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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 14
Okay. Bette says and she takes Tinas hand and they walk into the restaurant and find a table.
Well, that went rather well, right? Bette asks smiling.
Yeah, but its not over yet. Tina replies smiling.
They check out the menu. Then Maxine walks up to the table and takes a seat across from Bette and Tina who are sitting next to each other.
So what will you have? Maxine asks Bette and Tina.
Ill have Chicken filet with basil sauce. Bette replies.
Yeah, I think Ill take the same. Tina agrees.
It will be a early dinner. Bette says and smiles.
They tell the waiter what they want of both food and drinks.
So, Tina I heard you are a photographer. Maxine asks.
Yes, a freelancer. Tina replies.
Its not a secure job is it? Maxine asks seriously.
I make more than enough. Tina replies.
So where do you live? Maxine continues her questioning of Tina.
Bette starts to shift in her seat imagining where this is going.
Actually I live in the same building as Bette, 2 floors down. Tina says.
That is convenient. Maxine replies.
MOM. Bette says angrily.
When did you move there? Maxine asks.
About 4 months ago, I dont understand why you need to know that? Tina asks. Looking from Maxine to Bette, Bette looks worried.
I like to know everything concerning my daughter. She Maxine says smiling to Bette.
Mom, stop it. Bette says her voice now tensed up.
Bette, dont interrupt me. Maxine throws back.
How did you meet Bette? She continues.
Tina looks from Maxine to Bette one more time. And carefully she tells.
Here at the club. I was doing a photo shoot for Womens Fitness with Dana, and I had to go back the next day with the photos, and Dana was having lunch with Bette, she asked me to join them and I did. Tina explains clearly, trying to get Maxine to back off a bit.
Are you after her money? Maxine finally asks the question shes been wanting to ask from the start.
NO. Tina says raising her voice.
MOM, Stop it. Can I talk to you in your office? NOW. Bette says and starts to get up.
No, Im not finished. You were married and happy Bette, youre not a *****. Your career will be over. Have you talked to Greg lately? Maxine asks looking at Bette, who is now turning red. She sits back down again, and then she realize.
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(48 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
Great story Lauren. I hope Bettes mom comes around. Love thsi new twist in the story. Gold digger? HAHA
ok … we will let you sleep… but tomorrow is another day and well we will be here waiting for your story to continue…
I just love this story… and love the pace… and i love that when ever bette says tee it means i love you… hmmm wish i would have thought if it…
i knew it..Bettes mom was behind Gregs little visit…man what a Drama..but i hope Maxine feel shame and try to retract to Tina she is a good woman..and i love Bettes attitude she wont be afraid… ok is not necessary to say that was great and beg to you post soon..lol..thanks
I’m glad Bette set her Mom straight…it’s what she should have done with Melvin in S1!
K
Wonderful chapter, I hope Bette’s mom comes around as well. Love it.
Ok Lauren you are allowed to go to bed after posting this – but do post again tomorrow. You know we are on the same time difference since you´re from Norway.
Bette´s mom better come around soon other wise she will lose her daughter. Damn that women – sending Greg of to Bette. Post soon and good night Lauren
yea!!! another post. tks a bunch, I really love this story, it rings of true life, everything is very believable…tks
I’ll be waiting….
Great update, Lauren. Keep it up! By the way, what’s your handicap? When I played golf, I couldn’t even count high enough to keep score!
WHOA! Lauren I love it as Always Beautiful Amazing Story Thanks for More posted WOW! You’re really Great writer Please post soon I’m just hooked LOL! about the Story.
Bad Maxine fix it…
If only Bette’s mom knew it was meant to be. The chapter was too short. : ( Just love it. Post soon
I wasn wondering why all of a sudden Greg showed up? So mom isn’t approving…..poor Bette and Tina but there is always hope…..Maxine will come around eventually. Thanks for writing Lauren and please do get your sleep, you’ve done a big favor for the chapters you have written already. Thanks a million!
just keeps getting better and better
Good chapter. This is sad for Bette and Tina, and glad Bette set her straight and can’t wait to see more. Please post soon, thanks!
Oh no Mama Porter… you didn’t… did you? Ughh!
wonderful chapter..Mama Porter better get over it if she want’s to keep her job….Great Job…goodnight and THANKS
Wow! Mom sounds like Melvin, only a lot more blunt!
I’m glad your Bette has a backbone. She’s about to kick her mom to the curb! Loyalty doesn’t get much better (or worse) than that.
Hit the bricks, Maxine!!! Ha!
Three chapters today, how generous of you !! Have a long sleep, sweet dreams… and big breakfast tomorrow morning tokeep forces, please !
Well, well, I was naïve before believing in Bette’s mother’s relative understanding. Unfortunately, this sort of reaction must happened very often in life…
What a treacherous way to let her daughter think everything will be ok, when in fact she already prepared Greg’s come back and inquisitive questions for Tina…
As others, I’m so proud and happy about Bette’s vehement reaction – something I would have also wished to see with Melvin, in Season 1.
Marvellous work, Lauren ! … how do you say “congratulations” in Norwegian ?
wow… quick update. thanks. i enjoyed the read. looking forward to some more.
OMG I just went back and read the whole thing. It’s fricken amazing keep writing. I LOVE IT!!!
Hope that Bette’s Mother doesn:t make to much trouble for Tina.
I sure enjoooooy how you weave your story and always look forward to your post.
A gold-digger…classic. I’m glad Bette set her Mom straight. It’s nice to know that they both really know how they feel about one another — because they “talk.” Love your story, please do continue.
great update!
Gratulerer!! As always its a pleasure to read your chapters;)
Great post. Wow, never saw that coming. Glad B/T were able to talk it through. Another post, soon, please. Love this story.