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Marshall Daniel's Boarding School For Girls – (Chapter: Chapter 18 Through Doors)
Ashley: “No, no, no, definitely not this, no, no, out of the question, no, no, no…ah, this is fine!” I stand behind Ashley as she goes through my clothes looking for something “appropriate” for tonight’s “date.” I’m giving her a placating grin seeing as she as just vetoed everything I own, sweatpants and all.
Spencer: “Ashley, I’m not wearing a down jacket.” I say delicately. She frowns and rips the coat off its hanger and holds it up in front of me as a triumphant smile spreads across her lips.
Ashley: “I don’t know why not, Spencer, it really brings out the color of your eyes.” Than her brow furrows and she begins to shake her head in negation. “Never mind, you can’t wear this either.” And she puts it back on its hanger.
Spencer: “Ashley, sweetheart, love of my life, you are not going to find anything in my dresser or closet that suitable for me to wear on a date with another woman, it’s fruitless to keep searching. I know, I tried already going through your stuff!” Her shoulders slump and she pouts as she closes the distance between us with her arms swinging defeated beside her.
Ashley: “If you were, oh I don’t know…kidnapped perhaps, then Cleeden couldn’t claim that you reneged on the contract. And you wouldn’t have to go tonight!” She breathes out against my neck and I wrapped my arms tightly around her.
Spencer: “Why are you so worried, huh?” I pull away to access her as she gives me an incredulous look.
Ashley: “Hello, you’re going out on a date with my own personal Satin, why wouldn’t I worry?!”
Spencer: “Ash, I’m planning on having a very fun evening where I relay the many reasons why I love you. I will drive her crazy and she’ll probably cut the night short. You have nothing and I repeat nothing to worry about. Unless…you’re concerned about what she’ll do to me…” I feel the fear wash over me but Ashley quickly reassures me.
Ashley: “No, she’s a horrible and manipulative person, but not that kind of horrible.”
Spencer: “Okay, I trust your judgment.” Then Ashley mumbles something under her breath as she walks the length of the room over to her and Sara’s closet. “What was that?”
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Razor says
Great Great Great…I’m glad Spencer’s date went well. Sam was on her best behavior and thats a good thing…although I think thoude threats had a little something to do with it. LOL update soon!
SON_4EVER says
hmmm….Sam seemed to be acting a bit too nice…… O well. I especially loved the nicnames. Babylonian! lol! loved it all!!
Mute says
-_- *meditates* … is it tomorrow yet?
penguin says
amazing…soooo..update VERY soon right? Cuz if not..I’ll be very upset..and you really don’t want me going to work upset like that. It’s already bad that I fold clothes all day and deal with mean customers, but if I can’t at leats have THIS story running through my head, than I will be going to the insane asylum! soo..more..like..now? lol please?
chrissy says
Okay…so I have a project due tomorrow that I haven’t started that’s worth like 20% of my semester grade, but I chose to read this instead. I think that’s saying something, don’t you? Lol, well I would read this either way so whatever. I lovedddd Spencer’s drunk talk and giving the nicknames to the other girls. Loved this chapter !
SoNFANFOREVER says
yea the letter to sam was hysterical! feel bad for kelly and sara’s dates cuz i’m sure spence was right about them having sex. can’t wait for the infamous saturday night! should be hot as freaking hell. or will you tease us and make the next chapter about all the other dates? lol just kidding i’m actually very curious about them all. anwyay enough rambling, great job, loved it, please for the love of god pms!
ShAiN says
Fucking awesome man ^.^ im still loving spencer and ashley sexual tension, but i love gage and jess more. Dude you’ve got to do a pov for them all.
ruehl says
oh thank god nothing happened to spencer or between spencer and those girls! i was definitely holding my breath the entire time they were in the hole. can’ttt wait for tomorrrowww!!!
orgy123 says
SO LOVED THE UPDATE AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT AND IT WAS FUNNY HAVING A DRUNK SPENCER GOTTA SAY I LOVER HER I REALLY DO, BUT IS SOMETHING BAD GOING TO HAPPEN CAUSE I HAVE A FEELING AND I’M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD TRUST THIS FEELING, BUT I TRUST YOU AND WHAT YOU HAVE PLANNED NEXT ;)
crazycraze95 says
dude! that was awesome. i liked the whole Elvira/ Babylonian thing. i wonder how everyone else went. please pms
SLR says
well, what can I say? Great as always! I was worried the whole time that something bad was going to happen but I was really happy with the way things turned out! Can’t wait for more.. Pms!!
