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A Final Dream – Chapter 10
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Bette Porter
After having taken care of her legs, I go back up. Her body responds, shifting every now and then and I am getting blistering hot between my legs.
I have to use all my power not to grin on her ass, and it’s killing me. I lower myself over her, taking her hair and getting it out of my way, so her neck is exposed. Before I know what I’m doing, I’m lowering my lips, hovering over her.
I lick my lips, the tension is building. I feel like I’m about to explode from desire.
Tina Kennard
My body suddenly is so tensed that I feel I’m going to explode. The goosebumps are even worse. I feel her approaching me.
Bette Porter
My lips are getting closer and just as I am about to give in to the temptation of kissing her pale skin, I hear the sound of my cellphone.
She looks up. “You can take it.”
Tina Kennard
I feel extreme disappointment. I was just making myself ready for the inevitable to happen and I still desire it, crave it with all my being. But she gets off me and I feel an empty whole inside me, I feel like a part of my body is cut off.
Bette Porter
I am confused about what was going to happen, how I let myself go there. I dry my hands with a towel, take my cellphone and open it. It’s a message from Carmen.
Had great time with Shane. Miss u. Love, Car.
I don’t reply. I close my cellphone and go back to Tina. I have to talk to Carmen later. I have feelings for her, but it doesn’t really compare with the blonde in front of me that wakes up so much in me, feelings I didn’t know existed before. She makes my heart go crazy.
Tina Kennard
As I feel her sitting back on me, the whole is filled and the part of my body is brought back. I sigh. What the hell is happening?
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dear god woman,how could u leave us there…..i have been waiting for this update all day, now its even worse!!!great job!!!!
That massage was H.O.T !!! Bette, you are in trouble!!!!!Great update!! I can’t wait for the next one ;)
Are you kidding me, you left us hanging here. Bette is gonna die.
What are you doing to us??? That was so hot and you can’t just leave it with a line like that, what’s going to happen??? PPS
Holy craa…p. Fuc….you my freaking heart is racing. Its like I am there. OMG, you can’t stop there, I mean I know they want it all extra special girlfriend/boyfriend free but they are teenagers for gods sake, they act now think later. Its way to hot of up in Bette’s room to stop now. Wheww….Waiting, Drooling for the next post!
(jaw on floor) You did NOT just leave it there!!???!! Oh goodness, something tells me it’s gonna be a long night before they can go and break up with their respective partners! ;) PPS…like today?!
Wow! To be so young Tina sure seems to know what she wants. They both feel it they need to just get it on so Bette can let Carm know what’s going on and Tina can let Gary down easy. PPS
Bette’s not the only one about to pass out…. geez! What a build up!
G – marvelous – simply marvelous. I think I bit my tongue everytime Tina opened her mouth. Wowzer! She sure knows how to tempt Bette. I can’t believe we have to wait for until tomorrow for the next chappie. You’re killing us – PPS!
OH.MY.GOD. please please please keep going! that massage was…. wow. sorry carmen, you belong with shane and Bette and Tina… wow. words. gone. help.
WOW ! That was FAbulous :D
Oh I’m sooo happy I didnnt read this untill just now.I have the good fortune of waiting for the follow up for less time than the poor souls who by now must experiencing quite a bit of twitching – nervous or other wise;-)
what a massage!!! HOT! very place to leave off! :)PPS
hoooo how can u left us like that??? hoo i cant believe it :) tina is great “i