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A Danish Beginning… Chapter 4
“Alice, what do you want me to say? You’re planning future vacations for you, Dana, and your imaginary 1.5 kids to go to Disneyworld. Do you know how creepy you sound right now? And this is coming from someone well acquainted with you and your creepy personality.”
“Hey, don’t forget that you, Tina, and your two kids will be going too! It’ll be a family double date!”
Bette shook her head.
“Al, I think it’s about time you go back for a visit in that nice, white, padded room. I’m sure that they miss you and would love for you to drop by for an extended visit.”
Before Alice had a chance to respond a voice said from the doorway, “You going out of town Alice?” Both Bette and Alice let out identical groans as they turned.
“What do you want Gabby?” Alice asked in a venomous voice.
“Alice, my dear, is that any way to talk to your girlfriend?” Gabby smirked as she watched Alice’s pale complexion turn bright red in anger.
“EX-girlfriend Gabby. For someone who’s supposedly in the top ten percent of our class, you’re not very bright.” Alice could feel herself losing control of her impressive anger. She didn’t want to do this with Gabby. All she wanted was to not ever see, hear, or think about Gabby fucking Deveaux.
“Is this about what happened over the summer? Alice, it was the summer! That’s what summers are FOR! That’s why they call them summer flings. It was nothing. And now it’s time for us to get back together.”
“You cheat on me with two other girls IN THE SAME NIGHT and expect things to just go back to peachy-keen??!! How fucking dense are you? Get the hell away from me and STAY THE HELL AWAY FROM ME!!” With that Alice grabbed her bag and stormed out of the room.
Bette knew that Alice could handle Gabby, and was rather proud of what her friend had said. She’d personally never liked Gabby and was only too happy to see her receive the verbal thrashing Alice had just unleashed on her. However, Bette couldn’t help but offer her own advice.
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ROTFL I could really see that Dana, and Tina scene, thanks for the post, and keep up your great writing!!!
Hey, once again really nice work. Haha damn I hate Gabby sometimes.
this is such a great story… and loved the twist at the end – I’m very intrigued. Can’t wait to see where this leads, it’s a great take on the L word characters and I look forward to your next update! :)
Another great and funny update! But I hope that update is right around the corner, if not then have a great vacation so that you can post asap when you get back, lol.
That was soo great! better than great! I seriously cannot wait for the next one, I am now addicted. Hahaha bread in the hood huh? I will soo have to try that on my friend! She only hates little birds they freak her out so much she will peg her bag at a table just to get them for go away. Great chapter! I loved it!
lol loved it all! post soon please!@
great post. looking forward to the next one…. and have a great vacation.
I think if you checked her birth certificate, “Gabby Fucking Deveaux” is actually her legal name. I’m loving the friendships between Dana and Tina and Bette and Alice. Also, LOVED the bit about the future family vacation. lmao!!
lol “Operation Danish” “what your hungry?” great line you continue to leave me laughing Bru. I really love your story its just great you rock :) and you really write Alice so well, so crazy its good lol its cool how u randomly introduced Jenny even tho jenny is on the bottom of my list still kudos and Gaby! haha just great “that would work out if we kept that rotation” at first with the whole Alice’s trip to the future i was like huh.. who? lol fantastic! Cant wait to read the next chap! :)
Goodness. It was only a matter of time before Gabby made her dreaded appearance. But i loved how Al handled that bitch. In your face Gabby!!I loved all the friendship scenes. So adorable. I can’t wait for more!! Post soon!!
This is so good. Love the friendship of Bette and Alice, Tina and Dana. OK now let see more please, thanks!