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Marshall Daniel's Boarding School For Girls – (Chapter: Chapter 45 Because That's How it Works)
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I have a one track mind. I need to see Spencer. I need to see her bright eyes and cute smiles to rid myself of all the emptiness I feel. I quickly park the car and rush over to the front door. And then it occurs to me…this is a little weird. I’m going to have to see Spencer’s mom, it’s like…meeting the parents or something.
But those thoughts die when the front door swings open and my heart rate increases cause I need to see Spencer. Oh…it’s the other one.
Glen: “Hey, Ash!” Yeah, hey Glen, where’s the good Carlin?
Ashley: “Hi.”
Glen: “Is everything okay?”
Ashley: “Uh…I just want to see Spencer.”
Glen: “I meant with ‘the plan.’” Yep, he actually did the quotes. Not that I’m really surprised. Mostly I’m surprised that he used them right. Why is he closing the front door and joining me outside?
Ashley: “So far so good.” I tell him as I awkwardly stand and try not to do those things I’m known for; like shifting my weight, rolling my eyes, looking over his shoulder in exasperation.
Glen: “Well Coach Craggs called me about the three guys.” Fascinating. Spencer! Help!
Ashley: “Oh yeah?”
Glen: “Yeah, he sounded really excited about having the ‘scout’ there.” Wow, Glen two for two with the correct usage of air quotes.
Ashley: “Hmmm.”
Glen: “We’re going to get those fuckers!” My eyes finally focus in on his and see his triumphant smirk. “I mean, who the hell do those assholes think they are?! I swear, Ashley, it is taking everything in me not to go down to that school and kill those kids!” I feel sympathy for him cause I know how he feels. “We’re going to get them good, right Ash? They’re going to suffer, right?”
Ashley: “Yeah, Glen.”
Glen: “Cause she was just a little girl, ya know. I mean, she had nobody. She was all alone and they tried to hurt her. They tried to hurt my little sister and I did nothing. And I still feel like I’m doing nothing. Maybe if I just head out right now Spence and mom won’t even know I’m gone. I mean, you’re here now so they’ll be distracted and they won’t even know I left. And your friends can tell them that their lives are ruined and then I’ll take care of them once they leave. I know you said we’d need to be smart about it but I don’t think I can stand here any longer knowing that those guys tried to hurt my baby sister…”
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you got to be kidding nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo someone go back
fuck Stix! why must you torture me?!
FUCK FUCK FUCKITY FUCK!!!! I knew there was a reason I stayed up to this ungodly hour! Yes, it’s to yell at you Stix. Cliffhanger? I’m hanging on with my fingernails and raidly losing my grip. What the hell do you think you’re playing at? ….Other then that it was bloody brilliant. Gushing Spencer was cute, grandmother hitting on gage very funny but slightly disturbing, car seat trauma…..who the fuck invents those things anyway and Ashley, you’d better not hurt Ashley or we’re falling out….be warned missy!!
I agree with littledragonfly you get ashley hurt and im out of here I likes chapter but I dont like cliffhangers so update quick and im going to say this one more you give ashley hurt in any bad way I am out of here
:O you did NOT just leave it there?!?! ill have your head woman get back here and update lol yah who says”have your head” lol thats me for you lol anyways i loved it funny sad happy anxious all to the very end you you keep us on the edge of our seats like a good writter……but bad person :P update dont leave us on a cliff hanger lol
Jail yet again??? They just gave that town an economic boost with all that bail money. Grandma Claudia is hilarious … and creepy … but Gage IS hot so can you blame her? I said that your last chapter was deliciously evil but your cliffhanger here is just plain evil! Evil! Why must you leave it there? I’m scared, I felt like I was reading KHK all of a sudden (update for that soon-ish?). I’m not going to be able to stop thinking about it so please come back quickly and fix it. Spencer needs to get over her snit and realize that it’s not hunger pangs but her Ashley-sense tingling like crazy! Go save your girl! p.s. Wow, Kelly’s mom actually got them to stop making out. p.s.#2 thanks!
ok, wtf. This was a good chapter, but why the fuck did you have to leave it there? Ooh, I just thought of something. What if they get into a one on one brawl and Spencer sees and its like the whole Ashley/Carmen fight thing. Hmm? C’mon, you owe us. I mean, you haaaaad to leave it there. Damn the suspense!!
HOLY HELL!!ash better beat the living shit out of him!i need a post, noooow :)
Torture *holding breath* Oh please have Spencer or gage and kelly come back to the hotel room. Who the hell told him someone was looking for him???? Fucking Ohio
Ssssshhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttt!!!!! Please post back soon!!
