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    Save Tonight – (Chapter: 5. Truths and Decisions)

    “Yes, I’m fine. Ashley knocked her upside the head and told her to leave us alone, we left her on one of the side street alleys”

    “That’s boring” she sat back in her seat

    Blake’s phone rang and thank god it occupied her.

    “Ash, this is all my fault. I’m sorry, I was the one that brought her to us”

    She squeezed my hand, “Don’t even think that, she was the crazy one, there’s no way you could have known. You were trying to help out Hunter”

    “I guess” I still felt bad

    We could hear Blake talking on the phone in the backseat with one of her friends.

    “No, yeah I was there. It was sick, Ash like kicked her ass and she was like begging for her life, so funny” she said into the receiver

    I turned around to give her a confusing look.

    “I like my version better” she whispered “No yeah, I don’t know she was like this con-artist that has stolen like over a million dollars from other people, yeah the police told us” she said to the phone in normal tone

    I turned to look at Ashley with the same face, she just shook her head.

    “She tends to do this” Ashley replied “All her friends thing that I’m some trained assassin or something, I’m never seen someone pathologically lie so much” she replied

    We got back to the villas and Ashley parked my parent’s car in front of my place before her and Blake walked back to their villa’s to change into their suits.

    “I’ll come back here and get you before we head over to the beach?” Ash asked me as we got out of the car.

    “Okay, hurry” I replied

    She leaned in and gave me a quick kiss on my cheek before following Blake back to their place.

    I walked in and the place was empty of course, I walked up the stairs and out onto the balcony.  I pulled out of my phone and called Parker. Ashley doesn’t deserve someone that is lying to her.

    “Hey babyyyy what’s up” he said into the phone, there was music in the background.

    Perfect, he’s wasted.

    “Hi Park, what are you doing?”

    “I’m just at Jessica’s dad’s house, everyone’s here!” he yelled “Everyone say hi to Spencer”

    Comments

    1. oh my freaking god. seriously? how the hell could you… well okay so it’s not ended but still!?!? I really really hope you are already writing the beginning of the next part because that was just the cliffhanger of cliffhangers! this story is soooooooo freaking good so yea you had better be working! or we’ll send stix after you!

    2. so I’m guessing spence saying that made ash realize she feels the same and that made the whole leaving thing too real for her to cope with… but I could be wrong. good god almighty see you have me double commenting (who knows maybe they’ll be another after I reread this masterpiece). because I really don’t think that ash just wants some action because otherwise she would have continued so yea…. ok really POST MORE SOOOOOOON!

    3. okay i gotta say, that is an equal mix of the best thing ever and the worst.. i mean, they FINALLY got together, they were finally going to BE together, spencer says i love you and ashley WALKS OUT!??!!?!? what the hell!?!? i dont know whether to be happy that you posted or sad that it ended like this.. all i can say is that never the less it was an awesome chapter and i REALLY hope that you start posting part 2 soon and by soon i mean like right now.. and that they get together and .. well ya.. that they get together! pms pleaaassee!!!

    4. Thank you sooooo much for posting! I’m glad I didn’t have to do what the monks do and pull a hunger strike. This was much easier! I loved it! Loved it! I’m also very very happy that this isn’t the end of the story or else we’d be in a fight right now! Start writing the next part so I can continue posting in normal fequencey! I love my power of you and will continue to be selfish ;)

    5. Yes, I have to agree. I’m so into this story it’s insane! So, what happens next? Do you even know….I freakin’ hope so. Now get back to work….pleeease! lol!

    6. aaaahhhhh!!! thats frustration and elation in case youre wondering :) so good!!! oh and “Pause. Time out…”- i really liked that effect- playing with the timeline like that at just the right moment. it reminded me of a tv show, or i think a couple of shows have had the main character do or say that… or movies??? suddenly i have 2 names in my head- parker lewis and ferris bueller… anyway, still aaaaahhhhh!!! :) pmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmsppmspmsppmspmspmspms……pmspmspmspmspmpmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspms… but no pressure :)

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