Fan Fiction
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1st Class
As Tina was walking out of her bedroom she heard the door bell ring she looked at her watch and noticed the time it was 11:30 could she be here already? Tina asked herself.
She opened the front door and found herself staring at the most beautiful creature she had seen in since forever Tina knew Bette was beautiful but the Bette standing before her was simply breath taking.
Bette was dressed similar she was wearing a halter top and a pair of very short khaki short showing off her mocha colored legs and very well tones arms it was apparent to Tina that Bette worked out she was so fit Bette was wearing flips flops showing off her manicured toes and her hair was braided she looked great like a breath of fresh air.
“Hi” Tina said after they had stood there just taking each other in.
“Hi” Bette smiled
“Come in” Tina stepped aside and motioned for Bette to come in.
Bette stepped in. Handing Tina a bottle of very expensive wine.
“Here I brought you this I hope it goes with whatever your preparing for lunch”
Tina looked at the label and recognized it as a very expensive brand
“Wow, nice choice” Tina said
“it’s perfect” Tina replied
“Good Im glad you approve, this is a nice place” Bette said
“Thanks, I love it here I recently decided to move here, I mean I’ve owned this house for a while but aI only visited in the summer and some weekends but I live here full time now” Tina said
“Well I can see why this place is amazing I mean the view you must get at night it must be awesome, I could barely keep my eyes on the road looking at the ocean views it must be amazing at night, or at sunrise” Bette said
“Yeah it is it’s my favorite place to be” Tina replied
“How about I give you a tour of the place a little later?”
“That would be great” Bette replied
“Here let me take your bag” Tina said
Bette handed Tina her beach bag
“Thanks”
Tina placed the bag in the family room off the kitchen and placed the wine in the wine fridge
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(2 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)
very nice.. loving this… bring on the night and tomorrow
Bette needs to study. Go home Bette. :)
nice update. I’m glad they are going to take it slow but Bette staying over could be trouble. can’t wait to see what happens next. Hey how about an update of APOM? pleeeease, lol
Very Great Update!!! I am glad B&T are talking to each other. Love that Bette is 5 years younger. Thank you PPS
Great update.Study is overrated.
Five years younger, yes. But far more experienced I would gather..
Now I am a giggling fool. That was so sweet and nice. For a change Bette is younger. Thanks for the post. I am loving every bit of it. ;-)
Physics won’t help her in life but Tina’s money can open lots of doors. LOL. They are certainly not shy around each other. Go for the gusto, girls!
I’m really nervous right now.
Yeah another post. They are just so cut together. Makes a nice change that Bette is the youngest. Bring on a night of cuddling and falling in love.
That was great. They are so into each other but they really need to be careful if Bette stays the night. I think Bette may be able to teach Tina a few things that she never has experienced. GAME ON!!!!!!!! Thanks for posting.
beautiful rendition, there really is more to relationship drama besides infidelity and distrust. please keep posting.
Bette you need to study??? study Tina ‘s body lol
Hey iluvmuzic, Wonderful to have Bette and Tina’s relationship develop at this gentle pace. It is great to have them as out and honest with each other. They are truly building a strong foundation for their partnership. I hope it moves on to a physical plane soon.Just sweet and magical writing.More please and Many Thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
You have put such an excellent spin on this story, word fail me. It is also nice to have the age difference reversed. I love this version and thanks for posting. I guess if Bette stays the night I doubt if there will be much studying for finals :-) just keep the story coming!!!
Fantasically excellent. Loving this story so much. Thankyou.
That was wonderful !