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a crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 8
Come in, Ill make some coffee, join me. Tina says and walks into the kitchen.
She kissed me. Tina says and waits for
Wow, you got kissed by a superstar, a super hottie.
Al, come on, dont say it like that. Tina says seriously looking at
Well its true, and you know shes a millionaire right?
Oh come on TK, dont tell me you havent thought about her money?
Actually I havent, I dont care about her money Al, I have enough of my own. I just want to find the right person, and I believe she might be it. Tina replies and turns on the coffee maker.
How can you know that after just one date?
I dont know, I just have this feeling, and time will tell if Im right. Tina says and takes a seat.
So Bette, how is you leg healing? Mom asks.
It still hurts from time to time, but its getting better, I can put more and more pressure on it. Im taking the cast off tomorrow actually, I almost forgot. Bette says and smiles.
Thats great Bette. Ive been wanting to ask you what you feel about not being able to play golf. Mom asks.
Its hard, but I choose not to let it take up my life. I believe that I will be able to play again, it will just take a lot of time and recovery, and a lot of sessions with a physiotherapist. Bette says and smiles. Mini golf will do in the meantime. Bette let out a laugh. Her mother also joins the laughter.
Later at the Planet:
Shane is seated in a corner table taking on the phone when Tina arrives. Shane motions with her hand that she will be done in one second. Tina nods her head and takes a seat. The waiter comes over.
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(41 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so cute together. Please post soon, thanks!
Excellent, really ! I like very much the way you gave great confidantes to each of our two lovely ladies : aren’t Dana and Shane the ideal ones ?
And I have a special weakness for the sweet and delicate beginning of Bette & Tina’s relationship. Great work.
Great chapter! Thanks! *5*
you’re now on my official list as one of my favorite authors…..please keep it coming!
i agree – ur story is different and its hard to imagine B being the shy one and T being the alpha – but it is sweet – altho i hope not too much heartache for both of them
glad to see you post, so I like this tina, it’s a lot better having bette as the st8 girl. Can’t wait to see where your going with this, so when are alice and dana going to meet each other??
Amazing and sweet. I totally love Bette being the novice at this. I also like the very slow pace, the sweet kisses and tenderness between my favorite couple.
I love this story
this is just great i love what youve done with their caracters Bette the shy straight one is so adorable and Tina the more confident one! im a big fanfiction reader and want to thank you for posting so often looking forward to lots more…
oh man..have i said that i love this story..really i´m totally in love with this Bette and i hope she will be able to follow her heart..amazing chapter..post real soon like in 2 hours?
Absolutely love this story and that you post so often. For those of us that are hooked, you make our day! I love your spin on Bette and Tina. I like Bette a little calmer. Nice job.
nice… loving this… and i love the pace..go nice and slow… we have what 8 months …reading on
yeah girl…AWESOME JOB..THANKS
Totally love your story. The tenderness between Tina & Bette is so sweet. The role reversal is working very well. Love the careful pace they’re taking and Alice, Shane, and Dana — you have it all! Please continue.
Good keep it going bette shy can’t wrap my head arond that