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    Knock You Down – (Chapter: 1. You got me thinkin about our life, our house, and kids)

    Story written on August 19, 2009 by roxystyle011.
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    Save Tonight & Heartless sequel…threequel? Well, it’s the third Installment.

    This place still looks exactly the same as it did the last time I was here, hell it looks the same as the first time I was here. Have you ever gone back to a place that holds strong ties to your heart, you can feel the same emotions as you did the first time, you can feel your stomach doing flips inside of you just by thinking about what took place there. This place, this, this resort does that for me, this girl does that to me. I never, and I mean never in all my adolescent years ever thought I’d be at this point in my life. The point where decisions were weighted and discussed, the definition changing drastically from what I wanted for dinner to what shade of paint the living room would be. Decisions were long term and would not only affect myself anymore, they would affect another. Responsibilities were no longer remembering to do my homework every night but remembering to pay rent and car insurance. I was no longer living for myself; I was living for another human being. My selfish ways vanished, I knew before I even realized it was happening that I was changing, I was growing up.

     

    I liked to take a quiet stroll at least once every time I was here, to just remember. Remember what I was like, remember what she was like, and remember what that week was like. The first week I ever spent with her, god it was all so new and unreal. The mutual attraction we shared, the magnetic pull I felt, the uncertainty, the tears, the mistakes, her resistance, the adrenaline rush, her intoxicating features, my stupidity, it was a roller coaster ride I never wanted to get off. She was addicting, I craved her when I wasn’t around her, and I savored her when I was around her. My palms tingled, my chest tightened, my knees were incapable of holding my body up without a great deal of effort, her words hung in the air long after she said them, my eyes glazed over when she looked at me, the temperature of my face was at least 8 degrees hotter than my body, and my body was always on fire when she was near. She was absolutely mind shatteringly beautiful, inside and out. Her innocence intrigued me, her laugh hypnotized me, her touch numbed me, her eyes mesmerized me and her personality astounded me. She just amazed me, she was amazing in every way a person could be. 

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    1. Oh, Amie, that was wonderful…just wonderful. I loved everything from Ashley’s pov, I loved learning about their relatonship now, their fake fighting, loved the Ash/Blake/Shannon prep scene! I smell the drama and it’s going to be amazing. Perfect! I’m so excited! Please don’t make me wait long, I’m dying to read more!

    2. that was soo good im so excied your back!!i definitly chose to read this instead of do my homework ill just do it during school tomorrow not a big deal anyways pms!!

    3. woo hoo! youre back! and this story is back! loved every syllable :) stix already pointed out my favorite parts up there so ill just second them all :)

    4. YAY!!! I loved loved loved the other stories so now I’m super excited. You’re for real one of my favorite authors. So keep writing, woman. It’s fantastic already.

    5. this is beyond fantastic already! I can’t even tell you how happy I am that you’re back. I loved getting ash’s view of everything and I simply can’t wait for more. I hope your diligently typing away as I type this because I neeeeed the next chapter!!!

    6. haha *sigh* that was absolutely wonderful! i loved it so much and how we got to learn of Ashleys thoughts and ordeals that had to do with their relationship…hehe loved the fake fighting and my favorite line was it was like I was watching an episode of Law and Order on a continuous loop, the only crime she was committing was stealing my heart…ahha tha one made me smile hehe great job =]

    7. Wow! Honestly, that knocked my socks off and that was chapter 1? Just…wow! It was perfect and I got so much insight into Ashley’s side of the story and it’s added a whole new depth which I can see you expanding on…hopefully very soon?? I’m totally entranced so please can we have some more???

    8. yesss sooo glad you’re writing part three!!! this has always been one of my favourite stories, i love your writing! i laughed out loud when spencer and ashley had their fake fight. can’t wait to read more, pms!!!!

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