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A Few Small Repairs – Chapter 10
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“It wasn’t that” Tina replied before she offered a small smile “You’d be great.”
“So did I ruin your afternoon?” Bette asked as her look begged forgiveness.
“I was a littlepreoccupied”
“I ended up in a bar talking to this woman about the fight I’d had with my partner.” Bette offered flatly.
Tina gave her wife a look that was somewhere between surprise and disbelief. It was the second thing Bette had done that was very out of character within the same small day. Tina bit her tongue and waited a little anxiously for Bette to elaborate.
“She said I looked like someone had kicked my dog and I probably did” Bette admitted.
“So you told her about what had gone on between us this morning?”
“I gave her my version of events”
“Which was?” Tina asked cautiously.
“That I didn’t think you wanted children”
“What!” Tina exclaimed as her eyes grew wide.
“It gets better” Bette said as she held up a hand indicating Tina would do best to wait. “I told her that you’d told me I was too old and I got all indignant and stormed out.”
Tina nodded in agreement with the final part of Bette’s story before asking “So then what happened?”
“I got the verbal ass kicking that I deserved. She told me to put myself in your shoes. She talked about how you might see it as me taking away your chance to be the birth mother and that it might be seen as me thinking you’re incapable.”
Bette paused to take a breath and to give Tina the opportunity to refute the statement but the only sound to be heard was ticking of a clock which hung on the wall to Bette’s right.
“God, I never meant it like that” Bette whispered as tears welled in her dark eyes.
Tina’s features relaxed a little and she nodded slowly in understanding.
Bette wiped a couple of tears away as she tried to explain. “I just thought that you didn’t want to so I was trying to”
“I never said I didn’t want to, Bette” Tina interjected “But I think that what happened today could be a good thing.”
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Some honest conversation. Now, was that too hard? Great (short!) chapter, Hackgirl. Please post soon.
thanks to alice, our girls will be just fine…thanks post soon again, i miss this story
Good convo…now, on to the makeup sex!
Thank you…this was fabulous!!
That was amazing bring on the naked make up sex
Words are powerful, they can cause devastating hurt and numerous slights, but when used as a gift and not a weapon they can heal and bridge even the widest gaps. Very nicely done. You could almost feel the heat from Bette’s breath in Tina’s ear…
Show her you’re still young. heehee.
Thanks for continuing! Remorse in place of defiance…her partner sharing realized thoughts. Loved it. Good thing your Alice isn’t on drugs.
I am reading this entire series all over again, and loving it all over again. Where are you Hackgirl?
Finally, they spoke about what really transpired between them earlier. Of course, Alice comes to their rescue. Thanks for the update.
your stories never ceased to amaze me. bravo…!! post soon!
HackGirl,That was magnificent.The open and real way in which you create these conversations is fabulous. I do feel like a fly on the wall.I loved the playfulness as Bette teased Tina about her confiding in a ‘stranger’ and accepting her responsibility for this disagreement.Genius!Just please, please, please make it longer next time.Thanks as always,Your Loyal Fan
Very nice. Thanks for updating.
you never disappoint- thanks!
haha “She’s a petite blonde journalist who goes by the name of Alice with an unpronounceable surname that beings with a P..that is an excellent line!! loved it..but ooo lookin for ur next
The Hackster continues to be the master. Please repair some more, I love reading your stories.