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A brief encounter
Bette stands in front of the window of her room on the 16th floor, she can overlook a lot of the town but the rain that pours over the window makes the view a bit blurry. This time of the year, Bogotá is famous for its rains. It has been raining the whole day, although Bette hasn’t seen much of it, she has been inside for almost all day. The only time she was out, was when she got in the taxi to the Congress at the University of Fine Art and back to the hotel again. She has never been a fan of Congresses but as a dean of Art studies, she has to attend some important ones to keep up. And this one is important as it is the biggest Congress in Latin- America. On one hand she would like to explore the city now, but the weather is an obstacle, so after contemplating what to do, she decides to stay in the hotel for a drink and a diner. Maybe tomorrow the weather will be better.
She gets her key on the way out, and walks to the elevator. She hates to be alone in hotels, because you always end up eating alone or worse, a “gentleman” is offering a drink and a diner. But these gentlemen are mostly married and even if not, they all want the same: not having a lonely night. But Bette has no choice, she does not want to spend the night in her room watching some movie, so when the elevator doors open, she makes her way to the bar.
She slowly approaches the bar, letting her eyes go over the people, it is busy, a lot of guests must have the same thought to spend the night inside instead of challenging the rain. She looks for a free seat, the only one available is a barstool. She is not much of a barstool person, she believes barstools are for people who are always quickly in need for a drink and can not wait for a waiter to serve them. But as she has no choice, she approaches the barstool while her eyes check out the persons on either side of the stool. One is a man who has his back to the empty stool while he is an animated conversation with two other men, probably colleagues. On the other side is a woman, nipping on a glass, she seems to be alone. Bette grabs the stool, turns to the woman “ Is this one free?” she asks friendly with a small smile. The woman looks up “ I think so, yes” she replies with the same friendliness. Bette moves her body on the stool and looks at the bartender to get his attention. “I have a dry Martini,please” she orders and looks at the bartender while he fixes her drink. She feels a bit trapped in between these people, she wishes she would have stayed on her feet. She takes a sip of her drink while her eyes look at all the labels of the bottles behind the bar.
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(40 votes, average: 3.35 out of 5)
I loved this story, totally did not suspect it was Tina……….Hope you will continue with this story.
I almost stopped reading this story because you know I am a Tibetter. I went to the last page and read that Tina had given a fake name so I was able to go back and read the rest of the story. I am glad that I did. This was an awesome story. I hope that we will continue to see more chapters of you ongoing stories and new short stories.
Damn that was hot, glad that was Tina and not Jodi. Anyway love it and thank you!
Brilliant; you almost had me liking Jody! Tease
I don’t know why, but i just knew it!… Okay, there was this little hint about “Jodi”‘s guilt when she said her name… Or couldn’t it be simply because a good author is able to transcribe their unique chemistry into fanfic?…
Hey B Gal, That was an awesome short story but I do believe that Bette should now try to find Tina. These gals cannot stop at one night of passion. Their love and desire demands further investigation. Please continue this fabulous fiction soon. It was breathtaking. I loved it. Many thanks for returning to hte fold. Your Loyal Fan.
This was great!! You know you can’t leave it hanging like this…Bette’s gotta find Tina.
great, great job, luved this story!!
I knew it was Tina when she saw a hint of guilt in her eyes. I am positive that these two ladies will run into each other when they get back to L.A..
oh, that was just mean to trick us like that. I was all into it and then I ready Jody and I was like, Huh. KNew it though. Well is Bette gonna go after her or what?
Djeezes christ Bonaire girl, you like the slowburn huh. What a build-up….you were truly missed girl. Hey and you are leaving an open end, great…please don’t stop with this one chapter, it’s good, in fact it’s excellent. Het ga je goed meid en goeie reis binnenkort, je gaat de tijd van je leven tegemoet. Ik wens jullie het allerallerbeste.
Thanks pattifloatn, after reading your comment, I went back and read the rest of the story. I stopped once I saw Jodys name.Bonaire you are so bad.
Wow…totally didn’t suspect…more…Please!
hey BG nice short story. If it is partially true since it comes from your own experience, i envy you!