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One Night Stand – (Chapter: Unwanted Visitor)
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When my baby’s assailant begins to scream, “IT’S HER FAULT!!! IT’S HER FAULT!!!”, I finally glance over to look at her face. It’s Mrs. Dennison. I guess the apple doesn’t fall far from the tree. Then the nurses finally make an appearance with a police officer in toe I yell, “Arrest her and get her the hell out of here!!! She tried to smoother her!!!”
As I hear them drag the hysterical woman out of the room I turn back to Ashley and softly say, “Take deep breaths, baby. Just take real deep breaths. I’ve got you. I’ve got you.” She barely nods her head and closes her eyes.
Melissa is on the other side of the bed and begins taking her vitals. I look over to her and ask, “How are they?”
“Their good. Strong. Her oxygen level is a little low but it’s going up slowly.” Melissa says quietly
I look back at Ashley and coo, “That‘s, my baby. Deep breaths. Deep, deep breaths, beautiful.”
As her breathing seems to even out I move her oxygen mask down a little and softly ask, “Did you loose consciousness at anytime? Did she hurt you anywhere else?”
“No, I didn’t loose consciousness and she didn’t hurt me anywhere else.” Ashley whimpers with her eyes still closed.
“Okay, just take deep breaths, okay. Relax baby.” I say as I put the mask back on her. I then turn to Melissa and say as I catch her looking at Ashley with bit of jealousy in her eyes, “Page Evans, now. I want him to come up here and check her out.”
Melissa just nods her head and walks out just as Kyla now makes an appearance. When I hear her ask worried, “What’s wrong?”
I turn to look at her and growl angrily, “Where the hell were you Kyla? You were supposed to take care of her. The bastard’s mother tried to smother her. She blames her because he died.”
When Ashley heard that she softly whimpers as a tear escapes her eyes, “So it’s true then?”
“Yeah, baby. I’m sorry.” I say quietly. God, I hate it that she’s crying for that bastard. It’s ripping my heart into tiny little pieces.
Kyla is now on the other side of the bed and she looks at me with tears and guilt in her eyes as she whimpers, “I’m sorry. I should have been here. I should of never gone out for dinner. It’s all my fault.”
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awesome like always…i like how you handled Aiden..and the end was very sweet…cant wait to read the next update PMS
wonder if the death of aiden is going to hurt spence in a way pms
great update!!! man i so love this story and you’ve gathered quite the following now huh? lol. i’m glad that even though spence hates aidens guts she did the best she could to save him for his and ashleys sake.again great update!!pms!!!
that was uh freakin mazin.PMASAP!
Amazing update. I’m so glad Aiden is dead and Aiden’s Mom has her issues by trying to kill Ashley. Poor Ash. I love this story. PMASAP.
ash can’t ever catch a break. great update! pmasap!!!!
Aiden’s gone, would it be heartless of me to say I’m relieved and somewhat happy about that? I hope Aiden’s mom doesn’t try to come back for Ash, but she probably will since she seems to be crazy like her son. The ending was so sweet, and I love that movie Imagine You & Me. Back to the topic, I hope Ash doesn’t become depressed over Aiden’s death, that’d be a whole nother problem and Spashley doesn’t need anymore problems. But…problems equal entertainment, so do what you will, it’s your story and I’m loving it. As usual, another amazing update. Continue with the great work, PMASAP!!!!!!!!!
OK that was another great chapter! So Aidens dead huh? Doesn’t phase me in the least. j/k Keep up the good work and PMS soon!
Aaawwww! Have I mentioned that I love this story?!?!?
Oh I forgot to add. Can’t wait for the next update!!!!!
OMG! That was so so good. The end was so beautiful. Babe, you shouldn’t worry if this is good or not. It’s the best. I’m so addicted to this story that my heart wants to comment after every paragraph at times. Loved it. You’re an excellent writer. Much love to you.
wow! that was incredible! pms! theres like 1000 people waiting for the next entry…not that there’s any pressure or anything…haha. But seriously, you are a wonderful writer. At this point you can do no wrong! PMS!
:-) loved the update amazing as always PMS
Great Update! I really can’t wait for Ashley to have a good day where no one tries to kill her lol PMS!!!!!
Great update! I’m glad that Aiden died that ass. I loved it! That nurse not Hailey but the other one makes me nervous. PMASAP!
Wow i never expected that it was brilliant i mean i think i actually stopped breathing when i read the part about her being smothered again another awesome update. And im still breathing :) so keep them coming PMS!!!
that was so amazingly written. aiden’s mother is a freaking whack job! wow! gah! you amamze me. you are such a wonderful writer. damn! awesome awesome update as always!! PMASAP!