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    A Deeper Song, post 2

    Story written on July 6, 2007 by kelika.
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    a ray of sun appeared…

     

                Denise returned trailed by two limos and the caterers van.  The space was quickly yet unobtrusively transformed.  Food and drinks began to make their way through the assemblage. 

     

                Angelica barely left Bette’s side but her stomach started to rumble as the food came by.  Tina seeing that Angie did not want to leave Bette made her way to Bette’s side. 

     

                “Bette have you eaten anything?”  Tina asked softly. 

     

                “No, I’m…”

     

                Tina cut her off. “Why don’t you and Angie sit over there I bring you both something to eat.  I can hear Angie’s stomach growling from over here.”

     

                “I couldn’t figure out what that noise was.”  Bette smiled as she reached over and ruffled Angie’s hair.  “Why don’t you help your Mom with the food I’ll go save us a spot under the shade of that umbrella?” 

     

                Tina and Angelica returned with full plates.  Kit and Angus followed them with drinks.  “Do you mind if we join you?”  Tina asked as she handed Bette a plate with light finger foods that she knew Bette would not be able to resist.

     

                “Please do.” Bette invited.  Angelica began to eat with gusto earning her a smile from both her Moms.  Bette true to form began to pick h’orderves off the plate Tina prepared.   Kit and Angus settled next to them. 

     

                “This is such a beautiful spot.”  Kit commented.

     

                “Yeah, we used to pretend this was our own little slice of paradise.  Not many folks know about this little turn off.  We discovered it one day by accident.”

     

                Kay wandered over and Bette invited her to sit down as well.  Soon everyone had made their way over and the blankets and umbrellas followed. 

     

                “Nana and Grandpa would you tell us the story of when Sanna first went to the beach?”

     

                Fred smiled fondly at Angelica and wished that Rosanna and Bette had created the child they had spoken about.  In this moment he would have given anything for a small piece of Rosanna to hold onto.  “Well she was about four or five years old and we were down on the Carolina coast.  We had never taken her to the ocean before.  She always loved to water, pools, lakes and rivers.  So anyway you could tell she was a bit intimidated by the vastness of the ocean but she wouldn’t show it.  A wave came up pretty quick and doused her.   She scrambled up and yelled indignantly ‘hey she said and she was mad looking around at the other folks on the beach suspiciously somebody put salt in the water’.  The whole beach roared.”  Fred chuckled himself. 

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    5. I love your writting style…but, its so so hard to read that bette has a deep love for another…and now shes pregnant with the donor that she selected with tina…u really no how to torture a poor girls heart

    6. I agree with brighteyez07. I hate to say it, but it is time for Tina to move on…she will always love Bette, but she needs to fall in love with someone who will be totally into her!

    9. Seeing your post is the “ray of sun”…so happy to see you back. Your stories are just so beautifully written, although you certainly know how to tie a girl’s stomach in knots!!

    12. oh wowee…a sister/brother for Angel…mmm…r u gonna put our gyrlz back 2gether, i wonder, and i suffer…big sook tibetter that i am as u well know…oh well, bring it on…

    13. Wow,Kelika. I sitting in a hotel in Boston waiting to check out and decided to catch up on your new story. What a shock. I can’t believe you killed Ro. How sad. Glad Bette’s pregnant with their child. Please as hard as it is for you to write, and me to read, please continue this wonderful story. Not the sequel I would have expected, but it has great potential.

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