WHY?!?! WHY?!?! WHY WOULD YOU LEAVE US HANGING THERE!!!OH MY GOD. HOW COULD YOU?!?!!?!?!?YOU ARE CRUEL!!!!!OKAY YOU BETTER POST SOON. AND SOOOOOOOOOON.OR ELSE MY MIND WILL JUST IMAGINE ALL KINDS OF THINGS THAT THE ASS IS GOING TO TRY. OH MY GOD. PMS PMS PMS PMS.
oh. my. god. how could you leave it like that?!?! you must update soon or i might die of anticipation! PMS pleaseeeeee!
oh my fuckin god….he better not hurt ash…i hope spencer gets over everything…that update was great. i was laughin out loud. im really excited for your next post…update asap!…or my life will be ruined, kinda like the punishments that the kids recieved who beat up spencer.
Oh shiznit! Thanks for the shout out btw! Great chapter! PMS! :)
Seems like you’ve left all of us wondering and not in a good way Stix. It’s going to be hard to sweat out what’s going to happen until you post more! Honestly, you’re brilliant. =]
my heart’s in my arse after reading that very last bit. i am putting my faith in you that you will get this updated as soon as possible and will give ashley a get out of jail free card. i trust that you won’t let me down here. thanks, i appreciate it.
Omg omg omg omg!! o.O
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! DON’T HURT ASHLEY!!!! PMS!!!!
No… way. That was ridiculous. But Spencer or someone has to come and rescue the day and then everything will be okay right? RIGHT?
h0ly mutha fuckin shiiiit ! that was intense as hell ! like no that was funny too that whole jail scene was brilliantly written … seriously ! but nojoke you cant be leaving cliff hangers like that not really fair . i cant wait to seeee wat happens ashley bettr kick this kids mother fucking assssssssss !!!!!!!
that was SO good! i was literaly laughing out loud when spencer was describing her and ashley’s fights! very funny!! i hope she doesn’t stay mad too long at her friends, especially ashley! and OMG at you leaving it there! c’mon now is that really necessary?? pleaaase update soon!!!
What the hell is he doing in there?! I’m sure somebody else that they ruined that day, told him. Ashley knows how to take care of herself, so she should be alright. He would be stupid to attack her, with what they have just done to a good number of people in the town. I hope Ashley just goes off and beats him damn near to death. What I am thinking is that Spencer will feel bad about how she was treating Ash in the car and comes back to see if she’s ok, or somebody comes back to see if she’s okay. Or maybe 1 of there contacts in town, spotted Kevin at the hotel and shot a text or call to Gage. I love this story. Please update again soon.
one word…torture….u torture me haha this update was fukin good i luved it pssh what am i saying i luv all ur updates but hmm i sense a crazy next chapter? hehe cant wait for it! i hope Ashley kicks that kids ass all around that hotel room!(insert evil laugh)PMSSSS!!!!=]
ahhhhhh!!! oh this could be bad. but no- no i know you wouldnt make it too bad- in fact i know you’ll make it great, as always :) oh and uh cheers to factoflife- why, i dont know- but cheers cuz you said! :)
No way no way no way!!!! U did NOT just leave it there!!! U better update soon or I’m gonna explode!!!
WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU LEFT IT THERE!!!!! you cant do this….come on
Ooooo I’m going to be in so much trouble for reading this, when I meant to be doing my assignment, but it was so worth it. And for Ash’s sake I hope SuperSpencer comes and saves her =] PMS!
Oh SHIT!!!!JENKINS DIE!I hate him!!I hope Ashley Beat the shit out of him!
o shit….i hope if he hurts ash tht EVRYONE kiks his asss…n i mean all 34…haha pms!!
really Stix dear, must you torment us so like you do with you cliff hangers.. OH i hope they kick this dudes ass , coz i would if i were a fictional character in MD lol i’d beat him silly with the “Tug-o-War” !! would you kindly post the next chapter like now so when i come home from working Brooklyn Pride Tomorrow i have something to make my work day go away please!!
Ok so Jhacin makes fun of me for the noises I am making now. But you are so mean that was just plain out mean to leave it like that. I mean you know I would read the next chapter no matter what but did you have to leave it like that…ugh. Ok now that is out of my system. This chapter was great. Ashley is in the dog house but not for long. If she does get hurt Spencer is gonna be ready to kill. Its just like whoa I can not wait for the next chapter. Great job.
I’m gunna frickin kick ur ass if you decide to go down path A. Grr.
yessss! more drama!!!! thanks for the dedication schbabeees i enjoyed this chapter i love ashley’s perspective… i’m like super nervous for the next chapter now whats gonna happennnnnnn!
How could u stop right there!!!!!!!!!!! no freaking way he better not hurt her
man nothing bad better happen to ash! i don’t know if i could handle it! and i don’t know what was more funny claudia checking gage out or mrs erikson needing to go back to new york to get her nails done. fantastic once again my darling stix!