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Marshall Daniel's Boarding School For Girls – (Chapter: Chapter 19 Everclear)
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I start to stir at the sound of laughing and when I felt a soft hand absentmindedly stroke my cheek, my eyes flickered open.
My roommates were back and they all seemed to be enjoying themselves a great deal. I turn my body slightly and Ashley’s smiling face greets me.
Ashley: “Hey, you’re awake! Sorry, were we being too loud?” I rub my eyes a little and sit up to meet her lips. I clear my throat as she runs her hands through my hair, face still bright.
Spencer: “No, it’s okay, I didn’t mean to fall asleep. What time is it?”
Ashley: “A little after eleven.” My roommates and Jess are still chatting idly in their beds as I let out a long yawn against Ashley chest. She wraps her arms securely around me and I breathe in her scent.
Spencer: “How was your date?”
Ashley: “We haven’t gotten to mine yet, we’re still on Kelly’s. But it was fine. How was your’s, are you okay?”
Spencer: “Yeah, it was whatever. Wasn’t terrible, wasn’t exactly fun either.” I say looking up at her.
Ashley: “Really?” I shrug as her eyes narrow.
Spencer: “Yeah, there isn’t a lot to tell. We went to the hole, her two friends were there, we drank a little, we talked a little, and I was back here a few minutes before ten.” She tilts her head and stares off at some unknown destination.
Ashley: “What friends?” Elvira and Babylonian.
Spencer: “Dez and Sally?” She shrugs and shakes her head like she doesn’t know who they are.
Ashley: “Huh.”
Spencer: “She wasn’t nice but she wasn’t too bad either.” She looks back down at me biting her lip.
Ashley: “Well people change…”
Spencer: “Yeah.” She still looks uneasy but the sound of Kelly’s voice snaps her out of her haze and she gives me a distracted smile before she turns her attention back to Kelly.
Ashley: “Kelly was telling us about her date. Apparently it was a bit of a debacle.” I turn into Ashley’s back and she situates herself down on the bed so that she’s holding me with her head on my pillow.
Spencer: “Why, what happened, Kell?” I let out with a laugh. You really know with those two…
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like holy crap! didn’t see that one coming. i’m glad they didn’t make love yet though because they we drunk and i’m sure they would have regretted it. post more soon plzz!
awww thats really sad :( PMss
stupid school, i’d have the first comment if people would stop making me go. But down to business, i thought this chapter was cute and corny (in a good way) and definately an excellent chapter. Tylenol PM in a drink… next time I’m roped into to a bad date, definatley got that in the memory banks, lol. Spencer’s pep talk was just… hilarious. Everclear is a very very very strong and it’s effect will stupify someone much in the same way they did Spencer. “Cant even find my vagina let alone hers.” Hopefully they can support Sara during this time. Nothing like super good friends, when you need them. Dandy writing! pms…. please
awesome chapter! i loved the dates, they all went how i had hoped they would, it was perfect! this was a really funny chapter but im glad too that they didnt have sex in the state theyre in because it really does have to be special! of course it sucks that sara’s mom had to die! pms pleeaase!
i read this before school and i loved it..i was a little more pumped to go to school than normal.made my day a whole lot better. although it sucks for sara.. i feel bad for her:(. it’s cute the way everyone is so caring about it. i love how everyone is so connected. post more soonnn!!
damn..you are SO good at build up..it sounds bad..but it’s probably a good thing they stopped..honestly, that would have not been a good first time. But Sarah’s mom..geez didn’t see that one coming..way to throw another curve ball. But I love it..can’t wait for another update..and your future book lol
wow that was def no what i expected. poor sarah. on another note, that chapter was amazing. spencers babble to ashley about the nervousness of sat’s date was more than hilarious and then when they were planning their sex lol who does that lol. i agree with somebody’s angel. ure writing is more than amazing and people, such as myself, make an account to comment on your stories so that is saying a lot. please update asap! great chapter i loved it as always.
