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You and Me – (Chapter: Making Amends)
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Dano sat in a wooden school desk wearing her standard school uniform that consisted of a button up white shirt, grey slacks, black shoes, and a red and white striped tie. She stared in concentration towards the front of the room where her father, wearing a tallit and teffilin along with a white shirt and jeans, wrote on the black board with red chalk. “You are not a kyke. You are not a nigger. You are not a spic. You are not an Indian. You are a Black/Portuguese/Native American Jew and you should be damn proud of it.”
Her eyes drifted to her right to find her brother Gideon dressed in the same attire as her father, his icy blue eyes puffy and red as if he’d been crying. But instead of the leather strap of teffilin around his arm, there was a black bandanna in its place.
She turned to her left and saw her mother cradling her newborn sister Nessa in her arms, a toothless smile on her features and a twinkle in her bright green eyes that were so much like her own and her mother’s. She grinned at the baby, reached towards her and extended her finger which the child grabbed onto with her tiny hand.
Suddenly, a loud crash disrupted the peace in the room and her eyes shot towards the classroom door. Glass shattered and three men clad in brown walked into the room. Their faces were covered with brown bandanna’s and she faintly noticed baby Nessa crying while her brother and mother yelled something incoherent. The men grabbed her father who was still writing on the chalk board and began to pull him towards the door.
She tried to get up, tried to move but something was restricting her. As she looked down, she saw her hands and feet tied together with black bandanna’s. Her struggle against them was futile and as she looked up, she had to bear witness as one of them ripped off her father’s star of David necklace that her mother had given him and shove it into his pocket.
They pulled him out of the room and slammed the door shut behind them.
On the board, her father’s words were no longer written in red chalk, but in crimson blood. “Respect yourself for who you are and love the ones that will always be there for you.”
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well, that’s a good thing that madison decided to back off…nice chapter, very well written as usual XD…everything you write, i like !!! no matter if there’s a lack of spencer or not…but i’m sure you will make up for that later…*wink*…hehe, can’t wait for part 2 =)
no complains bout the lack of spencer over here! Ash’s my fav, well the way you write her anyway :P oh and v. weird and random but i liked the description of them smoking; emotive, relevant and well written. as usual, post soon!
well, that’s a good thing that madison decided to back off…nice chapter, very well written as usual XD…everything you write, i like !!! no matter if there’s a lack of spencer or not…but i’m sure you will make up for that later…*wink*…hehe, can’t wait for part 2 =)
no complains bout the lack of spencer over here! Ash’s my fav, well the way you write her anyway :P oh and v. weird and random but i liked the description of them smoking; emotive, relevant and well written. as usual, post soon!
Hey i’ve been silent for awhile here, but I had to say this is my FAVORITE son fanfic ANYWHERE on the web…please update more soon…and PLEASE have Ash tell Spence she’s part of the SDR’s it’s not fair not too!
Hey i’ve been silent for awhile here, but I had to say this is my FAVORITE son fanfic ANYWHERE on the web…please update more soon…and PLEASE have Ash tell Spence she’s part of the SDR’s it’s not fair not too!
beautifully written, really nice descriptions and word choices. wow. just very, very nice. great skeleton
beautifully written, really nice descriptions and word choices. wow. just very, very nice. great skeleton
wtf…its like i dont check the updates on the site for two days…and all hell breaks loose!!! all of this drama going on in all these fanfics….but this….this is just insane….dano has seriously got to get back with madison ; ) and i think that will take care of all her nightmares…but as for ash and madison…that was quite a shocker, i figured madison was gonna try and make her life a living hell….but i seriously doubt that its for spencer…i think its for dano, but what ever happened to tori comming back…i want some more drama…lol
wtf…its like i dont check the updates on the site for two days…and all hell breaks loose!!! all of this drama going on in all these fanfics….but this….this is just insane….dano has seriously got to get back with madison ; ) and i think that will take care of all her nightmares…but as for ash and madison…that was quite a shocker, i figured madison was gonna try and make her life a living hell….but i seriously doubt that its for spencer…i think its for dano, but what ever happened to tori comming back…i want some more drama…lol
Nice=) Learned a lil’ more about 3 of our main characters…totally loved the terms you used in this chapter…”dumbass croonies”…priceless haha. Awesome job babe!!
Nice=) Learned a lil’ more about 3 of our main characters…totally loved the terms you used in this chapter…”dumbass croonies”…priceless haha. Awesome job babe!!
OH HELL YES! Mashley = kickass drama
OH HELL YES! Mashley = kickass drama
Impressive writing. Your characters have a depth that winds the readers heart into an emotional maelstrom.
Impressive writing. Your characters have a depth that winds the readers heart into an emotional maelstrom.