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A few extra scenes from some random episode…I don’t remember which one…Season 5?
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”You don’t try to control me any more,” Tina said.
”As if I ever had the capacity to exert control over you,” Bette replied with a laugh.
Tina shook her head rather than arguing.
”Okay,” Bette said. ”I’m getting better. How’s that?”
”Because Jodi won’t put up with your shit.”
”You never put up with my shit…”
Now it was Tina’s turn to laugh.
Bette placed her hand on Tina’s thigh and felt Tina rest her own hand on top.
”What’s going on with Kate Arden?”
”What do you mean?”
”Come on Tee. What’s. Going on. With Kate Arden?”
”Nothing. She’s not interested in me,” Tina shrugged.
”She’s interested,” Bette said. ”How could she not be interested. Look at you.”
”I work with her,” Tina said. ”That would be unprofessional.”
”But it’s over…with Henry?”
”So over.”
”Good.”
”Good?”
”Hard enough to see you with someone else,” Bette said. ”But to have you leave me for…him?”
”I didn’t leave you for him,” Tina said. ”I left you and ended up with him.”
”The devil is in the details,” Bette replied. ”The most salient detail being that you left me.”
”I was losing myself to the relationship I had with you,” Tina said.
”Have you found yourself again?”
Tina nodded.
”I like you a lot more than I ever have,” Tina added. ”I mean, I always loved you, you know. But I didn’t always like you.”
”I like you too,” Bette replied. ”And that’s certainly something we were missing for a long time.”
Bette’s hand started to move up Tina’s thigh, but was stopped when Tina grasped it tighter.
”You can’t do that,” Tina said.
”Do what?”
”I know you’re flirting,” Tina said. ”You can’t expect me to stop it all the time. And we’re finally friends again.”
”Have you missed making love with a woman?”
”Bette…”
”Just a casual inquiry,” Bette defended.
”I’ve missed making love with you.” Tina declined to make any eye contact as she made the statement.
”Who’s flirting now?”
”I learned from an expert,” Tina replied. ”And I understand why you do it. It’s exciting to see someone respond. To feel the electricity in the air.”
”It’s exciting to have you seem interested, even if you’re not,” Bette said. ”Thanks for playing along. It does make me feel better about my fucked up love life.”
Tina released the grip she had on Bette’s hand as it rested on her thigh and instead lifted her arm to place it around Bette’s shoulder. Bette turned her head to kiss Tina on the lips, unsure whether or not it would be a welcome overture.
”You taste like tears,” Tina commented after their brief kiss concluded.
”You taste like home,” Bette replied. She didn’t turn away, but she didn’t get any closer either. Tina had left her, after all.
”I’m not about to give you advice on how to get Jodi back,” Tina said quietly.
”She’s not the one I want anyway,” Bette replied.
This time, Tina leaned in. She used the pad of her thumb to wipe the moisture from under Bette’s eye, and kissed her again. Tina felt Bette suck gently on her bottom lip – but she also felt the sensation in locations far removed from where she was being kissed. Bette’s hand moved higher on her thigh again. Tina longed to know just where she would stop.
”Let’s go inside,” Bette whispered.
”I have to go get Angie soon.”
”We’ll both go,” Bette said. ”And we can come back here and talk some more.”
”Talk?”
”And if something else happens, would that be so bad?”
”It would likely be very good,” Tina replied.
”I missed making love to you too,” Bette said.
But they wouldn’t be missing it for long.
(The end)
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Thank you so much for this post,it was much better than the show .Please post more of all the frustrating story lines. Please post soon.
Yes, i agree with you!
Looking forward for more.
Thank you!
So many frustrating story lines…but some so frustrating, I can’t even tackle them! If something occurs to me, you’ll see an update. Thanks for the comments…
Welcome back. .. please stay for a while… A long while … purely selfish request as it is for my own entertainment. .. thank you for this little gem…. Kx
Hey Kins…I’m always back and forth! Sometimes a long time between posts and sometimes not so much. I haven’t been very creative lately, but who knows; something could occur to me.
As always,enjoyed your writing, thanks
Thanks for being such a frequent commenter! It’s what keeps me coming back to be honest. I don’t know that I would have kept it up for this long if not for the support!
Hello and welcome back! I agree with all the above comments! PPS
Thanks! And thanks for taking the time to comment. As I’ve mentioned, it’s what keeps me going at this gig…
I like a lot your story; I think is a much improved version of a scene from episode 4-12. I was missing your wonderful narrative, like reunion, reflections, a second chance at forever and many others; I wish you could write more often and longer stories. Thanks for posting and please give us a chance to enjoy more of your creativity. PPS
Thank you so much…I always found myself at a bit of a loss when an episode ended. My rewriting was purely selfish and to tie it all up with a neater bow. (As if life is neat…)
Hi, jks! :) So happy you posted another lovely snippet. Many thanks for this and the two previous ones that you shared with us recently. I’ve been meaning to thank you and post a comment since you resurfaced. I didn’t know how much I’ve missed your lovely, heartwarming, well-written version of Tee & Bette until I read your recent posts. Reading your stories, new and archived alike, is such a treat, jks. Reading them is like a warm hug and having coffee and fun conversation again with a good, quirky friend you haven’t seen for years. It’s like the Dory-Destiny reunion after being oceans and years and years apart. Sorry, I had to bring up Dory. What a pleasant surprise, what a thrill for us to read new jks stories at around the same time the lovable, forgetful Dory swam back into our lives. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, jks! :) Remember, there’s always another way and just keep swimming! :)
My dear mighty mouse! How I always appreciate your intriguing commentary – I was wondering if you’d disappeared. I’m as forgetful as Dory sometimes, but my return is, dare I say, inevitable? Great swaths of time may lapse between visits, but I’ll get back eventually.
I love extra scenes.. I hope there are more.
There are always more! But whether I can find the inclination to type out my random thoughts is the problem.
Your stories are always the best. Best written, most romantic, most realistic, funniest, best dialogue and just damn sexy without being prurient.
Truly, you are too kind…your support for my stories over the years has been wonderful – always a pleasure to read your comments. I do wonder when I don’t see a comment from you!
Nice to see a post from you, So enjoy reading your stories.
Enjoyed this, thanks, more please.
Thank you very much!
Love your takes on the show’s mediocre storytelling. I too have lots of ideas about undeveloped scenes that I have half written. It’s frustrating, but then again, I suppose that’s what FF is for, am I right? Hope to see more from you again very soon. And still trying to figure out what other name you have posted under here since I’ve read all your stories (and loved each one)!
Indeed, fan fiction gives at least the writer of the story what they wanted to happen – or perhaps a different take on what happened. The story I just posted might be one you haven’t seen before. It has the same beginning as one that was under my usual name, but I veered quite off the path to a completely different approach. Anything that was once listed under another author’s name will get (or has been ) posted under the usual name I write under. It’s funny to me how often I get a negative reaction with the stories I posted as ‘someone else’. Thanks for commenting!