You are great at this. (:Update soon.:]
i can’t believe that after all the nervousness that was built up they don’t even get to get any further than a very heavy make out session…poor sara i can’t believe her mom died and she hasn’t talked with her this is going to be horrible. i hope everyone can be there with her at the funeral and just make sure she is okay. pms
thank you so much for not letting them have drunken sex! how cute were they, being all nervous with each other. the tylenol had me cracking up! glad we found out about the dates… aww michelle had a picnic too cute. then bam with sara’s mom. wow. feel so bad for her. and yes when you publish a book you had better let us all know about it and arrange a book signing! lol although I’m sure there’d be a lot more than signing going on. as always a fantastic update. love ya stix!
almost forgot… we were treated to a rambling spencer again! god I love it when you have her ramble on and on it’s genius!
okay i have to say that i am so glad that the girls didn’t do the dirty… i would have been really upset if they had done it drunk… that would have been a hot mess… poor sara! i’m interested to see what’s going to happen next! update soon please
they whole drunk part was cute but thank the stix that they didn’t have their first time drunk. and of course it had to be sars’s mom cuz isn’t she the only one who actually cares? haha i love when she rambled and said how they were both sluts that was hilarious. please pms!
OMG!! Way to kill the moment! Poor Sarah. Sorry I haven’t commented in a while, I’ve been silently reading your updates. Most of the time you just leave me too speechless to try and string a good comment together. You are still my favourite! I can’t wait for you to write a book. I will buy a copy and scourer the globe to find you so you can sign it! I LOVE your work!!
are you serious,serious? they were…and then..the…so colse :( man im all sad now i got all worked up and then BAM nothing lol :) you like doing this to us dont you lol i feel bad that her mom passed away and everything it kinda sucks she must be going through a lot i hope shell be okay and at least spencer and ashleys first time together wont be drunk lol thats a plus to this horribal torture your putting us through :) pms please you cant leave it there come back please and post like now…ill be waiting :) ur awsome :)
love it. Poor sara! and yeah i hate the new 90210 series lol write more soon!
YES! I’m first. I’ve read all the chapters but i’m sorry to say that i’ve been a silent reader. I know i suck. I hate that when others do it but i’ve just been lazy. Anyways, on with the review…You are an amazing writer. I honestly can say i’ve never read anything that has captivated me as much as you have with this. To put it another way, if you were to get this published i would buy two copies. lol. I can’t stop laughing and then it will change to feeling the sexual tension with Ashley and Spencer which is great too. I guessed that was going to happen with Gage on her date. I’m surprised that Jess isn’t more upset about the whole ordeal. Spencer rambling is priceless. The shit you come up with puts me in a state of wonder, because i don’t know what is going on through your head that makes you come up with this stuff. The dates were great, we were all hoping that you would do that. The drugs in the drinks, lol. That was a good one. It’s sad how you ended it, but i’m sure you have your reasons. PMS I mean, you have me now commenting and i’m telling my friends to read this too. GREAT JOB. BTW I bet i can make your mother blush!
w0w thats s0 sad… it reminded me when my bestfriends dad died.. i remeber him telling me hes g0ne…but other than dat… great story =D
bahaha, emily valentine was a crazy b.
Arrrgh! Way to spoil the moment Stix! OK, I must admit that I wasn’t overly keen on the idea of the really drunken sex they would have had…if they had stayed awake long enough!…after the build up it would have been a bit of an anti-climax…so maybe an interruption was a good thing!?! Poor Sara tho’…what’s the story there?? I thought it was a great chapter and if you ever wrote a book I’d be there…well on Amazon anyway!!
Oh no! poor Sara.. although kind of glad they didn’t have sex then.. really special when you’re hammered haha
OH MY GOD!the sexual tension between spashley is fucking fantastic..!can i say HOT!hehehe..like this chater..hope more drama’s to come specially with all of them.poor sara!love you stix!great chapter..!