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A Choice is Made Chapter 9
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Tina: Do you want to have something at the house for the family?
Bette: I think at some point you should do that. This cute kid will rack up loot from her aunties. No, I won’t come back to LA, I’m just not ready for that, hopefully I’ll be ready by the Christmas trip. I was thinking we could meet in Anaheim, let her celebrate her first birthday with Mickey Mouse. We can get her one of those really fun Disney character cakes and her first set of ears.
Tina: Sure, that’s a great idea. Do you want me to book something?
Bette: Sure, book the room, meal reservation and even order the cake. Do you think it would be better to do lunch?
Tina: You know it’s her birthday, let her have cake for breakfast. She won’t be too much of a mess yet and she has so much energy in the morning. Later in the day we take a chance of her being cranky.
Bette: Glad we got that settled. Just let me know how much.
Tina: How about we split the costs?
Bette: That’ll work too.
Tina: What else did you want to talk about?
Bette: Well it’s really what you wanted to talk about. Are you ready to talk now?
Tina: Sure, thank you for giving me this chance.
Bette: This is for both of us. I think we both need to do this. Just keep in mind however this goes we still have to be great parents to that little girl in there.
Tina: Where should I start, with the man thing?
Bette: That was the nail in the coffin, we need to talk about the things that got us to that point. You decided to come home and have Angelica in our home. But you never seemed to want to be there, you were awful to me from the start. Now, I had worked for our entire relationship and for the first time was unemployed and dealing with the loss of Daddy. I was so happy that we finally had our baby and grateful that I had time to spend with her.
Tina: Yea, it seemed that now that we had a baby you had no interest in taking care of her. You didn’t seem to want to get a job.
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Date night? Presumptuous much, T? Your writing is really great, but your Tina upsets me. After how long she made Bette beg after Candace, it seems like she’s expecting to have Bette just give her a chance so easily, when she was so much more hurtful towards her. I hope they make it, but only for Bette and Angie’s sakes, not for Tina, who doesn’t deserve such a great partner
I’m with jikes. It seems Tina is thinking Bette will cave and things can go back to the way she (Tina) wants it. Hope Bette hangs tough and helps Tina realize that the degree of pain she put Bette through can’t be undone by a smile and a “sorry”. Thanks for posting tonight – such an unexpected treat! PPS.
Will be interesting to see what happens from here…. thanks for writing it!
Well, I liked the fact that they are talking honestly and civily. There is nothing to be gained by two people who still love each other artificially holding up barriers. Each of them “earn” there way back to each other by being honest with themselves and honest with each other and create new rules between them to move forward. You are telling your story very well Lwsho…I am really enjoying it.
Great story. At least they are both open to the possibilty of working thing out. An as in real life it’s good to be careful to work through issues that have been allowed to destroy a realtionship. It’s good to see that being played out in this story. A day at a time.
at least they are talking. Tina really hurt Bette, especiay when she had Josh in their house that was meant. But their need each other. just love yur story. PPVS
love this.. and baby steps is good… i know they are going to make it.. pps
That was great and can’t wait to see more !
The road back is bumpy and eraught with potholes and turns; B needs T and vice versa.
Another great update – thank you :) Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thank you for this story :)
I hope the open communication continues and things stay positive. Please post very soon!
I’m glad they’re starting to talk about what happened. It feels like Tina is talking the brunt of their breakup. It takes problems with both partners for things to get as bad as they did and I don’t think we’re seeing Bette’s role. I guess the fact that Bette up and left without communicating her thoughts and intentions with Tina is an indication of how withdrawn she was from the relationship which I think Tina sensed. She is being portrayed as having only good intentions by making her move but I think she had some selfish/revenge type motivations as well. Maybe through their continued discussions and their therapy sessions some of these things will come to light and she’ll start taking some of the responsibility for the demise of their relationship. Then they can really move forward in healing.
Amazing Chapter!!! B&T talking is always good. I am a frim beleaver that it takes two to kill a marriage and two to fix it. I hope that B&T make in your story and Tina will move to N.Y., but she needs to give it time and alot off it. Thanks PPVS