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A Final Dream – Chapter 10
I am a straight girl and I have a boyfriend. Why does Bette make me feel this way? Does she feel the same? Is it me or do we really have a love between us that is so strong and undeniable, screaming for attention?
I need her to touch me, I need to feel her all over me. This massage has something so erotic and I realise the reason now. It’s something I have longed for for such a long time and Bette is the only person who can fulfill that longing.
She makes me feel so feminine. She handles me with such care. Her magic hands go all over my back, my legs. I want her to just rip my panties off and give my ass the same treatment. I move my body without being able to control it. A low moan escapes my mouth, I can’t stop it.
“Bette,” I whisper. “Bette.”
Bette Porter
I have to find my breath again as she says my name in a low voice that is sultry, but I bet she doesn’t know it. She has a boyfriend, Porter. But then why is she doing this to me? Why is she making these sounds, movements, if she doesn’t want me to touch her?
Without really knowing what I’m actually doing, I slip my hands under her panties. She lifts her ass and I think it’s a reaction of her body, something she can’t help. My hands slid off to the front, to her inner tighs and… down. I can’t do it. Not yet. I can’t touch her like that now, it has to be more special. I kiss her lower back and inhale her scent, mixed with the scent of the massage oil. My head goes up again. Her hair is still to the side. I lick behind her ear and she purrs, my heart beats wildly.
“Tina,” I manage to say. I feel like I’m about to cry because of the intense emotions all of this is causing. My hands are now roaming her sides, sliding under her, massaging her belly. I have to stop them from going up, which is really hard, because they seem to have a mind of their own.
I get my hands from under body and go back to innocently massaging her back. She turns her head and see the tears in her eyes.
“What’s the matter?” I ask, frightened. “Did I hurt you?”
“No,” she replies.
“I’m so sorry, I- I just… I didn’t – I’m so” I get my hands off her. You went way out of line, Porter, and you damn well know it.
“It felt… great. Like nothing I’ve ever felt before.”
“I’m so sorry, Tina.”
“Don’t be.”
Tina Kennard
I know that Gary could never do this to me, could never move this in me. My panties are soaking and I’m quite sure I’m dripping wet. I want her to turn me around and just fuck me senseless, but I know it’s not going to happen. Bette Porter would make our first time special.
But does Bette Porter want me? What are you, stupid? Of course she does, look at where her hands went!
“Kiss me,” I say, barely audible.
Bette Porter
“I-I think we shouldn’t be doing this.” I say it with so much remorse. I already went too far and I don’t want to cheat on Carmen. But I know that I can’t go on with her. She’s great, but she’s not Tina.
“It’s late, why don’t we go to bed?” I ask Tina. “I’ll get you some pyjamas.”
Tina Kennard
She pretends she didn’t hear the last part of what I said and it hurts, but I know why she does that. When she offers me pyjamas, I know what to do. My heart is pounding in my chest, racing. I feel my body trembling, my stomach muscles contracting. I open my mouth and say it.
Bette Porter
I’m already off the bed and to my closet when she says it.
“I prefer to sleep naked,” she says. I think I’m going to pass out.
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(39 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
dear god woman,how could u leave us there…..i have been waiting for this update all day, now its even worse!!!great job!!!!
That massage was H.O.T !!! Bette, you are in trouble!!!!!Great update!! I can’t wait for the next one ;)
Are you kidding me, you left us hanging here. Bette is gonna die.
What are you doing to us??? That was so hot and you can’t just leave it with a line like that, what’s going to happen??? PPS
Holy craa…p. Fuc….you my freaking heart is racing. Its like I am there. OMG, you can’t stop there, I mean I know they want it all extra special girlfriend/boyfriend free but they are teenagers for gods sake, they act now think later. Its way to hot of up in Bette’s room to stop now. Wheww….Waiting, Drooling for the next post!
(jaw on floor) You did NOT just leave it there!!???!! Oh goodness, something tells me it’s gonna be a long night before they can go and break up with their respective partners! ;) PPS…like today?!
Wow! To be so young Tina sure seems to know what she wants. They both feel it they need to just get it on so Bette can let Carm know what’s going on and Tina can let Gary down easy. PPS
Bette’s not the only one about to pass out…. geez! What a build up!
G – marvelous – simply marvelous. I think I bit my tongue everytime Tina opened her mouth. Wowzer! She sure knows how to tempt Bette. I can’t believe we have to wait for until tomorrow for the next chappie. You’re killing us – PPS!
OH.MY.GOD. please please please keep going! that massage was…. wow. sorry carmen, you belong with shane and Bette and Tina… wow. words. gone. help.
WOW ! That was FAbulous :D
Oh I’m sooo happy I didnnt read this untill just now.I have the good fortune of waiting for the follow up for less time than the poor souls who by now must experiencing quite a bit of twitching – nervous or other wise;-)
what a massage!!! HOT! very place to leave off! :)PPS
hoooo how can u left us like that??? hoo i cant believe it :) tina is great “i