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A Few Small Repairs – Chapter 11
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“I don’t want this to change things, T” Bette said evenly while her eyes focused on the expanse of white ceiling above their bed. She felt Tina roll over to look at her.
“Well it’s a bit late for that now” Tina replied incredulously.
“It doesn’t have to, we don’t have to let it make everything different.”
“Are you actually listening to what you’re saying?” Tina questioned “Everything will be different, everything.” Tina’s voice trailed off as her mind focused on the enormity of what was happening to them. They’d been here before but somehow, this time, it felt so unfamiliar.
Bette took a deep breath and released it slowly as she tried to calm the butterflies in her stomach. Her mind questioned their choices. Had they made the right decision? She tried to formulate an alternate plan, just in case they had gotten it wrong but she knew there was no way out of this. If it was wrong, if she wasn’t ready, then it was already too late.
Tina watched as Bette’s eyes darted back and forth across the ceiling, she winced slightly when she saw Bette’s brow crease with worry and wished she was privy to her lover’s thoughts.
“Are you scared?” Tina asked in a voice that was barely more than a whisper.
Bette bit her lip to stop the lie that almost instinctively flew out of her mouth. She had always sought to protect her wife but in more recent times had learned the hard way that protecting someone from the truth is usually a recipe for lies and deceit.
“I’m terrified” Bette admitted “And I’m not sure that I’ve ever felt more alive.”
Tina smiled slightly at her wife’s reply.
“I love you.” Tina gently reminded her partner “We’ll work this out. We’ll take it one day at a time.”
“Do you think we’reready?” Bette quietly questioned as she turned on her side and gazed into Tina’s eyes. She watched and waited as Tina thought through her answer.
“I’m not sure that there’s such a thing.”
“Do you think that we made the right decision?” Bette questioned. All of a sudden it seemed too fast, too rushed. Had they rushed in? Had they made a mistake? God, what if they’d made a mistake?
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Simply Beautiful.
Beautiful story with a sweet ending. Thank you very much for sharing it with us.
Thank you for such a lovely and well written chapter. Please don’t let it be the last repair as there are so many more that are needed.
>She released the lower two buttons and pushed the material apart. Leaning in she laid a gentle kiss on Tina’s stomach> thank you for this. thanks also for this beautiful ending.
Thank you for this beautiful story. Good ending for a great story.
such a wonderful story, i’ve been following it from the beginning and it has been an amazing journey…can’t wait for something new from you
Absolutely wonderful. Beautifully written. Thank you.
well done, great conclusion to the story. look forward to more.
oh that was sooo lovely
Beautiful. Thank you.
That was wonderful. Thank you.
Thanks for the continuation of “YBIYRI”. I guess Bette making such a grand gesture made Tina realised that she really did want to carry the baby after all.
Very nice. I am glad you ended this like the way you did. I agree that this should continue under a different title.
Thanks for the story. I hope to see another from you.
Oh please don’t end this! I have always adored your B&T. I hope you will give us another wonderfully written B&T tale soon.
Hack you are so good. Your writing is full bodied and has varying degrees of emotion and complexities. I don’t realize how much I miss your writing until I read something you have written, and then I’m remember what perfection feels like. I know you are busy, but please come back to us soon, we obviously miss you.
wonderful beginning..and ends juz right. love this. hope another comin up soon?
Wow girl you are so amazing that was incredable. Thanks for telling it
perfectly done- thanks.
Such a pleasure to read your stories! Thank you so much for sharing.
HG, Thank you so, so much for this classic story. The eloquence and beauty that you created touched my heart and soul. I only hope that the muse will strike again and empassion you to craft another fabulous fan fiction that I will enjoy. Gratitude and appreciation. Your Loyal Fan. PS – Missing you already from this site.
OMG… :’-) this small repairs just makes the story so perfect! And the ending is so lovely! I do hope you are still around at least for knowing that your stories is heart warming and so touching! :-) thanks HackGirl!!