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17 Reasons Why… (Chapter 2)
“You’re helping just by being here.” Bette looked up from the briefcase she was now organizing, flashing her trademark, million-watt Porter smile in Tina’s direction. “Though I do have a bone to pick with you.” Bette arched an eyebrow as she straightened up and faced the blonde.
Tina didn’t speak, but merely raised an eyebrow of her own as she awaited an explanation.
“What exactly did you mean by ‘flowers are generic’ this morning?” The brunette quizzed, a small smile beginning to tug at the corners of her mouth. “I don’t recall you ever complaining when I sent you flowers.”
“Ah, that.” Tina began to blush, but she felt her body relax as she recognized the playfulness in Bette’s voice. “You never sent me ‘just flowers’, Bette.” Tina emphasized the word “flowers” by making little air quotes with her fingers. She paused and looked down at her feet momentarily, trying to decide whether she should continue, or simply leave it at that. Looking back up and meeting Bette’s penetrating stare, Tina found the motivation to finish her thought.
“You know that. It was always amazing bouquets and arrangements of something of significance. Orchids. Tiger lilies. Lilacs. Amazing things, with those little messages of their own.” Tina smiled at the memory. “What kind of flowers did you send to Jodi?” Tina challenged, not entirely sure she wanted to hear the answer.
“Um, I’m not really sure, actually.” Now it was the brunette’s turn to blush, as she quickly averted her eyes and turned back to the briefcase she’d been packing. “I told the florist just to send the best of whatever they had. Do you know how hard it is to find a florist that will deliver all the way to the middle of nowhere?”
“Ba—“ Tina caught herself before she finished the familiar term of endearment. “Bette, seriously, I don’t get it. You don’t even know what kind of flowers you sent? That’s just not you.” Tina rolled her eyes. “You were such a grand romantic when we started dating. Now it’s like you’re afraid to put yourself out there.”
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YEAH! You posted early, and in fact I was taking a break from updating my next chapter to read yours. Excellent, can’t wait for the next one. I also wanted to throw in a little something about your author’s notes, I want Skipton to write again too! LOL!
Oh…..this is sooo good! Can’t wait for more.
Poor naive Bette.. Alice is right, for such a smart woman.. *shakes head* Ooh, but T’s nervous neck-rub.. That is so cute when she does it :) Thanks for updating; it’s a very good story so far. Post soon x
Tina really hates you, yea right she is probably kicking herself that she sisn’t grab you and kiss you right back. Hope we get another chapter soon.
I am hooked already! Please post soon… And just to rectify techgal’s earlier comment… YOU DO deserve to be within those excellent writers!
Tina so should have grabbed her and reallly given her a kiss before she left. Parts of that episode made me so happy, and other parts made me want to kick someones ass. IC are you listening. Great update and explanation for those who didn’t know what was going on. Now can we have the continuation of the flowers and note she sent to Bette. Please can your Bette not be a complete naive, and utter mormon, and realize what Tina is really trying to say.
I was so happy when I saw that you had posted again. Bette needs to really slow down a listen to Alice for once. Great Chapter. Thanks you PPS
coop, that typo made me giggle. “Utter MORMON?” *snicker* :) Anyway, Bette is damn dumb. lol And I still can’t believe Tina helped Bette. I wouldn’t be that nice.
Yeah, kind of confusing since I haven’t seen the episode yet, but now I’m looking forward to it! Love your writing
who needs me to write when we’ve got you back??? can’t tell you how much i’m enjoying this tale of yours. has already moved to one of my definite favorites. don’t keep us waiting too long for more…
Love it love it love it. If we kill you will kindness and praise you will post again really soon. Okay………….YOU ARE DEAD!! I KILL YOU!!
I can’t tell you how thrilled I am that you are writing again! You have been missed. I am already totally hooked on your story. I love the intensity…they are so not over each other. Don’t keep us waiting too long for another chapter.
bette is blind and deaf and stubborn…i hope she’ll change soon and open her eyes and began to listen to others
But is Tina going to believe what Alice is going to say about Bette’s feelings. The two of them are like high schooler’s passing notes in study hall. They really need to talk about it. But it appears that Tina is brave enough throw the first ball out. How nervous she must be waiting for Bette’s response…Thanks for the update!!!
