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a crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 8
Chapter 8
Bette walks in to her moms office.
Hey mom. Bette says and takes a seat in the chair in front of the desk.
Hi, Bette, how are you feeling today? Her mom asks and smiles.
Actually very good. Bette replies and smiles back.
Do I have some time before lunch? I was hoping to talk to Dana first. Bette asks.
Yeah, I still have a few things to finish up here, so go ahead. Mom says.
Bette leaves the office and walks out to the tennis court. And there she is, practicing what seems to her two hand backhand. Bette takes a seat on top of the stands and waits.
She looks at her watch, she usually has lunch at this time too Bette says to herself.
And just as she said that, Dana and her trainer stopped. Dana takes a sip of her water and spots Bette, she waves. After a minute or two she makes her way up to Bette.
Hey, I didnt know you were going to be here today? Dana asks as she gives Bette a hug.
Me neither, but mom called this morning and asked to do lunch, so here I am. Bette replies.
Dana takes a seat next to Bette.
Sooo, how did the dinner go last night? Dana asks and smiles.
Great, it went great, shes a wonderful person. Bette says as she smiles and thinks back on the kiss. I kissed her. Bette lets out and looks over at Dana, who almost drops her jaw to the floor.
You kissed her? Wow Porter. Dana is able to say after a few moments.
Yeah I kissed her, and it was amazing. I kissed her this morning to. Bette replies.
You spend the night? Dana is shocked.
No, you idiot, she called this morning asking me down to the Planet for breakfast and then she gave me a ride here. Bette replies and looks down.
I think Im falling for her, I get this feeling in my stomach whenever I think of her. And its scaring me. Bette says and looks at Dana.
You shouldnt be scared Bette, what is it that you are scared of? Dana asks in a caring voice.
The being out thing for starters, and how my family will take it. Bette replies.
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(41 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so cute together. Please post soon, thanks!
Excellent, really ! I like very much the way you gave great confidantes to each of our two lovely ladies : aren’t Dana and Shane the ideal ones ?
And I have a special weakness for the sweet and delicate beginning of Bette & Tina’s relationship. Great work.
Great chapter! Thanks! *5*
you’re now on my official list as one of my favorite authors…..please keep it coming!
i agree – ur story is different and its hard to imagine B being the shy one and T being the alpha – but it is sweet – altho i hope not too much heartache for both of them
glad to see you post, so I like this tina, it’s a lot better having bette as the st8 girl. Can’t wait to see where your going with this, so when are alice and dana going to meet each other??
Amazing and sweet. I totally love Bette being the novice at this. I also like the very slow pace, the sweet kisses and tenderness between my favorite couple.
I love this story
this is just great i love what youve done with their caracters Bette the shy straight one is so adorable and Tina the more confident one! im a big fanfiction reader and want to thank you for posting so often looking forward to lots more…
oh man..have i said that i love this story..really i´m totally in love with this Bette and i hope she will be able to follow her heart..amazing chapter..post real soon like in 2 hours?
Absolutely love this story and that you post so often. For those of us that are hooked, you make our day! I love your spin on Bette and Tina. I like Bette a little calmer. Nice job.
nice… loving this… and i love the pace..go nice and slow… we have what 8 months …reading on
yeah girl…AWESOME JOB..THANKS
Totally love your story. The tenderness between Tina & Bette is so sweet. The role reversal is working very well. Love the careful pace they’re taking and Alice, Shane, and Dana — you have it all! Please continue.
Good keep it going bette shy can’t wrap my head arond that