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A Choice Is Made Chapter 33
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He opens the box to reveals an 3 carat Emerald cut diamond ring.
Kit: Oh my god YES! Of course I’ll be your wife.
Jean slides the ring onto Kit’s hand, stands and kisses his bride to be. Both shed tears and are wearing smiles that would blind the average person. There are cheers and whistles from the other viewers and staff. These two were in love and ready to cement that love in marriage.
Jean: Do you want to head back right away and let your sister in on our news?
Kit: No, this is our moment. Let’s stay long enough to see the bright lights of the city come up, then yes I want to scream my happiness to my sister.
The pair coos, cuddles and kisses until the city is aglow and then continue their romantic ways in the taxi back to the apartment. Kit calls David and let’s him know the good news. He confirms that he’ll come up to New York to meet them for dinner tomorrow. Once Kit has the apartment door open, she is like a woman possessed. She bangs on Bette’s bedroom door.
Kit: Baby girl, let me in, let me in!
Bette: What’s wrong Kit?
Kit: Absolutely nothing, nothing at all. Jean just proposed. We are engaged.
Bette: Oh my god congratulations! Jean get in here! She hugs her brother in law to be.
Kit shares the whole story of the cab ride, the sunset and the old fashion proposal. The sisters cry and embrace. Jean’s heart swells with happiness and pride. He’s gotten himself the woman of his dream and allowed her to share the moment with her sister.
Bette: Do you want to call Tina and give her the news?
Kit: Definitely, call her.
Kit has a very animated story for Tina. Bette takes Jean back to the living room.
Bette: I asked her if she thought you’d propose soon. She thought you might, but you definitely surprised her and me too. Never thought you’d do it here and now.
Jean: I intended to do it on this trip, I wanted her to have this moment with you in person, not over the phone. You two mean too much to each other and you already share so much long distance. I could give both of you his moment.
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This was a fantastic chapter. Keep it going, lwsho.
Yes!!! Happy lives for the Porter girls. I’m kind interested to see how Bette treats David. It’s a tough position to be in, because I’d imagine Bette was a big part of David’s life when he was little, and David would in many ways be a big reminder of Melvin, yet he was also an ass. I trust you to show us this conflict in Bette really well, because you’ve done a great job so far. Thanks, lwsho!
Great update. It’s about time Kit found some happiness. Lovely update. Thank you :)
Anxious to see the angst played out between Bette and David. He was indeed a chip off the old block of his grandfather during the adoption process. Thanks for the triple post today! PPS
Jeeze…I went to bed last night and missed the 3rd update. Never mind I read it tonight…awesome, awsome, awesome! I think that Bette and Kit should have a double wedding…either in Canada or one of the more liberated US states. I would also like to see Bette and David make up…seems like a good opportunity to me. Love this story Lwsho!
Wow, I can’t believe I finally caught up. I love this story. The details are wonderful. I feel like I’m part of the family. Thanks so much and please post soon!!!
:) loved it.
yeaaahhhhhhh I love happiness for everybody. Shane and Alice left lol. PPVS.
FAntastic chapter Lwsho, I’m continuing to love this story. You are doing such a marvelous job writing it and showing the love and feelings of our girls nd their family. Your description of the different landmarks, clubs and restaurants are to be envied. Keep writing and we’ll keep reading. Thanks for posting.
Hey I am loving the story so far. You have given such a good attention to detail its very nice to get to know so many things. I am happy for Tibette and can’t wait till Tina gets to be in NY full time. Hmm…about the David situation…till now, Bette has brought up at least twice about how he was an ass and insulting to her in the past but every time I haven’t seen Kit acknowledging it. It seems like she is ignoring it which upsets me. So I will wait to see how it goes in future. Thanks for the story. PPVS :)
great fun chapter and both Porters ‘happy and in-love’