Thanks for the wonderful reward. Loved the way you expanded on that scene…just perfect. Clueless Bette is so cute.
Welcome back!!!! I do really hope you finish this story, because i’m really enjoying it. And i will make sure i leave comments this time
YAY! As I told you earlier in chapter 1, I’ll tell you here, a big welcome back. The flavor of certain authors who have been sorely missed are returning with spectacular stories. This is a gem. I love how you provided insight into that depth that continues to be present between the two women. I’m completely hooked, so please post when you can, but sooner would not be something I would object to. LOL! Thanks Steph.
How great is it to have you writing again. And I love this story. Adult conversation. What a concept! Keep the chapters coming. It’s a pleasure to read.
“Now what about Santa Monica Blvd?” …I know it’s been a while, but didn’t your last story stop as Bette was having breakfast in a restaurant with a friend and Tina came walking along and saw her? Or, was Tina with her friend Kim? Or, was Alice with Kim? I don’t know, I just know I really liked your last story and we were just about to have Bette and Tina meet cute and work things out. …I’m still waiting…but this story will certainly appease my Tibetter heart whilst I wait. Thank you!
This is good!!! Seventeen reasons why Bette needs to get her butt back on a plane to Tina!!!
It’s great to see you back. Loved your other story. Looking forward to more.
i always go back to, dont assume…. ive found that talking and really listening and not trying to prove a point helps in conversations with each other, even if its painful. thanks.
Yeah! 2nd instalment was fantastic! Wish we could bang the girl’s heads together to make them see sense, but until then i’ll make believe through your story! Please post soon.
i absolutely love this story! =) please continue and post asap!! =)
Steph….it’s great you’re back. Thanks for the new story. It’s wonderful.
Welcome back!!!! YIPPEE … great story can’t wait to read more!!!! PPS~!!!!
Caught up and so glad I waited so I could read both chappies together! I love this story and can’t wait until the next post! This filled in the gap from what we saw so well, and I can’t wait until you post the next chapter! You’re on a roll, so you might as well reward your loving fans again by posting early! So glad you’re back here and hope that also re-post all of your stories!
Yes, My tibette heart is happy once again! So glad to see you writing and posting for us – your stories are always a pleasure to read and enjoy. I am happy to see you writing about what will happen to Tina and Bette after season 4 left us hanging…. Have you seen the promos for season 5? if so…what do do think? Always a fan — thank you for taking the time to write!
Bette is so clueless at times. She should really listen to Alice and maybe really listen to what her heart is telling her. Sometimes Bette uses her head too much and not her heart.
yep for such a smart woman, Bette, is really…er…dense? hahahaaha PPS:)
I am really enjoying this story. Nice work.
yeah great update plz update again very soon not a week from now ;0)
Oh yeah, that pretty much captured why everyone was so frustrated with Bette at that point (Jodi being the possible exception). I don’t think her blindness is the result of naivete, but a lingering, misguided self-protection from all the hurt that Tina has caused her. Her relationship with Jodi is lingering and misguided, too. So Tina needs to get off her ass and use a sledge hammer to apply the salve to Bette’s thick skull and thick defenses.
Just two posts and I’m hooked!!! PPS!
Hey, I like this beginning, though I find it strange that Bette had to explain Tina the meaning of flowers : I would have thought the other way round, Tina being the “green thumbs” of the family :-) —- Bette can really be so stubborn and blind when she is unsure of herself ;-) Please, keep posting :-)) and how about a repost of your previous stories… I like to read all the awarded stories, and yours is not online any more… it would be nice to be able to read it now :-) Thanks
Thank you for writing.
Excellent chapter Steph! For a change, Bette should listen to Alice :)
Just catching up and it’s great to see you are posting another story. Really liked your take on Bette’s thoughts on the whole Jody attraction. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!
This is good and like it!
I always love the Tibette stories, keep it up steph, curious to see where this’ll lead us.
so true, Bette is thick…