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A Choice Is Made Chapter 33
Jean: You forgot sexy.
Kit: No, I hadn’t gotten there yet. And the phrase I was looking for is damn sexy.
Jean: OK note to self be more patient when Kit is blowing you up. She saves the really good stuff for the end.
Kit: Hey on a serious note Bette and I talked about the house. I told her we had an interest in buying it. Well that you could buy it; I don’t have that kind of money.
Jean: You know I love the house. I told you that the first time I was there for the cookout. Spending the weekend there with you and the baby just cemented things for me. The backyard is an oasis and I love the pool. Do you know what we could do in that pool?
Kit: Do you love the price? Are you really ready to spend that kind of money on a house?
Jean: $1.2 million isn’t that much for a place in the greater Los Angeles area. It is a well maintained home, with some great extras in a great neighborhood. Now tell me, you have history and memories with that house and your sister is a big part of that. Can you live in that house? Are there ghosts there that could haunt you?
Kit: Absolutely not. That house has always felt like home to me and it was wonderful being there with you. It felt like home then too. Bette made a suggestion. She wants us to get a couple of independent appraisals. If we still want to buy the place and Tina agrees they’ll accept the average of the two appraisal prices.
Jean: Your sister is indeed a savvy business woman. That’s actually what I would have suggested.
Kit: Tina just had some little things fixed at the house and was ready to get it painted. Bette said they wouldn’t do the painting, that we could do it to our own tastes if we buy it. She won’t sign the listing contract until we decide.
Jean: I’ve already made a deal to sell the condo to Jerome. He’s wanted the place forever so I made a deal with him. We close at the end of the month and I’ll rent it from him until we get our place. I’m getting $500K for the condo, cash deal.
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(25 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
This was a fantastic chapter. Keep it going, lwsho.
Yes!!! Happy lives for the Porter girls. I’m kind interested to see how Bette treats David. It’s a tough position to be in, because I’d imagine Bette was a big part of David’s life when he was little, and David would in many ways be a big reminder of Melvin, yet he was also an ass. I trust you to show us this conflict in Bette really well, because you’ve done a great job so far. Thanks, lwsho!
Great update. It’s about time Kit found some happiness. Lovely update. Thank you :)
Anxious to see the angst played out between Bette and David. He was indeed a chip off the old block of his grandfather during the adoption process. Thanks for the triple post today! PPS
Jeeze…I went to bed last night and missed the 3rd update. Never mind I read it tonight…awesome, awsome, awesome! I think that Bette and Kit should have a double wedding…either in Canada or one of the more liberated US states. I would also like to see Bette and David make up…seems like a good opportunity to me. Love this story Lwsho!
Wow, I can’t believe I finally caught up. I love this story. The details are wonderful. I feel like I’m part of the family. Thanks so much and please post soon!!!
:) loved it.
yeaaahhhhhhh I love happiness for everybody. Shane and Alice left lol. PPVS.
FAntastic chapter Lwsho, I’m continuing to love this story. You are doing such a marvelous job writing it and showing the love and feelings of our girls nd their family. Your description of the different landmarks, clubs and restaurants are to be envied. Keep writing and we’ll keep reading. Thanks for posting.
Hey I am loving the story so far. You have given such a good attention to detail its very nice to get to know so many things. I am happy for Tibette and can’t wait till Tina gets to be in NY full time. Hmm…about the David situation…till now, Bette has brought up at least twice about how he was an ass and insulting to her in the past but every time I haven’t seen Kit acknowledging it. It seems like she is ignoring it which upsets me. So I will wait to see how it goes in future. Thanks for the story. PPVS :)
great fun chapter and both Porters ‘happy and in-love’