. oh well, we’ll see eh :) If you don’t do more of this, how about starting another? I’ll read it and i promise to comment :)
Don’t you love it when conveniently talented writers happen to stroll on by, drop one hell of a story, and then knock you out of your socks. It’s a good thing for me that i wasn’t wearing any socks, but you left me with my jaw on the floor anyway. You need no help with your fiction. That was somewhat perfect. I’m in total agreement with goober (and not just cos she’s my friend and she’ll beat the living crap out of me if I don’t agree with her), this fic is perfect as it stands and don’t let anyone push you if you want to leave it that way. As a fellow fic writer I understand the perfection of a one parter. But if you choose, out of your own soul, to continue, I shall be first in line going “oh yeah, baby YEAH!”. In a slightly less dodgy way than it first sounds when you read it out loud. Spencer finally reaching fulfilment. Ashley cold because it was.. dare I say it, awesome and she’s scared. MMm.. more Spashley sex… and some.. oh well, we’ll see eh :) If you don’t do more of this, how about starting another? I’ll read it and i promise to comment :)