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3 Tina
’I’m on my way back from Les Beaux Arts. Went to see the students’ work. You?’
’About to go back to the office after a lunch meeting. Tell me about the art. Was it any good?’I asked hoping to encourage her.
’It was amazing…’ She started, her voice like a soft breeze on a warm summer’s day, filled the car and washed over me, carrying with it a soothing embrace. With each word, her tone flowed like a meandering stream, smooth and unhurried. Her voice held a melodic quality, each syllable carefully chosen and delicately enunciated, as if they were crafting a delicate piece of art. The timbre was warm and velvety, mirroring her own nature. Only she possessed the ability to stitch together the frayed edges of my mind, restoring my sanity.
’…But I’m sure you didn’t call for that.’ She ended her story and I opened my eyes. The little veins that had been bloodshot and exposed earlier had now settled, and the whites of my eyes were regaining their natural withness at the corners.
’Actually I was. I just called to hear your voice.’ I confessed.
A pause followed, her footsteps on the pavement resonated through the car. Then, she resumed speaking, her words weaving through the air, as if she had unravelled the deepest layers of my thoughts. ’There was also this one piece…’ she continued
3.4 Tina
The air was scented with a delicate fusion of flowers and the tantalizing aroma of culinary creations, supposedly setting the stage for an unforgettable evening. The soft glow of crystal chandeliers casts a warm, golden light across the room, dancing off the polished surfaces of marble tables and plush velvet chairs. On the walls were tasteful artwork and mirrors that reflect the ambiance, creating a sense of depth and spaciousness.
A gentle hum of hushed conversations in various languages added to the cosmopolitan charm of the place, as patrons leaned in to share stories and laughter over glasses of exquisite wine. Mellow notes of a live jazz trio serenaded the diners, created an enchanting backdrop for the evening. The atmosphere of the restaurant was a symphony of romance and elegance, where every detail was designed to whisk patrons away into a world of amour. It had seemed the right location to mark our wedding anniversary.
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Good thing that Tina finally voiced what she needed: Bette at home in their appartement. Tina off of work for a while should give them some time to talk. If Bette gets some free time as well – without being fired.
Thanks for posting!
Beautiful written rewrite, the details of everything, the insights of what Tina is thinking and feeling and she finally voiced what she needed, and that was for Bette to come home.
Truly devastating if you loose your child and even more devastating if you close of your pain, trying desperately to move on. Plagued by nightmares of that night you loose your daughter. Feeling guilty because you were not able to give your wife the daughter you so wanted. Both of them feel guilty, they need to talk about it, share there feelings, their grieve instead of trying to hide it.
Bette coming home is a good start.
Look forward to read the next chapter!