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A Choice Is Made Chapter 33
Bette: Are you saying you want to buy our house?
Kit: I’m not sure we can pay $1.2 million, but we love that place. My commute is awesome from there and his isn’t too bad.
Bette: Are you sure you want a house rather than a condo?
Kit: We both like the idea of more privacy than the condo offers and your place is all on one level, so the climbing steps wouldn’t be an issue, he’s 60 and we have to think about getting older together.
Bette: What makes you hesitate in buying the house?
Kit: It’s a lot of money. My rent isn’t cheap, but I can easily handle it. I’ve always been independent, never had a man take care of me before. Jean would need to buy the house, you know my financial situation. It’s improved, but I’ve never thought about buying something like that.
Bette: Well let’s do this. I won’t sign the listing contract and I’ll let Tina know you are considering buying the house. We won’t paint the house, you can do that with your own color scheme if you buy it. You pay for two independent appraisals. We’ll take an average of the two as the selling price and you can decide if you want to make that deal. Now of course I’ll have to run this by Tina and you can discuss it with Jean. If you know this weekend that you definitely don’t want the house I’ll sign the contract and send it home to Tina. If Tina would rather see what we can get on the market then we’ll still list it as planned.
Kit: That seems like a good plan and a fair deal.
Bette: Do you think he’s ready to propose soon? Are you ready to say yes?
Kit: I’m a sure thing for him. I kind of thought he was going to do it for Valentine’s Day. So I’m not sure what he has planned.
Bette: I’m glad to see you are ready. I’ll wish you many years of happiness together. Has David met him?
Kit: Yes, remember David came for Thanksgiving last year. Even he was even impressed with Jean, imagine that.
Bette: Then he must have asked David for your hand then. I think Daddy would have really liked him.
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(25 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
This was a fantastic chapter. Keep it going, lwsho.
Yes!!! Happy lives for the Porter girls. I’m kind interested to see how Bette treats David. It’s a tough position to be in, because I’d imagine Bette was a big part of David’s life when he was little, and David would in many ways be a big reminder of Melvin, yet he was also an ass. I trust you to show us this conflict in Bette really well, because you’ve done a great job so far. Thanks, lwsho!
Great update. It’s about time Kit found some happiness. Lovely update. Thank you :)
Anxious to see the angst played out between Bette and David. He was indeed a chip off the old block of his grandfather during the adoption process. Thanks for the triple post today! PPS
Jeeze…I went to bed last night and missed the 3rd update. Never mind I read it tonight…awesome, awsome, awesome! I think that Bette and Kit should have a double wedding…either in Canada or one of the more liberated US states. I would also like to see Bette and David make up…seems like a good opportunity to me. Love this story Lwsho!
Wow, I can’t believe I finally caught up. I love this story. The details are wonderful. I feel like I’m part of the family. Thanks so much and please post soon!!!
:) loved it.
yeaaahhhhhhh I love happiness for everybody. Shane and Alice left lol. PPVS.
FAntastic chapter Lwsho, I’m continuing to love this story. You are doing such a marvelous job writing it and showing the love and feelings of our girls nd their family. Your description of the different landmarks, clubs and restaurants are to be envied. Keep writing and we’ll keep reading. Thanks for posting.
Hey I am loving the story so far. You have given such a good attention to detail its very nice to get to know so many things. I am happy for Tibette and can’t wait till Tina gets to be in NY full time. Hmm…about the David situation…till now, Bette has brought up at least twice about how he was an ass and insulting to her in the past but every time I haven’t seen Kit acknowledging it. It seems like she is ignoring it which upsets me. So I will wait to see how it goes in future. Thanks for the story. PPVS :)
great fun chapter and both Porters ‘happy and in-love’