kangapet says
Well, I must confess I’m surprised with Sam’s behavior. Unless she has something else up her sleeve, but I’m not going to go there. At least Spencer turned out to be quite entertaining and tried to give Sam her money’s worth on humor. =)Can’t wait for Ashley’s and Spencer’s date. Oh…and I’m also very curious as to what happened on Gage’s date.
Munchkin_licker says
.. oooo.. I want to know what happened with gage’s date!
alwayssleepyone says
Being home from work sick sucks.i’ve been checking every 5 minutes to see if you’ve update yet!!
IntheSilence says
You are an AMAZING writer, and really do sound professional! I have been following this story for a few days now, LOVE every minute of it, and have been dying to give you feedback! So I created an account! Just for you. Love. So anyways, your story is just sooo well written and I can’t say how much I’ve enjoyed it! I am entralled! PLEASE update soon! Maybe I shall read your other fics! Haha. Kelly and Sara are so awesome! I love how Spence is unfased by them and the shock of the other girls. Cracked up when I read: “Their dates are probably watching them have sex right now…” I have cracked up at so many things in your storys. Like with full on laughter. LOVE YOUR STORY AND KEEP UP THE AMAZING GREAT JOB! (And I have a feeling this review doesn’t do you justice!) Oh well, it’s the best I can do.
softball_girl says
amazing as usual!! i can’t wait till the next post. hopefully there will be a lot of spashley lovin’ in it! pms
Tango says
The comments go on an on. lol Love this Chapter. Spencer is funny.
dawniekey says
omg i love spencer haha her drunk talk rocks i adore how she talks and words stuff when she is drunk can’t wait for more
littledragonfly says
See, late comment again! Never mind it gets to you in the end eh? I loved that and was kinda glad you didn’t go for any drama on Spence’s date….with those warnings Sam would be extremely stupid to try anything! The whole chapter was hilarious! I’m also glad that you only covered 1 date in this one, I’m sooo looking forward to seeing what the others got up to…I’m also getting the idea that they might not all have gone so smoothly?!?! I bet Gage didn’t fight but went did something outdoors’y and fun??…Ashley’s date seemed the most straight forward so I wonder if tht’s where the drama lies?? Heh, it’s all speculation so as usual I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
shalla25 says
loved it. Write more soon
*krish8708 says
hmmm. i thought for second there! that samantha will do some shit to spencer but anyway it turn out well..I LOVE THIS CHAPTER..but i hoping for more drama and angst in each of them!love yah stix!keep going!pms
jtsec9143 says
oh sweet baby elmo that was hilarious! drunk spencer is amazing! seriously how in the world do you come up with the stuff that she’s says??!! it’s great, i love it! i’m glad spencer’s date wasn’t all that bad, i’m really hoping you don’t throw us a curve ball and someone (mainly ashley) ends up doing something stupid on their date… like always i can’t wait for the next chapter! please please please don’t keep us waiting too long! = )
GGD says
LOL! AMAZING!! Spencer: “She’s coming.”…. i just pictured her standing in the door… lookin at her nails and sayin it…. lol.. n the nicknames!! or “See, Elvira, there’s that deep seeded self-esteem issue again. Do promise me you’ll talk to someone, it’s not healthy.” lol…. seriusly! i can’t stop laughin!!! AWESOME!
jazziejazz says
hahahaha no pressure lol :) gosh spencer is so funny while drunk lol i loved the nick names she gave the girls lol :) so funny :) at least she didnt try and feel her up lol :) okay well im gonna go lol cant wait till the next update :) pms please :)
itellueveryting says
omggg i loved the letter to sam. i must have read it at least 5 times, like seriously. i wonder how the other dates went (hint hint)? i will be upset if you dont update soon and like jess said it is not wise to upset me! lol great update and carlin was just fantastic on her date. PMS