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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 14
Chapter 14
Bette arrives in a very good mood. She starts her lessons, first up is an old married couple. Theyre learning about putting today. So Bette can actually show them, because it doesnt include twisting her leg. Between lessons she goes over to the tennis area to watch Dana train. And before she knows it its
Hi, Tee. Bette says and smiles.
Hi, babe, Ill be there in 10 minutes. I had to drive down town with some pictures from yesterday. Tina replies.
Thats okay, Ill meet you out in the parking lot. Bette says and they hang up.
Bette walks outside and takes a seat on a bench next to the parking lot. And after about 7 minutes, Tinas black BMW turn into the lot and parks.
Bette walks over and opens the door for Tina to step out, and give her a kiss on the lips.
Hi. Tina says and kisses back.
Hi, youve had a busy day? Bette asks.
Yeah, so far, but now Im gonna relax the rest of the day with you. Tina smiles and takes Bettes hand. They walk inside.
Are you ready for this? Bette asks
Yeah, I think so, are you? Tina asks back.
I dont think Ill ever be ready for this, so I might as well get it over and done with, right? Bette smiles and squeezes Tinas hand a little.
They walk up to Bettes mothers office and knocks.
Come in. She says from the inside. Bette slowly opens the door. She let go of Tinas hand.
Hi mom Bette says and smiles.
Hi Bette She replies.
This is Tina Kennard. Bette says looking at her mother for any kind of reaction.
And Tina, this is my mother Maxine Porter. Bette says and smiles a little.
Hi, its nice to meet you. Tina says and smiles.
Its nice to meet you too. Maxine replies.
Tina is nervous and Maxine notices it.
You dont have to be nervous. Maxine says and smiles.
Tina sighs of some relief and so does Bette.
So mom, will you join us for lunch? Bette asks.
Yes, Id like that. Maxine says and smiles. Ill join you in a few minutes. Maxine says.
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(48 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
Great story Lauren. I hope Bettes mom comes around. Love thsi new twist in the story. Gold digger? HAHA
ok … we will let you sleep… but tomorrow is another day and well we will be here waiting for your story to continue…
I just love this story… and love the pace… and i love that when ever bette says tee it means i love you… hmmm wish i would have thought if it…
i knew it..Bettes mom was behind Gregs little visit…man what a Drama..but i hope Maxine feel shame and try to retract to Tina she is a good woman..and i love Bettes attitude she wont be afraid… ok is not necessary to say that was great and beg to you post soon..lol..thanks
I’m glad Bette set her Mom straight…it’s what she should have done with Melvin in S1!
K
Wonderful chapter, I hope Bette’s mom comes around as well. Love it.
Ok Lauren you are allowed to go to bed after posting this – but do post again tomorrow. You know we are on the same time difference since you´re from Norway.
Bette´s mom better come around soon other wise she will lose her daughter. Damn that women – sending Greg of to Bette. Post soon and good night Lauren
yea!!! another post. tks a bunch, I really love this story, it rings of true life, everything is very believable…tks
I’ll be waiting….
Great update, Lauren. Keep it up! By the way, what’s your handicap? When I played golf, I couldn’t even count high enough to keep score!
WHOA! Lauren I love it as Always Beautiful Amazing Story Thanks for More posted WOW! You’re really Great writer Please post soon I’m just hooked LOL! about the Story.
Bad Maxine fix it…
If only Bette’s mom knew it was meant to be. The chapter was too short. : ( Just love it. Post soon
I wasn wondering why all of a sudden Greg showed up? So mom isn’t approving…..poor Bette and Tina but there is always hope…..Maxine will come around eventually. Thanks for writing Lauren and please do get your sleep, you’ve done a big favor for the chapters you have written already. Thanks a million!
just keeps getting better and better
Good chapter. This is sad for Bette and Tina, and glad Bette set her straight and can’t wait to see more. Please post soon, thanks!
Oh no Mama Porter… you didn’t… did you? Ughh!
wonderful chapter..Mama Porter better get over it if she want’s to keep her job….Great Job…goodnight and THANKS
Wow! Mom sounds like Melvin, only a lot more blunt!
I’m glad your Bette has a backbone. She’s about to kick her mom to the curb! Loyalty doesn’t get much better (or worse) than that.
Hit the bricks, Maxine!!! Ha!
Three chapters today, how generous of you !! Have a long sleep, sweet dreams… and big breakfast tomorrow morning tokeep forces, please !
Well, well, I was naïve before believing in Bette’s mother’s relative understanding. Unfortunately, this sort of reaction must happened very often in life…
What a treacherous way to let her daughter think everything will be ok, when in fact she already prepared Greg’s come back and inquisitive questions for Tina…
As others, I’m so proud and happy about Bette’s vehement reaction – something I would have also wished to see with Melvin, in Season 1.
Marvellous work, Lauren ! … how do you say “congratulations” in Norwegian ?
wow… quick update. thanks. i enjoyed the read. looking forward to some more.
OMG I just went back and read the whole thing. It’s fricken amazing keep writing. I LOVE IT!!!
Hope that Bette’s Mother doesn:t make to much trouble for Tina.
I sure enjoooooy how you weave your story and always look forward to your post.
A gold-digger…classic. I’m glad Bette set her Mom straight. It’s nice to know that they both really know how they feel about one another — because they “talk.” Love your story, please do continue.
great update!
Gratulerer!! As always its a pleasure to read your chapters;)
Great post. Wow, never saw that coming. Glad B/T were able to talk it through. Another post, soon, please. Love this story.