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A brief encounter
Bette starts moving her fingers slowly in and out, positioning her own centre on the back of her hand so she rubs her own clit while she moves in and out of Jody’s lips. Her eyes are focused on Jody’s face, with every move of her fingers she hears Jody’s sighs become heavier. Her own passion is flaring up with the touch of her hand and the noises from Jody. She feels Jody’s muscles getting tighter around her fingers, she knows Jody is getting close to the edge, she wants her to fall over in a special way. So her fingers start touching her walls inside, making a small search for her special spot. She is not sure if Jody knows about her spot, but Bette is determined to make her find out tonight.
The touching of her soft walls and the friction Bette’s fingers make with her movements, make Jody moan deep and Bette feels that she is ready to fall. Bette curls her fingers and they touch Jody’s spot. Jody feels herself loose all control and light flashes behind her eyes. As she falls over the edge a loud moan comes out, her legs tighten around Bette and the muscles of her centre tighten around Bette’s fingers. The moans of Jody make Bette come close to cum herself and she rubs herself for a last time. Then she too lets herself fall and makes a loud groan before her body rests on Jody with her face in her neck. Their bodies are sweaty and sticky as their breaths are still heavy. When Jody’s legs relax, Bette let herself roll of her and she positions herself with her face to Jody. Jody kisses Bette gently on her lips and strikes the wet hairs out of her face. “Thank you” she whispers and Bette smiles softly to her.
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Bette wakes up by a soft noise, her eyes are still closed but she feels that her bed is empty. She opens her eyes, just in time to see the door closes by a hand with a familiar watch around the pulse. Jody has left her, she looks at the window, dawn has just sat in, a little watery sun is coming out. She looks around her room, only a glass shows the presence of another person last night. Then she sees a piece of paper on the table next to the glasses. She pulls herself out of bed, takes the note in her hand and reads.
‘ I don’t regret anything of the night, but one thing……I lied about my name, my name is not Jody, it is TINA’
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(40 votes, average: 3.35 out of 5)
I loved this story, totally did not suspect it was Tina……….Hope you will continue with this story.
I almost stopped reading this story because you know I am a Tibetter. I went to the last page and read that Tina had given a fake name so I was able to go back and read the rest of the story. I am glad that I did. This was an awesome story. I hope that we will continue to see more chapters of you ongoing stories and new short stories.
Damn that was hot, glad that was Tina and not Jodi. Anyway love it and thank you!
Brilliant; you almost had me liking Jody! Tease
I don’t know why, but i just knew it!… Okay, there was this little hint about “Jodi”‘s guilt when she said her name… Or couldn’t it be simply because a good author is able to transcribe their unique chemistry into fanfic?…
Hey B Gal, That was an awesome short story but I do believe that Bette should now try to find Tina. These gals cannot stop at one night of passion. Their love and desire demands further investigation. Please continue this fabulous fiction soon. It was breathtaking. I loved it. Many thanks for returning to hte fold. Your Loyal Fan.
This was great!! You know you can’t leave it hanging like this…Bette’s gotta find Tina.
great, great job, luved this story!!
I knew it was Tina when she saw a hint of guilt in her eyes. I am positive that these two ladies will run into each other when they get back to L.A..
oh, that was just mean to trick us like that. I was all into it and then I ready Jody and I was like, Huh. KNew it though. Well is Bette gonna go after her or what?
Djeezes christ Bonaire girl, you like the slowburn huh. What a build-up….you were truly missed girl. Hey and you are leaving an open end, great…please don’t stop with this one chapter, it’s good, in fact it’s excellent. Het ga je goed meid en goeie reis binnenkort, je gaat de tijd van je leven tegemoet. Ik wens jullie het allerallerbeste.
Thanks pattifloatn, after reading your comment, I went back and read the rest of the story. I stopped once I saw Jodys name.Bonaire you are so bad.
Wow…totally didn’t suspect…more…Please!
hey BG nice short story. If it is partially true since it comes from your own experience, i envy you!