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17 Reasons Why… (Chapter 1)
CHAPTER 1
Bette switched off the ignition and sighed heavily as she momentarily struggled to free herself from the seatbelt. The ninety minute drive on the rustic, two-lane highway between Jodi’s work-site and the quaint little bed-and-breakfast had not only given the brunette ample time to ponder the state of her life, but also permitted the fatigue of cross-country travel to catch up with her.
Bette eased open the door of the rental car and firmly planted her boot-clad foot on the dirt driveway below. She chuckled to herself as she caught a glimpse of her attire reflected in the window of the closing car door. Bette was no stranger to a well-worn pair of Levi’s. But, she couldn’t figure out how she now found herself in dusty work boots and an over-sized flannel shirt. Then again, she wasn’t quite sure how she found herself in her current relationship situation, either. She swallowed hard as she turned away from the car and walked towards the lobby of the small inn she’d be calling home for at least the next couple of nights.
When Bette had first arrived at Jodi’s work site, she was running on a high fueled by a mixture of emotion and adrenaline. This was by far the grandest romantic gesture she’d made in her adult life, and how Jodi would react was beyond Bette’s powers of prediction. She’d been relieved and ecstatic to find that Jodi wanted to see her, wanted to try to work things out. Despite all the inevitable comparisons, there really was one main difference between Jodi and Tina — Jodi wanted Bette and made sure Bette knew it. Bette could feel the intensity of Jodi’s desire burning through both of them as they kissed beside Bette’s grand romantic offering.
Bette had wanted to stay at the site for the rest of the day, basking in the warmth that came from reconciling with Jodi. But, Jodi had suggested that she could get her day’s work done more quickly without the distraction of Bette’s presence, and following Tina’s sage advice, Bette had acquiesced. The long, winding drive back to the inn witnessed Bette’s emotional journey from exhilaration to contentment to questioning to doubt.
Fifteen minutes into the drive, she knew she cared for Jodi, but was feeling weighed down by the need to reinvent herself to meet Jodi’s expectations, while Jodi seemed to sacrifice so little. Although she hadn’t made her reaction known at the time, she had been stunned when Jodi had cautioned Bette not to break her heart. After all, it had been Jodi who had ended their relationship and fled across the country.
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(2 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
welcome back, I loved your last stories, this one looks great. Cant wait for more!
Fabulous! Held me captive and I want to know at least ONE of the 17 reasons NOW. Have missed your interpretation of Bette and Tina — so good to have you back!
cant wait to see where this goes. been a long time. didnt know that flowers had specific meanings. thanks.
Yeah, your back. This looks good. Love the flower idea now give us all the meanings of the flowers Tina sent. Damn if it wouldn’t have been great for this to happen in S5
I’m loving this and can’t wait for more!
Welcome back! This was a great start. Please continue.
Glad to see your back. I am so loving this. Thank you PPVS
Welcome back and excellent beginning! I am VERY excited about this one….interested in where it is going! I’ll be waiting! Thanks!
hey there- so glad that you are back. your stories have definitely been missed as have you. looking forward to reading more of this story and love what you’ve started. knowing you penned it means a great B&T tale. once again, welcome back!
finally i see your name back here again :o) welcome back and keep posting this amazing story
Lovely. Oh and I’m intrigued with the flowers.. I love the various meanings of flowers :)
OW YES
Yesssssssss if only
Very nice beginning. Should be a great ride.
Fantastic! Great to see you back. What are the other flowers and thier meanings? Hope T gets another chance. PPS
Welcome back…now for the other sixteen reasons! Please continue!
WOW! Thanks! What a start. If only this would happen on the show! Can’t wait to read more.
Your stories were among the first I read when I first started visiting this site…twice i some cases :-) Welcome back to this wonderful parallel universe where all wrongs can be made right, and by the looks of it you are definately righting a wrong.
So glad to have you back, you are one of my favourite writers. This looks like one of your best, if it were possible to choose..
YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING RIGHT…..TBC?????? Hello, S5 is way too far away and holds no promise of your storyline as of yet. We’ll take it…..
This looks like it will be very good. Can’t wait for more.
Yes!!!
Continue? Why yes, of course!!! …And you could also swing back around to that scene where Tina was stepping off the curb on…was it Santa Monica Blvd? Thanks!
The flowers remind me, fondly, of Portia’s scene where Tina describes Bette’s favorite flowers. You, JKS, SNS, Portia, Greentea, Skipton and so many others …good times, good times!!! Welcome back!
You have got to be kidding when you ask/say to be continue with a question mark. With season 5 being so far away and possibly no Tibette reconcilation if all the rumours and snippets are anything to go by. I will gladly take your fabulous fan fiction writers stories anyday. Please continue you have made a wonderful start please post soon
Welcome back! This POV is very intriguing and I love the one red rose and its connotations. PPS>
Finally, Bette has been clued in, Tina wants you back and is still truely, madly in love with you.
Definitely glad to see you back! Can’t wait for more of this one. It’s a great start.
Perfect. What a great start! I got to the end and realized that I was holding my breath. Can’t wait for the next 16 reasons! What’s with the ridiculous little question mark??? Of course continue.
Hey Stranger, what a wonderful surprise! I must say that I have always kept my eye, hoping that you would post again, and today, you popped up on my favorite list! Yeah! How bold and brave of Tina to start such a distraction while Bette is on the opposite coast, wooing another woman. But, of course, Bette and Tina are soul mates, so of course, it must end happily. I just love the way you bend your story for our entertainment! Steph, so glad you posted, and don’t make us wait so long between postings!! :-)
Yes, it’s fabulous that you’re back. I love this beginning and can’t wait to find out more. Would you consider reposting your previous stories. They were so wonderful.
Do you promise to continue?
Dawwwwwwww yeahhhhh. Any chance of bringing back some of the old stories? :D
definitely to be continued. :D
ohh wow that was kool!
There doesn’t need to be a question mark after “to be continued,” of course, we want you to continue. Been a long time since we’ve seen anything from you. Great start. PPS
Hell yah. This is great writing!
MUST be continued. Please.
Looking forward to reading more of this story. Please continue.
For crying out loud, don’t stop there!!
WOW! I am so glad that you are back.. Loved tour last stories,Even though you left me hangin. LOL. This looks great as well. Welcome back and thanks for takin the time.
Its great to have you back here posting.Actually your one of the authors that inspired me to write my story.Maybe seeing you posting here will give me the inspiration to continue with it.
Yay! Glad to see you back! :D Of course you should continue!
This is awesome!
U better finish this story…