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    Story written on May 9, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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    3. just so well written as usual. thanks for the update. i think that i’ve mentioned this before, but will certainly tell you again. your work is some of the best on this site and i so look forward to reading it every time it surfaces. thanks!

    8. You write so well I could read yours stories everyday. And Maddy has a way to explain things to Bette which is simple but right.
      Thank you and I hope you’ll post soon.

    9. Thanks SNS. Beautifully written as always. The mind boggles that you can have three such good stories going at the one time. Always worth stopping by in the hopes of finding something written by you.

    13. Thank you very much to continue this Awesome Story it’s been a while I love it Tha Umbrella it’s really Beartiful writting Amazing Story again Thank you Please post soon.

    14. I love your writing, I took a break from work to check the stories out, it always brings a smile to my face when I see your name up there. Ok so she went after Bette right?

    18. Ah… fantastic chapter. I don’t think we’ve had two chapters of Umbrella in one month in a very long time.. what a lovely gift. The bickering especially was painfully realistic, I could feel it. And boy that Bette is mighty lucky to have her mom (the voice of reason) to help her figure out how to get out of trouble. Excellent work. Thank you.

    19. Mind an update on “Umbrella”? Surely you jest. It’s the first story I ever read on this site and in my Favorites Hall of Fame. I hope Tina finds Bette, and Bette find s the nerve to give T the ring. Wonderful chapter.

    21. It’s Umbrella and it’s excellent! Could you please continue this story forever… I’ll read and cherish every word! Thanks so very much for taking the time to write. Your writing is truly a gift.

    23. I’m sorry to be so tough on ‘ya Olives, but I simply must chain you to a desk and not let you up for air until you finish all three of your ongoing fics to my satisfaction! Oh, behave!

    24. i’m really glad you post this update. i’ve been waitin long enuf for this chapter!I love this story line..pls post more often!! keep this going..really love it.

    26. Hello Olives? Are you out there? Just wondering what happened to all those chapters of your great stories. – ‘Chase’, ‘Sand Games’ and ‘Umbrella’ seem to be MIA now. The world will be a sadder place if they disappear forever. Are you going to repost them? Please do!

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