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    Knock You Down – (Chapter: 1. You got me thinkin about our life, our house, and kids)

     

    I took my brave step forward into the light, trying my best not to make a sound but she sensed me anyway and turned to face me with her brilliant smile that I loved almost as much as her. She still looked as young as the first day we met, still breathtakingly beautiful.

     

    “Lurking in the shadows again, are we?” she teased

     

    That was one time, and I was trying to surprise her.

     

    I blushed and looked down as I approached her, she noticed my bashfulness instantly and reached for my cheek as I came to a slow stop in front of her.

     

    The speech in my head that I prepared seemed to have disappeared, vanished without a trace, my amnesia resulting from the strikingly gorgeous blonde shining down on me. Hell, after 5 years and some change I was still intimidated by her, vulnerable and out of my element when she looked at me with her deep penetrating gaze.

     

    “Hey, what’s up?” she asked, reading my face for any obvious clues for my sudden shyness

     

    “Nothing I, Spence listen”

     

    Panic broke out on her delicate features as she waiting patiently while I struggled to find the right words.

     

    “I’ve been thinking a lot” I start

     

    An amused smile graces her lips, and her eye brow raises playfully

     

    “I know, I’ve been thinking, shocker right?” I’m returned with a laugh, all the courage I need to continue, “You mean the world to me and I just wanted to say, well ask you if..”

     

    “Oh my god, there you guys are!”

     

    Spencer’s gaze travels beyond my shoulder and I don’t even have to turn around to know who it is.

     

    “Kyla? Oh my god! What are you doing here?” she asks confused, with a hint of excitement, like she can’t believe it

     

    Honestly? I can. Interruptions love us

     

    I turn around now as Spencer rushes past me to greet her old friend, I try desperately to wipe off my frustrated look at her unwelcomed timing but I know it’s not her fault, she had no idea what was about to take place.

     

    My blonde releases her from a warm embrace and her eyes travel to me as I approach the two girls 

     

    She looks back an forth between my exasperated face and Spencer’s questioning eyes, “I’m so sorry, did I interrupt something?” Spencer and I share a look, she’s wondering the same thing

     

    “No of course not, come here!” I pull her into a big hug letting the uncomfortable atmosphere vanish

     

    “What’s up, what are you doing in Florida?” Spencer asks, I also would like to know the answer to that question

     

    “Well…” she hesitates, making us uncontrollably lean closer to her as we await her answer

     

    I wrap my arm around Spencer’s shoulders, pulling her slightly closer to me

     

    “you see…Aiden and I, well we broke up”

     

    Silence.

     

    Deafening silence.

     

    My arm drops from Spencer’s shoulders.

     

    “You, um, you what?” Spencer asks, rubbing her throat with her hand to soothe it

     

    “Yeah what?” I ask

     

    Her eyes dance like ping pong balls as she looks back and forth between our stares

     

    “Well technically, he broke up with me” she continues, “So now I’m here on the rebound!” she claps her hands and laughs nervously “Let’s go bar hopping!”

     

    Yes, let’s…I could use a drink right about now and by the looks up it, so could my soon to be fiancée.

     

    And something tells me that this vacation isn’t going to go as smooth as I originally anticipated.

     

    Cheers. 

    Comments

    1. Oh, Amie, that was wonderful…just wonderful. I loved everything from Ashley’s pov, I loved learning about their relatonship now, their fake fighting, loved the Ash/Blake/Shannon prep scene! I smell the drama and it’s going to be amazing. Perfect! I’m so excited! Please don’t make me wait long, I’m dying to read more!

    2. that was soo good im so excied your back!!i definitly chose to read this instead of do my homework ill just do it during school tomorrow not a big deal anyways pms!!

    3. woo hoo! youre back! and this story is back! loved every syllable :) stix already pointed out my favorite parts up there so ill just second them all :)

    4. YAY!!! I loved loved loved the other stories so now I’m super excited. You’re for real one of my favorite authors. So keep writing, woman. It’s fantastic already.

    5. this is beyond fantastic already! I can’t even tell you how happy I am that you’re back. I loved getting ash’s view of everything and I simply can’t wait for more. I hope your diligently typing away as I type this because I neeeeed the next chapter!!!

    6. haha *sigh* that was absolutely wonderful! i loved it so much and how we got to learn of Ashleys thoughts and ordeals that had to do with their relationship…hehe loved the fake fighting and my favorite line was it was like I was watching an episode of Law and Order on a continuous loop, the only crime she was committing was stealing my heart…ahha tha one made me smile hehe great job =]

    7. Wow! Honestly, that knocked my socks off and that was chapter 1? Just…wow! It was perfect and I got so much insight into Ashley’s side of the story and it’s added a whole new depth which I can see you expanding on…hopefully very soon?? I’m totally entranced so please can we have some more???

    8. yesss sooo glad you’re writing part three!!! this has always been one of my favourite stories, i love your writing! i laughed out loud when spencer and ashley had their fake fight. can’t wait to read more, pms!!!!

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