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Save Tonight – (Chapter: 5. Truths and Decisions)
My eyes shot open in an instant as I felt Ashley’s hot breath trail slowly up my spine to the back of my neck. I could barely feel her soft kisses on my shoulder blade but I shivered when I felt her loose hair come in contact with my skin. I think she assumes I’ve fallen asleep and who am I too ruin her surprise. Her hands start to massage my shoulders and I feel her legs on both sides of me, she still hasn’t changed out of her bathing suit from earlier and I’m especially thrilled that I haven’t either.
I let out a small moan and her hands grip my shoulders tighter in response, I’m starting to get antsy and squirm a little underneath her. She lifts her body up slightly to turn me over on my back.
My eyes open one more to look up into a grinning Ashley with the words fuck me tattooed across her forehead, okay maybe not tattooed but they might as well be since that’s what her eyes are telling me.
I pull her neck down to my hungry lips and she whimpers on impact, god it’s been too long since I’ve kissed these lips, I pull both my legs up and my knees bump into her back causing her to loose her empowering position over me and her body comes crashing down on top of me.
I waste no time in bringing my hands down to her lower back to pull her into me more and her arms slides under me and I can feel her fumbling with the knot that my top is tied in and I lean up a bit to give her a better angle, never breaking the kiss.
She finally gets both ties undone and my top just falls to the bed, she pulls away from our kiss to take me all in. She leaned me back down on the bed gently and stared into my eyes.
Pause. Time out. Maybe we should take this from the beginning….
After Ashley defended my honor we proceeded to walk back to the car, along the way we ran into Blake who was walking around with Kyla.
“What’s up guys?”
“We’re going home now” Ashley replied with her arm still around me
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I can’t wait for the next chapter! Love it!
oh my freaking god. seriously? how the hell could you… well okay so it’s not ended but still!?!? I really really hope you are already writing the beginning of the next part because that was just the cliffhanger of cliffhangers! this story is soooooooo freaking good so yea you had better be working! or we’ll send stix after you!
so I’m guessing spence saying that made ash realize she feels the same and that made the whole leaving thing too real for her to cope with… but I could be wrong. good god almighty see you have me double commenting (who knows maybe they’ll be another after I reread this masterpiece). because I really don’t think that ash just wants some action because otherwise she would have continued so yea…. ok really POST MORE SOOOOOOON!
totally love it. but no way how can you do that they just finally got it together. I cant wait for the next chapter. PMS!!!!!
okay i gotta say, that is an equal mix of the best thing ever and the worst.. i mean, they FINALLY got together, they were finally going to BE together, spencer says i love you and ashley WALKS OUT!??!!?!? what the hell!?!? i dont know whether to be happy that you posted or sad that it ended like this.. all i can say is that never the less it was an awesome chapter and i REALLY hope that you start posting part 2 soon and by soon i mean like right now.. and that they get together and .. well ya.. that they get together! pms pleaaassee!!!
Thank you sooooo much for posting! I’m glad I didn’t have to do what the monks do and pull a hunger strike. This was much easier! I loved it! Loved it! I’m also very very happy that this isn’t the end of the story or else we’d be in a fight right now! Start writing the next part so I can continue posting in normal fequencey! I love my power of you and will continue to be selfish ;)
Yes, I have to agree. I’m so into this story it’s insane! So, what happens next? Do you even know….I freakin’ hope so. Now get back to work….pleeease! lol!
aaaahhhhh!!! thats frustration and elation in case youre wondering :) so good!!! oh and “Pause. Time out…”- i really liked that effect- playing with the timeline like that at just the right moment. it reminded me of a tv show, or i think a couple of shows have had the main character do or say that… or movies??? suddenly i have 2 names in my head- parker lewis and ferris bueller… anyway, still aaaaahhhhh!!! :) pmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmsppmspmsppmspmspmspms……pmspmspmspmspmpmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspms… but no pressure :)
great update…thank u six for your strike lol….PMS roxy