Fan Fiction
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Story written on May 4, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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Neq, you’re giving me too much credit. I’ve never actually seen the movie…yeah, I know, I know, but I just can’t get through it.
Good one Tina Fire her ass…So you can continue what you started..Post soon Love this story have missed it
I love it!! Please post very very very soon, I just love this story and have missed it!
Great they are making progress. Good Job.
Olives, you’re killing me softly with all the kissing :) Loved it. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Yippee!
Let the games recommence.
As always you leave your readers wanting more. The direction that this story is taking has me rolling in the aisles with laughter. I just can’t stop grinning as I imagine the gals is their tight, little, bitty uniforms.
Happy that some of the tension between Bette and Tina has consummated their physical relationship.
*About bloody time* the chorus sings.
Please continue as I need to know where this turn of events will take us next.
Hot monkey sex isn’t a bad place to go.
Thank you for your gift to us,
A Fan.
Damn it’s hot in here…Thanks, ExO!
Thank heaven! I was in sooooo much shock when I saw the post!!! I dropped my files and silenced my mobile to read….I love this story! PLEASE! Don’t take too long to post…and I’m glad you decided to continue!
loved it!! please post soon!!
great story yahooo
please continue soooooooooon.
I really love this story. I was so excited to see this update. Please don’t leave us hanging so long again. It is such a good story.
so fukin good ! Miss you .. write soon – Please ?? Thank you – it totally lekker.
i love the story but keep it up its been a long time!thank you!
Great chapter. This is so sweet and cute, please post soon. Thank you!
HAHA!! I’m so glad that you brought this back! I love this story! (you can ditch Leslie ANY TIME NOW!) Please post again soon!
Lovely fic. Look for it everyday.
love it!
The sexual tension between them jumps right off the page (er… screen)! Loved it. Thanks!
Great stuff, just love your writing. Please post soon…
Yes! I love your story so much! You are great!!
Yeah, fire her ass so we can get the ball rolling with their romance. Loved it.
love it, missed your story, can’t wait for more.. please update soon :)
Do I even need to say anything? Excellent writing!
please post soon, missed your story
You are so unbelievably good…5 bazillion stars
that was great
WOW! So Bette has morals–who knew! As always, a masterpiece. Thanks so much.
Please don’t keep us waiting too long! I love each chapter more than the last!
damn, that was awesome! i’ll try to be patient waiting for your updates (to any of your stories) but it will be hard!
You must have been reading my mind. I was just thinking about when I would see the next chapte of this story. I have missed it and it is one of my favorite ones. Thank you! I know how time consuming it can be but I do love your writing. It is worth the wait.
I don’t know how you manage to juggle with the 3 fantastic stories you have on the go but, please keep it up! I love how you manage to tie Umbrella and Chase in together, and how this story is totally different aswell.
this chapter totally rocks.
Absolutely love this unique twist on Tibette romance. I’m now caught up on all three of your fantastic stories and the frustration of a new fix is taking its toll on me. Please throw me a scrap…anything. You are the mistress of fanfic!
Oh Lord, I am so very happy that your username popped up on the first page for fanfiction today. I have been aching for the next installment. And the dull ache has been relieved. I absolutely LOVE what you’ve put into this story. The attraction, the kisses, the confusion…a brew that just kindles so many questions for the couple. :) I really wonder where you’re going to take us. Keep writing! The connection you’ve created between Bette and Tina isn’t just palpable…it flows with honesty and an ear for conversation. Wonderful, wonderful! Can’t you tell I’m gushing? I just LOVE it when you update! And when you update sooner than two weeks! :) but if quality takes time, then I am so very willing to wait.
Oh, the tension is just sizzling off the page. Thanks so much for this update. Sand in the sheets indeed.
i always find myself visiting back this site to see your update(s). ah great as usual, you never let me down. bravo!
That lastline is straight outta Flashdance, and I love how you made that connection. I love this story, plz dont make us wait as long as lasttime.
sizzling is right! f*ck…
Love it, please post soon.
So much fun to read…and sexy too.
yahoo! I love this story! post again soon…
What ever you do, don’t make me wait that lon again till your next post! Love your work!!!!!!!!!
gotta love your chapters everytime. thanks for the time Olive. it’s great. loved it.
Please post soon – just love this story.