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A Choice Is Made Chapter 33
Kit: Well I promise to be surprised for the rest.
Jean: The rest, that’s it we are watching the sunset. Maybe I had planned to kiss you, but that’s what I wanted to share with you.
Kit: Come here let me kiss you now.
Jean: Nope. I want my kiss as we overlook this great city at sunset.
Kit laughs, sneaks a peck on the cheek and hugs Jean. He can’t help but to also laugh and return the kiss to her temple and he pulls her into his side. After paying the fare he helps Kit out of the taxi and they head straight to the Top of the Rock. He gets their tickets, they enter the elevator and after a fast ride they are on the observation deck.
Kit: When you are down on the ground among all the tall buildings, people and traffic it’s easy to forget just how awesome and majestic this city really is.
Jean: Yes, I think that’s why so many of us Wall Street types wanted the apartment with at view. We like the power the city reflects and it fuels us to go back into battle daily.
Kit: Did your place of a view.
Jean: Absolutely. We has a fantastic view of the side of the building next door. We could head up to the roof to catch the view. That was good enough for me. Come on let’s head over to the western view to watch the sunset
The lovers continued their chatter with Jean hugging Kit from behind. Once the sunset Jean spun Kit around and drops to one knee and held onto one of Kit’s hands. He reaches into his jacket pocket and pulls out a ring box.
Jean: The sun has just set and I am hoping that it has also set on my days as a single man. Katherine Porter. I have loved you from the moment I laid eyes on you. I have had the pleasure of being your friend for a year before you’d give a brother a date. I have had the distinction of being your man for the last year and I want the honor of being your husband for the rest of your life. Katherine Porter will you marry me?
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(25 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
This was a fantastic chapter. Keep it going, lwsho.
Yes!!! Happy lives for the Porter girls. I’m kind interested to see how Bette treats David. It’s a tough position to be in, because I’d imagine Bette was a big part of David’s life when he was little, and David would in many ways be a big reminder of Melvin, yet he was also an ass. I trust you to show us this conflict in Bette really well, because you’ve done a great job so far. Thanks, lwsho!
Great update. It’s about time Kit found some happiness. Lovely update. Thank you :)
Anxious to see the angst played out between Bette and David. He was indeed a chip off the old block of his grandfather during the adoption process. Thanks for the triple post today! PPS
Jeeze…I went to bed last night and missed the 3rd update. Never mind I read it tonight…awesome, awsome, awesome! I think that Bette and Kit should have a double wedding…either in Canada or one of the more liberated US states. I would also like to see Bette and David make up…seems like a good opportunity to me. Love this story Lwsho!
Wow, I can’t believe I finally caught up. I love this story. The details are wonderful. I feel like I’m part of the family. Thanks so much and please post soon!!!
:) loved it.
yeaaahhhhhhh I love happiness for everybody. Shane and Alice left lol. PPVS.
FAntastic chapter Lwsho, I’m continuing to love this story. You are doing such a marvelous job writing it and showing the love and feelings of our girls nd their family. Your description of the different landmarks, clubs and restaurants are to be envied. Keep writing and we’ll keep reading. Thanks for posting.
Hey I am loving the story so far. You have given such a good attention to detail its very nice to get to know so many things. I am happy for Tibette and can’t wait till Tina gets to be in NY full time. Hmm…about the David situation…till now, Bette has brought up at least twice about how he was an ass and insulting to her in the past but every time I haven’t seen Kit acknowledging it. It seems like she is ignoring it which upsets me. So I will wait to see how it goes in future. Thanks for the story. PPVS :)
great fun chapter and both Porters ‘happy and in-love’